口语2，弱弱的求指教~~~

irisyiranUID: 3258299

http://pan.baidu.com/share/link?shareid=9227&uk=554421449

不知道百度网盘能不能下载哦~~~？
大概多少分的水平完全无概念。。准备好了看要点说的 录了好几遍。。诶~
求指教啦

irisyiranUID: 3258299

哦题目是do u agree or disagree with the following statement: in order to be successful, a person must have a university degree?give details and examples in your response.

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百度网盘能用吗各位~~~:call:

秋雨荆州UID: 2903781

一个是刚开始的内容与主题的语速不一致，需要调整一下，我建议一开始的介绍讲慢一点。
there are other reasons之类的话比例有点大，导致观点有了两个，但是展开不够，没有supporting details。
另外语调方面稍微能够有些起伏就更好了

irisyiranUID: 3258299

秋雨荆州 发表于 2012-8-27 22:09
一个是刚开始的内容与主题的语速不一致，需要调整一下，我建议一开始的介绍讲慢一点。
there are other re ...

太感谢了！！
你觉得如果第二段改成second, a degree doesn't means one has enough experience to be successful. When facing two persons, one has a university degree, the other one has abundant experience, a lot of companies may choose the later one.
咋样捏？