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College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs

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It is hard to imagine that a student can focus their energy on such subject which she or he has unpleasant associations with. But when the boring subjects will provide them with more opportunities, which may put them in a favorable position in the future job markets, should they take such so-called “better future” subject? Of course, when it comes to the choice between interesting subject and better-job subject , there are always a host of different opinions held by different individuals in varying fields. Should college students be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them instead of the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs? Admittedly, many students may fully convinced that future job is the most important factor should be taken into account when choose the subject. However, the best teacher of people, the interest, will contributes directly to a person’s future success.

Actually, a hot subject such as financial, economic, laws, etc. to some extent, leads to a decent and well-paid job, which most students desired to have, especially for those in poverty who live under heavy family responsibilities. Choose an apropos major, for many impecunious students, is the shortest path to change their lives and improve their families. On the contrary, a student of an out-of-the-way field like dinosaur will find it almost impossible to find a good job after graduate. Therefore, future job opportunity is demanded and cannot be obviated when select projects.

However, destiny willed it so. Just as the stock markets, no one can predict precisely what will happen after 4 years when students graduate. Would the former hot subject still remain thrive? Can all the students from such field possess a nice work or not? Are there any big events happen, such as 2008’s financial tsunami, which made the economic and financial students hard to find a job in the Wall Street? In light of all these uncertainties above, even the most experienced educational institutes cannot firmly convinced you that which project will surely lead to job after you graduate.

Consequently, it is advisable for college students to pursue subject that interest them rather than speculate which subject will lead to a better future job opportunity. In addition, it is indisputable that a person’s interest on some subject can contribute directly to increase the time and effort she or he paid to such subject, so that they are more access to be extraordinary in their fields. As an old saying goes: All roads lead to Rome. The real opportunity for success lies within the person and not in the field, every subject produces its own master. It is easy for student who is excellent enough to find a good job even the graduate come from the most unpopular major.

Furthermore, it is totally erroneous to equate subjects that interest student with the courses that seem unlikely to lead to jobs. Instead, both above in general are consistent. Indeed, many interesting projects also lead to a good future job. For instance, an imaginative person would like to take project of advertising design where is the main arena to demonstrate its talent, the same as the charismatic person to choose management or politics. All the projects mentioned above not only meet students’ interest, but also likely to lead to jobs.

In summary, although there may exist alternative between interesting subject and better-job subject sometimes, in most situation they are coincidence and both satisfied. If contradiction occurs, no matter what subject you pursue, just follow your heart and do your best to be outstanding, the success (a good job) will be just round the corner.

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菜鸟帮顶，同527，今天开始写第一篇:mad:

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我觉得Consequently那一段作为小总结，有点偏长，字数可以让给其他论据段。

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第一次写花了将近1h。。拼死拼活写了450.。。

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1# It ishard to imagine that a student can focus their energy on such subject which sheor he has unpleasant associations with. But when the boring subjects willprovide them with more opportunities, which may put them in a favorableposition in the future, job markets, should they take such so-called “betterfuture” subject? Of course, when it comes to the choice between interestingsubject and better-job subject, there are always a host of different opinionsheld by different individuals in varying fields. Should college students beencouraged to pursue subjects that interest them instead of the courses thatseem most likely to lead to jobs?(直接重复题目会不会觉得有些烦呀)Admittedly, many students may fully convinced that future job is the mostimportant factor should be taken into account when choose the subject. However,the best teacher of people, the interest, will contributes directly to aperson’s future success. （到底是同意还是不同意？观点TS不明显）
Actually, a hot subject suchas financial, economic, laws, etc. to some extent, leads to a decent andwell-paid job, which most students desired to have, especially for those inpoverty who live under heavy family responsibilities. Choose an apropos major,for many impecunious students, is the shortest path to change their lives andimprove their families. On the contrary, a student of an out-of-the-way fieldlike dinosaur will find it almost impossible to find a good job after graduate.Therefore, future job opportunity is demanded and cannot be obviated when selectprojects.
However, destiny willed itso. Just as the stock markets, no one can predict precisely what will happenafter 4 years when students graduate. Would the former hot subject still remainthrive? Can all the students from such field possess a nice work or not? Arethere any big events happen, such as 2008’s financial tsunami, which made theeconomic and financial students hard to find a job in the Wall Street? In lightof all these uncertainties above, even the most experienced educational institutescannot firmly convinced you that which project will surely lead to job afteryou graduate.
Consequently, it is advisablefor college students to pursue subject that interest them rather than speculatewhich subject will lead to a better future job opportunity.（逻辑上，前面说的是热门专业的前景也不是确定的，然而这个并不是推出以兴趣选择专业的条件。所以前面两段的作用应该是辅助，更重要的还是要在兴趣本身找，因此我感觉前面有些长显得重点不突出） In addition, it is indisputable thata person’s interest on some subject can contribute directly to increase thetime and effort she or he paid to such subject, so that they are more access tobe extraordinary in their fields. As an old saying goes: All roads lead toRome. The real opportunity for success lies within the person and not in thefield, every subject produces its own master. It is easy for student who isexcellent enough to find a good job even the graduate come from the mostunpopular major.（这个观点好）
Furthermore it is totallyerroneous to equate subjects that interest student with the courses that seemunlikely to lead to jobs. Instead, both above in general are consistent.Indeed, many interesting projects also lead to a good future job. For instance,an imaginative person would like to take project of advertising design where isthe main arena to demonstrate its talent, the same as the charismatic person tochoose management or politics. All the projects mentioned above not only meetstudents’ interest, but also likely to lead to jobs.
In summary, although theremay exist alternative between interesting subject and better-job subjectsometimes, in most situation they are coincidence and both satisfied. Ifcontradiction occurs, no matter what subject you pursue, just follow your heartand do your best to be outstanding, the success (a good job) will be just roundthe corner.


感觉观点不够突出。

语言上再简洁一些会增加文章的流畅性

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1# xierenrape
楼主，我觉得你的作文写的不错，我借鉴了你的思想也写了一篇，请回拍之~~
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1365354-1-1.html