独立作文 发帖 Tpo24 求指教！欢迎毒舌！

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也不发word了，直接贴在这里，方便看了。多谢各位指教！发现相比较独立写作，综合写作还比较麻烦，还要听写下听力内容，表示tpo24的综合写作第二个观点没听懂啊，就写了一句结论。。。。真是凄惨。


  I think I agree with that statement that encouraging their children to take a part-time job is the best way for parents to help their tennage children to prepare for their future life. And there are some reasons to name.

   First, it is very necessary for children to get prepared for their adult life. Nowadays, children have more pressures and competitions than childrens several decades ago. With the development of society and technology, in order to have a better life, teenage children should be well prepared for their future life. They must have their own abilities to show the world and get the responsibility of the world. As a result of that, they can better stand on their own and receive others respect. The society is very cruel, however it gives chances to everybody and it gives you time to get prepared.

  On the other hand, taking a part-time job can give children many important things. Firstly, it is not available if you just study at school and read your books. It is totally another way to get information and knowledge, and it is different from school. Secondly, it can give you something that is very precious. For example, you can get many practices which you can not abtain from school or family. Besides, you can also get some different and valuable experiences from this part-time job. It can help you a lot when you get a full-time job in your adult life. Obviously, you are not a totally freshman.

   What's more. By taking a part-time job, children can have more opportunities to face other people and cooperate with them. Which is called social skill. You must know that the best student in school may not be the most successful person in society. And a research shows that, some brillient students became common when they came to society because of their bad social skills. The ability to communicate with other people and the efficience of cooperate with other people are very crucial and sometimes very difficult to new employees.However, if children have already trained these skills when they take the part-time job, it will be much easier to adopt to the new job environment and have a better connection with surrounding people.

   Parents are the first teachers of their children, and of course they want their children to have a good life in their future. It may not be very successful, but it has to be less worries and pressures. There are also some other things parents can do, such as they can teach their children to have a good attitude towards world and they can train them to have a better tolerance of failure. However, taking a part-time job is very important for children, because they can have a big view of the society and have more chances to interact with the society.

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用google浏览器，刚发上去英文的作文立马给你翻译成中文还真刺激。。哈哈

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顶一个！一点点意见都可以啊！多谢多谢