【Daily Writing作文特训小组】 by etako0

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6月23日 作业

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement.
People who cannot accept the criticism from others will not be successful at working in a group.

  When working in a group, the most valued quality for the group members would be the ability of teamwork. That includes we should be capable of trust and listening to our group fellows and accept their criticism   when necessary. Those who turn a deaf ear to others’ criticism and stick to themselves can’t be successful as a group member, for criticism would be a reminder for us to be conscious of our method, as well as accepting them would help to maintain a good relationship among the group members.

  Everybody in the group enjoys others’ nodding assent, but nobody can’t be right forever. Refusing criticism often prevent us reflect our method and correct our shortcomings. My friend used to be in a journalist group of 6 people in the radio station, and was criticized by one of his team members of editing their radio program with a outdated software, my friend used to good at this software and turned a cold should to his fellow journalist, it turns out one day the software collapsed, the work end up being totally deleted by the unstable system and my friend couldn’t regret more. Had him accept the criticism, he could practice a new skill as well as save the group work from unintended damage. Each of us are limited in experience and knowledge, working in a group can help make up.  If we open to criticism, we’re opening to a broader range of wisdom and attaining comprehensive thinking, as well as our ability to handle conflict, which together would ultimately help us to succeed in the group.

   Moreover, to be successful as part of a group, we should have a solid relationship with our fellow members. I used lead a team of sales case presentation, one of them complained about my examples was irrelevant with the case, I looked my example and accept his criticism and found out he is more attentive to help the team to gather information, our presentation case won the first prize at school. Had I ignored his criticism, I could never be the lead of No.1. I realized that by Listening and accepting their criticism we show respect, making the group more united to realize a common goal.

  In sum, if we aspire to success in a group, listening and accepting criticism of others is essential, for it can both develop themselves as well as attain a good relationship in the group. On the contrary, those who can’t accept criticism would fail in personal progress and winning fellows, thus can’t be success in a group in all.

etako0UID: 3331996

再顶;P

etako0UID: 3331996

加油

etako0UID: 3331996

怎么现在还没有改好的呢

lic158UID: 2972709

0623作业已改，晚了点不好意思，请楼主过目~

etako0UID: 3331996

没事 我在发帖攒分数

etako0UID: 3331996

:lol  innocuous  deception

this doesn't discount sb...

etako0UID: 3331996

lic158 发表于 2012-6-24 23:10
0623作业已改，晚了点不好意思，请楼主过目~

谢谢批改，对了 文中那个是我拼错了 ，应该是turn a cold shoulder... 不理睬

etako0UID: 3331996

发一些好用的句子来攒分

etako0UID: 3331996

Spent many laborious hours on the project.  a immense, laborious task

doing sth is a slow , laborious job...time consuming,

His books are written in a laborious style.他写书文笔艰涩。
His anxious and laborious efforts were likely, at last, to be crowned with the happiest success.

speak give gravity...Neil cannot muster the courage to do

etako0UID: 3331996

The only thing that will save the company is a thorough shake-up of the way it is run.  彻底改变其经营方式。

lic158UID: 2972709

etako0 发表于 2012-6-25 06:54
谢谢批改，对了 文中那个是我拼错了 ，应该是turn a cold shoulder... 不理睬

哦，明了~学习了~

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24号的在这里

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6/23作文已改，楼主过目。抱歉有些晚了。
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shendaisy0702 发表于 2012-6-25 21:33
6/23作文已改，楼主过目。抱歉有些晚了。

谢谢daisy,  那里面的method应该是我们的做事思维的方式方法吧  我也不知道这样用合适否 冏