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加油 今天稍微时候我传我926的作文

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坏绿的眼睛 发表于 2012-9-27 19:58
加油 今天稍微时候我传我926的作文

非常感谢 你提的意见都是我的缺点 谢谢

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As we all know, wealth , health and recognition are considered as the essential part in our lives. It is hard for me to put them in order from importance to unnecessary. So I strongly disagree with the statement.
In fact there are an increasing number of people outweigh recognition than money. They devote themselves into the contribution to our country even though own less proper than they deserve, because they care more about the public recognition. They feel worthy to win the recognition and loss wealth. Admittedly, they still have enough money to support their families and get rid of poverty and disease. otherwise the opposite I believe.  
In reality, people can’t take care of themselves without money completely , even if we get enough recognition. Money is necessary for people to get educated, cured even travel somewhere on vacation, which of these recognition can’t bring out. Recognition enables people to work harder unconsciously and subconsciously since it is psychological stimulus while money is so important for their basic necessary. We seek our physical goal first and then make psychological dream come true. In that case, money is relatively important compared with recognition.
And wealth now is fully considered as a symbol of ability ,the people with great amount of wealth also can get recognition. For instance, Steve jobs ,the ex-CEO of APPLE company, has a lot of money and respected by many people. We admire him mostly because his ability to make money. He wasn’t famous until he became successful with the APPLE became the most competitive company in the electron field. On the contrary, some scientists make their best to invent something that would improve our life tendency and get recognition, but they won’t gain more money unless the inventor emerges. So wealth could bring us recognition, but the opposite is not true.
Last but not least, recognition make people work harder ,so does the money. A worker is more willing to behave himself in order to get more and more salary but not recognition from the boss. For those who are needy and force themselves to make more money to support familes, the money is absolutely most important thing they need. Otherwise the insurance system won’t exist. Moreover some people gets on their knees on the street to ask for our money just because the they can’t be alive without money, as a result they give up their impression and wait for our sympathy. All of these recognition can’t meet themselves but money can.
To sum up, when taken all of the conditions ,incentive ,daily life need and what the money brings up, I don’t believe that recognition is more important than money, even though they both couldn’t take place each other.   

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加油噢~

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童鞋~不晓得你0927的作文在何方啊？

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lee大乐 发表于 2012-9-28 09:51
童鞋~不晓得你0927的作文在何方啊？

就在上面

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lee大乐 发表于 2012-9-28 09:51
童鞋~不晓得你0927的作文在何方啊？

在楼上 同学

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With economic grows quickly, the high developed technology enables a bunch of technological devices invented, which improve our lives tendency to the top point the first time. An increasing number of people enjoy purchasing these products as they are on sale right away. Personally speaking, I strongly disagree with it for the following reasons.
The telephone makes it come true to people communicate with families or friends too far away from them. The computer brings out a lot of convenience for people that we don't need to buy any papers and masterpieces to read just sit in front of the computer do some reading instead. The flight makes it possible to travel from middle-east to the United States only in less than one day.
In the first place, although these products provide more benefit for human beings, admittedly these things also break the balance of the old style we were used to. So it is better to wait until many have acquired it. Using telephone very often we suddenly realize that we can't live without it because it is a habit for us, we ignore to communicate with persons immediately gradually because of that we don't have to with a telephone. As a result, some friends are not pretty friendly as usual, even divorce rate has rising up. Take one of my friends as an example, my best friend Tom works very hardly, and we made a appointment to have some coffee in order to share some daily events with each other. But as he was used to use telephone unconsciously, we started communicating on phone. Finally, we realized that we were not enthusiastic any more even we sat together and talked nothing. Thus these technological devices also could be harmful to us. And unless every around me has a telephone, I wouldn't decide to buy it.
Furthermore, some technological devices are not fantastic as we expect. Many people enjoy purchasing these devices since they are curious about them but it does not mean they are really pretty great. For instance, when the CD player has invented by scientists, more and more students start to buy them, once they got them, the MP3 player has emerged which is more convenient and contains more stuff. Subsequencely, MP4,MP5 and so on are on sale. Such a thing gives me a lesson that the better will appeare if you are willing to wait. Also it will cost much more money to purchase the new technological devices as they are on sale than several months later the price of them may reduced.
To sum up, when taken these factors into account, I would like to wait until many have acquired the new technological devices when the new products have been invented. Then I will consider weather to purchase them.






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提了一些个人的观点，哈哈。

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不好意思有点晚哈~~

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欣荷 发表于 2012-9-29 17:45
提了一些个人的观点，哈哈。

非常感谢

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carino 发表于 2012-9-29 21:13
不好意思有点晚哈~~

非常感谢

lee大乐UID: 3360311

帮不了您太多，sorry

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carino 发表于 2012-9-29 21:13
不好意思有点晚哈~~

不好意思 前两天没怎么上 我认真看了你改的意见 说的很正确 我的思路写不好就会偏题 我会注意的 谢谢