Issue11(国际类)，这几天感觉45分钟内怎么只能写400字，晕倒！～～

玲珑女UID: 142984

11"All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems."（国际类）

Society, a group which is made up of various people, will exist of many persistent social problems. As human in the world, all nations' citizens should help support the development of a global university which is designed to search methods of solving the world's social problems.

First of all, many problems happened in different fields of world have the same characteristic. Every country existed those problems should construct one global university to solve those problems rather than pay plentiful money to research the settlement to solve problems individually. For instance, SARS, the most popular epidemic pneumonia which occurred in the world in 2003, has killed thousands of people's life and has been controlled by cooperation of all the world people temporarily nevertheless the thorough solution will be hardly able to find in the short period. So facing to the illness such as SARS, all nations in the world should help support one global university designed to engage students in the process of solving those illness alike SARS.

In addition, there are many problems in the world that they can hardly be solved only by one or two country, such as war, pollution. To solve those problems of society, there should be many countries attending so that the sides of war can sit face to face to solve their problems peacefully. Furthermore, pollution, the other social problem in the world increasingly, will also do harm to many high-technological countries. Those countries which have these problems should cooperate to face these social problems. To construct one global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems should be one good solution.

Certainly, not all social problems should be solved by the global university of solving the world's most persistent social problems. Every country has their own political characteristic and the solution of their social problems will have their trait. For example, the prostitute will be looked as lawless in China nonetheless they will be legal in many other countries. Facing the social problem like these, we can hardly give one criterion or solution to order every country which has these social problems.

To sum up, for most persistent social problems besides some problems which will has own political characteristic and should be solved by their own methods, all nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving these social problems.

感觉该说的都说完了，其实时间还多出来了几分钟，可是我就是不知道再如何增加几句，25号就要考了，郁闷！！！：（

meloncollieUID: 138374

好像题目的后半部分未有怎么谈到，可以谈谈作为学生，those most urgent global  issues 和他们之间的关系。

dreamflyerUID: 21967

可以考虑补充例子。你几乎都是在说理没有例子，当然显得空洞而且单薄。
时间可能不是很够了，主要找找热门题目的例子吧。以前有人总结过贴过的，自己找找看啊，，，或者看看老外280篇里面相关题目的例子。

sweetaromaUID: 145181

Dear, I do not see much to be improved, I mean, according to my command. While, one small bug may need your attention---the first sentence reads not smooth. Make a double check, as the opening always gives a heavy wallop. Good luck. By the way, the coming Thursday is my due date, while, feel nothing but insufficient...Anyway, play the game at our best!