【独立+綜合】OTAKULADY宅阿姨9.2冲刺作业贴

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开始抱佛脚的人生

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一次上传习作，206w,求狠批！！（抖M属性爆发）七夕改文快乐~

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The lecturer mentions the new rule of the archaeology in Britain. The new guard line change the whole archaeology environment and the situations written in the reading last no more.

First of all, the guard line requires the construction projects to take the responsibility to exam the site before building. Examination must be carried out before the construction in order to see if there exists valuable artifacts. Once the answer is yes, the developer must protect the archaeologically valuable sites and help to excavate the artifacts as well. The builder should promise not to continue constructing until all the artifacts are unearthed.

As the duty is taken by the builders, the financial problem is worked out at the same time. The builder should pay for the examination and other cost during the excavating progress. Hence the financial burden of the government is shared by the builder too.

In addition, with more archaeology procedure the builder should run through, there are increasing paid jobs in this science field. Positions are provided according to different stage of the archaeology work, like making plan of the excavation, writing archaeological reports and articles etc. AS a result, the number of the workers in archaeology rises to the top in history

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otakulady 发表于 2012-8-23 20:56
一次上传习作，206w,求狠批！！（抖M属性爆发）七夕改文快乐~

TPO16

你的8.23独立写作呢？

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已经看了

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fisiksnju 发表于 2012-8-24 08:40
你的8.23独立写作呢？

来晚了不好意思


agree or disagree :An effective leader should try to make others feel that they are part of decision making.

As we all known that, an effective leader should not only promote the working efficiency but also increase the spirit of the members. Hence, I could not agree more with the argument that an effective leader should make others feel that they are part of decision.

To begin with, self-belonging contributes to the productivity. Once team members have an acknowledge that they are part of the project and the organization, they will make efforts to work hard and contribute themselves to it. Via checking and considering team members’ ideas and opinion, whether they will be denied or passed at last, the massage of leader that everyone is equally important to the team can be convey to others. Otherwise, team members will feel that they are ignored by the leader if the leader makes a decision independently.

In addition, via listening to different opinion of members, the decision will be made more reasonable and throughout. It’s a common sense that different people will hold different opinions. Taking others’ opinions into account helps the leader to build up a whole view of the issue to deal with. Besides, some may dispute and criticize the suggestion the leader have already made and this let the final decision more critical.

However, efficiency should not be given up to satisfy each member’s desire. It is true that it take more time to reach an agreement among numbers of people. Therefore, a wise leader should have an excellent control on the time of discussion. What’s more, since contradict ideas will be given by different people, conflict may break out. So, it also requires the leader to have the ability to coordinate entire group.

In sum, I suggest and approve that a leader should make others feel their opinion have been taken into consideration. In addition, an efficient leader should arm with the ability to make the team productive and harmonious.

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mengliuqd 发表于 2012-8-24 11:02
已经看了

谢谢批改，非常中肯，等你的习作:D

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https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1423755-2-1.html这里面17楼是我的习作 8月22的

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otakulady 发表于 2012-8-24 20:57
来晚了不好意思

otakulady的独立写作 revised by fisiksnju.doc (29.5 KB, 下载次数: 13)

2012-8-24 21:25:26 上传

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改好了，LZ加油！！

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fisiksnju 发表于 2012-8-24 21:25
改好了，LZ加油！！

谢谢修改，很受用，我的确需要列子来丰满一下文章:)（PS，我其实大学还是算半个文科吧，商科类）
PPS： throughtout那里应该是thoughtful,写出了非常恶心的错误。。。

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mengliuqd 发表于 2012-8-24 21:09
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1423755-2-1.html这里面17楼是我的习作 8月22的

OK，我去看看

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改好啦~

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TOPIC:The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read the newspapers and magazines from that country.

There are plenty of choices  for you to know a foreign country, newspaper and magazines, Internet, TV etc. Some may hold the opinion that newspaper and magazines will be the favorable choice, however I can’t approve it entirely.

Of course, newspapers and magazine can offer you the latest information about a country. All the news events, from politics to live and healthy, are provided to meet readers’ requirement, who used to be local citizens. That is to say, their articles are written in a way based on the assumption that their readers, mostly local citizens, have already know their country well. In sum, newspapers and magazines are not reasonable methods to know a country deeply and completely.

If you want to learn about a foreign country, you should understand their culture and history. For example, you may read an article about the new decree that admit homosexual marriage in United State, nevertheless, it’s hard for you to understand what this means to Americans. The reason is that: you have no idea how homosexual people have been through. And the best way for you to understand it is to read some reference about it in the American history. As a result, you will really learn something about the country not just accepted the information passively.

Newspapers and magazines are the ways people get new massages from. So if you want to know some traditional ones, which is very essential to learn about a foreign country, it’s definitely not enough. Personally, I recommend reading some classic works or knowing them at least. For instance, Walden, one of the famous books that influences American, you should know that is about a new-established thinking style and why it’s important in American history. As modern technology developed, ways for us to access classic masterpieces are increasing. Library is no longer the single choice to get the source you want, instead, Internet serves with a more abounding storage of information in a more convenient way. Online encyclopedias are so popular and almost all information about the country can you find on it.

In addition, other media, like TV shows, still lies there as a choice to learn about the native citizens daily live. As for me, I like watching  sit-coms, a popular comedy TV style in American. And Modern Family is one of my favorite. It is a comedy TV show produced by ABC TV station about the daily lives of three American middle class families. You can enjoy yourself watching the show with laughs and get to understand their lifestyle in the meantime. Taking one of the family in the story as an example, as a classic American middle class family, Phil, the father, earns the money for the family and Claire, the typical housewife, takes the responsibility to look after three kids. That is how American really live. By watching TV shows, movies or novels, you can learn more about the foreign country.

To sum up, newspapers and magazines are not the best way to learn about the foreign country. As I have mentioned above, it just one of the methods you can get some latest information on. To know the foreign country better, you should know the culture and history via different reference.

540w,這次寫超時間了。。差遠了

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otakulady 发表于 2012-8-28 10:00
TOPIC:The best way to learn about a foreign country is to read the newspapers and magazines from tha ...

8-24 revised by frozen.doc (29 KB, 下载次数: 4)

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写的很好，自愧不如啊。

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已改~~~

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The lecturer disagrees with the reasons given in the reading passage. She thinks that fire is a natural phenomenon and the " let it burn" policy is fundamentally a good policy.

First, to repute the argument given in the reading that Yellowstone fires caused a huge damage, the lecturer say that the fire increase the plants diversity in fact. After the fire, there is more room for small plants to grow. Plants, which don't have a chance to grow before the fire, exist in a open and unshadedunshadow  earth.

Second, the writing passage suggests that animal will encounter a  difficult situation after the fire. However, the speaker implies that new plants and vegetation provide a more comfortable habitat for wildlife. The number of small animal, like rabbits, will rise with the small plants augrment as they are feed on the small plants. As result, animals with a large body size will benefits with a largre population of  preypredetors.

Finally, the article refers that the tourist will be effectedaffected as the fire destroyed the natural  scenerysence. Nonetheless, the speaker argues that big fires as Yellowstone fire are not usual and the environment will restore next year. So there will be no long time influence of the fire and the tourist can get back to normal soon.