0814作文：Do you agree of disagree with the following statement? People are noweasier to become educated than in the past?
Disagree
1. In technologyo 2. Not the knowledge about thebook but the life is more important impersonal relationship pastunite stands out 3.disdain the kind of job like cleaner
I agree with the part of the statement that it seems tobe easily educated than before. But we cannot ignore that there are manycomponents of the education but not only the knowledge from the book. And Ialso think that the statement cannot make us convince (convinceus 这样比较地道简洁点吧 )to someextent. There are several reasons to discuss. To begin with, to be admitted, the education seems to beeasily for us in some aspect like technology. As the fast development of thetechnology, there are thousands ways for us to obtain the knowledge. We canmake use of the sources on the internet to start our study. Unlike before wehave（had） to have a certain book to learn, itis more convenient for us to learn in today’s life if you have a iphone in yourpocket. You can get what you want from the google website in your mobiledevise. What’s more, you even can have a class at home instead of attendingschool because of the online-education. So the technology brings us theconvenience for education. However, in spite of (in spite of尽管意思 前后要有转折)the education in school, we should also not（also should not） ignore theeducation in life such as the relationship between the people. Is it moreeasily for us to educate（be educated） thanbefore? The answer is absolutely not. Although our life is not so colorful astoday’s life, there is an important quality that is unity. In the old time, weare (were)not affluence but we are(were) pleasing to help each other to get out ofthe trouble. However, what an impersonal relationship between the people it istoday! There is a prominent example, if there is a old woman fall (falling) down in the street, please don’t touch herunless you are a very rich man. This is very ridiculous. The society isadvanced than before, but the heart is colder and colder. The condition ischange(changing) to an impersonal society and itis more difficult for your parents to educate you should be a kind man. Theonly thing your parent will tell you is that taking care of yourself and don’tpay attention to others’. What’s more, some job in today’s life even suffers theabuse. You must find there are some people who are reluctant to study but theyhave to go to the school everyday, because their mother tells them that youwill be a cleaner and make less money to be alive if you don’t work hard.Obviously, this kind of job suffers some discriminations( discrimination 是不可数名词 直接 discrimination就行). However, I remember the primeminister Zhou said to a cleaner we are not different but just the division ofthe society labor. At that time, everyone contributes to the society in orderto make the nation better. In the past, it is more easily for us to be educatedto make a contribution because of the “lag behind”. But today, it is moredifficult for us to be educated to devote ourselves to help others because ofthe “progress”. Maybe we cannot blame the lack of the education in lifeaspect because we are influenced much by the large society. But we still shouldpay attention to it. So we cannot consider it is more easier to be educatedthan before. | 
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发表于 2012-8-13 18:19:40
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