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白色翅膀UID: 139024

98"Colleges and universities should offer more courses on popular music, film, advertising, and television because contemporary culture has much greater relevance for students than do arts and literature of the past."


Who are most close friends of the young besides their schoolmates, neighbours,and their parents?Pop music,movies,televison program and even the endless advertisements.A survey among the nationwide students in the university, presented in recent New York Post, 59% of the survey taker said that pop music and movies are the first choice in their spare time ,while 37% of them claimed that they enjoying watching various kinds of advertisements, especially ones on TV.The young people nowadays are tight-connected to these fashionable things.However ,the trends are too hard to expect and to generalized in a organized system which can be used for education in the college and university.Meanwhile, the traditional courses , such as literature and art,are still playing an important role in students’ daily life.

Rarely is there a scientific teaching system can be formed which is suitable for giving a course,and perhaps a series of courses in the school is not the best pathway to learn something or the real of these prevailing subjects.” You just cannot anticipate which kind of  films the audience will prefer next year,even you succeed today.”Steven Sodeberg,the best director,announced that after winning the Oscar in 2001.In these popular field ,so many interacted  factors are there that it is difficult to commits caussal relationships among them .Thus, it seems unwise to give a hasty generalization about the things we are not convinced.Furthermore, since the students may listen to the POP every day, watch the television program,go to the cinema every week,and catch the Ads along their driving way,much more can be learned in their daily life.They have get a mass of the kowneldge without any notice,which impess them most and is difficult to forget.

Moreover, literature and art ,the essence of human’s culture, should be given greater concern ,rather than be ignored.Although the form of the literature and art keeps changing from century to century,the spirit ,indeed maintains to great extent,such as the adoration to nature ,the longing for love and the gaiety in life,which is always served as a nutrient to man’s sour.Besides, the frontiers of the traditional humanites are being broken through because of the progess ofthe science and technology.Science fiction,on-line fiction are new member in this big family,which is prevailing among the young.

Adimittedly, the limited courses in this hot area draw a number of students to the class, although they often fails to give actuate information and knoweldge.Whereas, students may have a lot of fun ,as a measure of relaxation.”I can see many awarded movies in Modern Film class,”Matt Futtington,a student of Leeds University said,”now I found myself more interested in movies”Thus, these courses are capable to make school life more colorful,however,are not needed in a grear amount.

In general, the course about Pop music, film ,advertising and television will not present   systematic practical knoweldge,as science , literature and art ,while these subjects can provide students a better and thorough view to the world around us.

realturtleUID: 69047

98"Colleges and universities should offer more courses on popular music, film, advertising, and television because contemporary culture has much greater relevance for students than do arts and literature of the past."


Who are most close friends of the young besides their schoolmates, neighbours,and their parents?Pop music,movies,televison program and even the endless advertisements.A survey among the nationwide students in the university, presented in recent New York Post, 59% of the survey taker said that pop music and movies are the first choice in their spare time ,while 37% of them claimed that they enjoying watching various kinds of advertisements, especially ones on TV.The young people nowadays are tight-connected to these fashionable things.However ,the trends are too hard to expect and to generalized in a organized system which can be used for education in the college and university.Meanwhile, the traditional courses , such as literature and art,are still playing an important role in students’ daily life.这段你似乎打字有点匆忙？^_^

Rarely is there a scientific teaching system can be formed which is suitable for giving a course,and perhaps a series of courses in the school is not the best pathway to learn something or the real of these prevailing subjects.” You just cannot anticipate which kind of films the audience will prefer next year,even you succeed today.”Steven Sodeberg,the best director,announced that after winning the Oscar in 2001.In these popular field ,so many interacted factors are there that it is difficult to commits caussal relationships among them .Thus, it seems unwise to give a hasty generalization about the things we are not convinced.Furthermore, since the students may listen to the POP every day, watch the television program,go to the cinema every week,and catch the Ads along their driving way,much more can be learned in their daily life.They have get a mass of the kowneldge without any notice,which impress them most and is difficult to forget.这段是说流行的趋势多变，不好把握，而且学生接触它们的机会多，因此没必要另外开课。

Moreover, literature and art ,the essence of human’s culture, should be given greater concern ,rather than be ignored.Although the form of the literature and art keeps changing from century to century,the spirit ,indeed maintains to great extent,such as the adoration to nature ,the longing for love and the gaiety in life,which is always served as a nutrient to man’s sour.Besides, the frontiers of the traditional humanites are being broken through because of the progess of the science and technology.Science fiction,on-line fiction are new member in this big family,which is prevailing among the young.这段写得不错！我喜欢你的排比和例子

Adimittedly, the limited courses in this hot area draw a number of students to the class, although they often fails to give actuate information and knoweldge.Whereas, students may have a lot of fun ,as a measure of relaxation.”I can see many awarded movies in Modern Film class,”Matt Futtington,a student of Leeds University said,”now I found myself more interested in movies”Thus, these courses are capable to make school life more colorful,however,are not needed in a greater amount.这段可能需要更详细的论述一下，为何它们not needed in a greater amount,它们既然使学校生活colorful些？有上面的理由，感觉似乎还不够充分。

In general, the course about Pop music, film ,advertising and television will not present systematic practical knoweldge,as science , literature and art ,while these subjects can provide students a better and thorough view to the world around us.

