【独立写作】汐二萌sunshine作业贴

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0927:“Do you agree or disagree with the following statement：People care more about public recognition than about money. Even if no more money is given, public recognition can still make people work harder.”

Asked what motivation will do to hard-working people, some sociologists may response: public recognition. But actually, I strongly believe that money is the issue that people care most in modern world.

To begin with, for grown-ups, they care money far more than the public recognition. The primary reason is that adults do not only take care of themselves, but also assume the responsibilities of their family. For instance, the one who have a stable and high-paying job must be efficient in work. It enables him to take advantages of communicating with his family frequently. His family will reside in the cosmopolitan city. As a result, the marvelous dwelling environment and elite education in private schools-which requires a dear tuition –allows his children to be well-cultivated and outstanding. In addition, when holidays are coming, he could afford the expense of travelling aboard with the family so that he could release his pressure in order to have a fresh start when he returns to the competitive company. Thus, without favorable salaries that could support their families, the adults would never devote to the company.

Furthermore, money enables nearly every dream of youth to come true. As the money plays a pivotal role in creating a bright future, the teenagers also care more about money. The best example to illustrate that is my cousin’s own experience. My aunt is a single mother, it means she gives all her love to his son but the sufficient educational fund for him to continue his study. My cousin, a student who equips affluent knowledge and full curiosity of learning, relatively desires to last his study. Since he aware this, he began to do some part-time job, such as washing dishes in the restaurant, cleaning house for neighbors and so on. Consequently, my cousin gets into a top university. He retained the habit of doing part-time jobs. While he was in the college, he usually corrects the paper for his professor or works as a librarian in the campus. He sometimes sends some money to my aunt. The money that he earn to support his educational cost changed his life successively.

To sum up, despite the advantages that public recognition leads to are considerable, it cannot compete with the benefits that tender brings out, when the life tendency of the entire family and its ability of achieving the youth’s dream are taken into account.

汐二萌sunshineUID: 3377371

0927这篇写到一半全删了 真心写挫了 0 0 求挖苦狠批讽刺

yvesxhUID: 3305014

已改，改的不好请见谅
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yvesxh 发表于 2012-9-28 19:21
已改，改的不好请见谅

亲 我的语法有点烂TUT 写句子不会想语法的 TUT  谢谢修改~

汐二萌sunshineUID: 3377371

吃完饭来贴0928的作文~

yvesxhUID: 3305014

额。。您还没改我27号的作文。。
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1451166-1-1.html

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yvesxh 发表于 2012-9-29 09:22
额。。您还没改我27号的作文。。
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1451166-1-1.html

对不起 我昨天晚上找到你的帖子了 一会儿马上改!!!

汐二萌sunshineUID: 3377371

0928：“When a new technological device becomes available. Some people buy it right away, while others will wait until many have acquired it. Which view do you agree with and explain why.”

Over the past decade, thanks largely to the rapid development of science and technology, an increasing number of people are concerned about economy. Although some people claim that a new and available technological device should be bought immediately. I, however, strongly disagree with this statement.

Initially, waiting until many have already acquired it after the novel         technological products were released could save a great deal of money. The primary reason is under the overwhelming financial crisis, everyone are trying his or her best to keep their lives both economical and scientifically convenient. The best example to explain that is iPhone-the most popular and aesthetically simple cellphone around the world. When iPhone 5 prevailed in public, just a second, all the fans of Apple devices will aware that iPhone 4S is going to its increasingly lower price. Personally saying, I was the one who relatively expected the moment coming. Then I could afford the expense of a perfect iPhone 4S, which also took an enormous stride in the development of iPhone. Comparing the people who obtain the iPhone 4S in its first revealing day without a second for completing, I cost far less than them and just as fashionable as them when I utilize the Seri to find a restaurant for lunch easily in the office.

Furthermore, if I hold on for a while rather than purchase quickly, I fully take the advantage of ensuring whether this device fits my lifestyle and bring me comfort. This is simply because there is not always the best but the most suitable. MacBook is a classic instance to demonstrate this point. Various people picked it up straightaway. However, the Mac Air was not as useful as they hope for. As the matter of fact, despite the Mac Air was much slighter than any other laptops, it did not equip enough USB so that the user was not comfortable to exploit while they were occupied with business. As a result, I could see an assorted of comments whether complimentary or criticize by surfing the Internet and then determine if I will take it or not.

To sum up, though the advantages that early to but a original technological facilities enjoys are considerable, it cannot compete with the benefits that attaining it after the trend brings about, when saving daily cost and completely understanding the function are taken into account.

April181UID: 2782403

你这字体颜色蛮好和谐哈~~~正在改~

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April181 发表于 2012-9-29 23:40
你这字体颜色蛮好和谐哈~~~正在改~

谢谢^0^ 你的我可以明天早上改么

feihong76UID: 3072089

改晚了 不好意思!
补上

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feihong76 发表于 2012-9-30 00:04
改晚了 不好意思!
补上

谢谢大神~  点的很到位噢 受教了 ^0^

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huangwg08UID: 3088508

楼主不是9.22考T了吗？还在练写作？佩服呀！
by the way: 我的一个朋友也叫sunshine诶~