嗯，我觉得为什么流行文化不值得开很多课还有个理由，就是流行文化没有经过时间沉淀，不如过去的文化经过时间筛选，因而不经典，不一定都好。^_^

alexandra8204UID: 138807

Who are (the) most close friends of the young besides their schoolmates, neighbours,and their parents?Pop music,movies,televison program and even the endless advertisements.A survey among the nationwide students in the university, presented in recent New York Post, 59% of the survey taker said that pop music and movies are the first choice in their spare time ,while 37% of them claimed that they enjoying(are enjoying/enjoy) watching various kinds of advertisements, especially ones on TV.The young people nowadays are tight-connected to these fashionable things.However ,the trends are too hard to expect (or be expected?)and to (be) generalized in a(an) organized system which can be used for education in the college and university.Meanwhile, the traditional courses , such as literature and art,are still playing an important role in students’ daily life.（句子不是太一目了然 而且最好第一段尽量不要烦语法错误吧）

Rarely is there a scientific teaching system (that?)can be formed (?)which is suitable for giving a course(不太读的懂),and perhaps a series of courses in the school is not the best pathway to learn something or the real of these prevailing subjects.” You just cannot anticipate which kind of films the audience will prefer next year,even you succeed today.”Steven Sodeberg,the best director,announced that after winning the Oscar in 2001.In these popular field ,so many interacted factors are there that it is difficult to commits(commit) caussal(?) relationships among them .Thus, it seems unwise to give a hasty generalization about the things we are not convinced(这个从句好象有点问题？).Furthermore, since the students may listen to the POP every day, watch the television program,go to the cinema every week,and catch the Ads along their driving way,much more can be learned in their daily life.They have get a mass of the kowneldge without any notice,which impess(?) them most and is difficult to forget.(开始是说没有一个特定的教育系统是特别科学的 明天的东西谁也不知道 而且似乎流行的这些方式学生接受的更快 记的更牢)

Moreover, literature and art ,the essence of human’s culture, should be given greater concern ,rather than be ignored.Although the form of the literature and art keeps changing from century to century,the spirit ,indeed maintains to (a) great extent,such as the adoration to nature ,the longing for love and the gaiety in life,which is always served as a nutrient(nutrition) to man’s sour(soul).Besides, the frontiers of the traditional humanites are being broken through because of the progess ofthe（？） science and technology.Science fiction,on-line fiction are new member in this big family,which is prevailing among the young.（永恒的艺术不应忽略 因为都有共性 后面科幻小说的例子不太明白）

Adimittedly, the limited courses in this hot area draw a number of students to the class, although they often fails to give actuate information and knoweldge.Whereas, students may have a lot of fun ,as a measure of relaxation.”I can see many awarded movies in Modern Film class,”Matt Futtington,a student of Leeds University said,”now I found myself more interested in movies”Thus, these courses are capable to make school life more colorful,however,are not needed in a grear（？） amount.（吸引的同学的兴趣）

In general, the course about Pop music, film ,advertising and television will not present systematic practical knoweldge,as science , literature and art ,while these subjects can provide students a better and thorough view to the world around us.

要尽量避免语法错误 单词错误，错误不少，尤其开头出现和中心句出现就不好了。整篇觉得几段逻辑联系不是很大，希望观点能够更明确些吧。呵呵，个人意见，竟供参考 加油啊大家:)

白色翅膀UID: 139024

谢谢，单词错误，哎，我的WORD 没有纠错功能，不过我以后会知己改好的
谢谢你们的鼓励，让本来想睡觉的我，又振作起来，ALEXANDER，我喜欢你的签名，孙燕姿的歌吧：）

白色翅膀UID: 139024

错了，发了后哼哼才知是小莫的，汗。。。。。

alexandra8204UID: 138807

haha 看了你前一个留言刚想打SIGH+CRY 哈哈
恩 最喜欢的KAREN的歌 上进啊:)
PS 名字和图片都好纯啊 象个仙女 哈哈 我大学最好朋友也是武汉的 所以倍感亲切:)

白色翅膀UID: 139024

我是那种不讲话不动的时候大家都认为是淑女，
上课作实验做工作时大家都认为是猛女，（不是牛人）
熟了以后，平时在宿舍大家都认为是小女生

白色翅膀UID: 139024

我发现看的人很多但没人评，大家不要受我和楼上MM的影响

blake_wangUID: 9871

我来评分：白色翅膀de image很古典，alexandra8204 de pose很现代。

白色翅膀UID: 139024

blake,我还以为你评什么呢^_^

paisleyUID: 64183

最初由 白色翅膀 发布
[B]谢谢，单词错误，哎，我的WORD 没有纠错功能[/B]

我想应该不会。再低版本的WORD都肯定有这个功能的。问题可能是，你从TXT直接复制粘贴文章过去，WORD里一开始不会显示任何红红绿绿的东西，你要注意稍微再加几个字符，如空格啊，ENTER键啊，然后就会显示出来了。

另外再说一句，一篇文章有两个人改，已经是非常不错的待遇了。如果将话题集中于讨论文章本身而不是牵扯开去的话，那么相关的回复也会更多一些

白色翅膀UID: 139024

哦，我的word设置中语法部分是灰色的，不可用啊
谢谢你中肯的意见，收到