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每天坚持练习，求监督！求指导！求共同提高！

麻烦批改的亲多帮忙提提思路，论证等方面的问题呀~~万分感谢呀~~

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When it comes to the interests of students in a subject, quite a few people stated that it is the best way to make them realize how important the subject is in society life so that they can be interested in the subject. Personally, I would prefer to say, it is a good and effective method to increase students’ interests, but there are other ways also perform well in the study. And the opinion above is overstatement.
Now students in growing numbers are losing interests or confidents in some subjects, since they consider that these subjects are useless in the future life outside of school. No one wants to investigate a large amount of energy and time to study a subject regarded as insignificance in the future life. Naturelly, the students will decrease their interests in those subjects and perform badly in the subjects. Take the case of a thing that there are a partial of students drop out of school to do the business work and maybe learn the subjects which will teach in school in practice process by a hard way. The reason is obvious, they are not aware of the significance of the subjects outside the school and give up the chance to learn knowledge in school in a directed way. Clearly, if students are taught about the essential meaning in the future life, they will be gain more confident and increase the interests in the subject. Also, they will do their best to study it and have enough power and motivate to deal with it. An instance accompanies this is that much of the students choose practical subjects as their major. This demonstrates the undeniable fact that the significance of a subject in the daily life can raise up students’ interests effectively.
However, some other useful methods in increasing the interest of a subject also be considered. For instance, change the teaching mode into an interesting way, like adding some interesting experiments or discussing group. Also, some interesting related programs are introduced to the subject can make students more involved. Students can study by group and solve the problem and then make a presentation about their consequence in class, and communicate with teacher and other students. These approaches will enhance the activity and interests of students in studying a subject effectively. What’s more, interest in a subject may be cultivated with the deep studying. When one learns so much about a subject, interest would not be mentioned. In the beginning, students may manifest little interest in the subject. But the interest will increase with more knowledge about it. Thus, there are several methods to increase interests in a subject, they all play a significant role in some extent.
From what has been discussed above, we could finally the conclusion that it is a good way to increase students’ interests in a subject by teaching them to realize the essential of the subject in the later society life, and also other methods can make a good performance in it.

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改的不是很仔细，:D

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10.2
Every time we consider honest in friendship, quite a few people regard honest as a basic requirement to establish the relationship. Admittedlly, telling the truth play an essential role in maintaining relationship between friends. It is so difficult to be thoroughly telling the truth with our friends all the time.
In most of the case, we can keep honest in the relationship with our friends. It is also needed to build a mutual trust friendship by telling the truth with each other and communicate sincerely. However, exceptions do exist. That is why white lie produced. We may point out a common and concrete instance of illness condition with your friends. When one of your friends suffered a serious illness, and he or she feels so depressed and frustrated. What would you do? Telling his or her truth or conseal the condition of the ill? In order to encourage your friend and make he or she feel relax about his or her illness. Also, your friend will keep a positive mood and cooperate with the doctor’s treatment and obey the advice which will benefit for the illness. On the contrary, if you telling the truth in such case, the result will be unimaginative and awful. Also, it can offer another notable example that your friend are at the first stage of learning dancing and excited to perform the new movements before you. In fact, the performance is do lack of beauty, and your friend are longing for your praise and evaluation. How do you cope with this condition? Tell her do not perform before others and the dancing are so bad? There is no doubt that your friend will lose all her confidence and never want to learn dance at all. Maybe, your friendship will break up as this case or worse. It is absolutely not the answer you wanted. These instances are not rare, therefore, it is so difficult for most of people to always tell the truth to their friends.
On the other hand, some person can actually do the impossible thing in their life style. The same cases in their life are no long to be a problem. They tell the true condition of illness to the friend, because they consider that it is the right of friend to know the true condition himself. And the friend can make a plan for the left time or treasure the life time. The persons also tell the truth about the bad dancing performance of their friend. It is a responsible way to help their friend. It is necessary to let friend realize the reality of her dancing which can benefit for her improvement. It is a good chance for friend to practice the basic movement solidly. Thus, for these people, they can keep honest in the exception case for other people. For this reason, the ‘impossible’ opinion is overstatement.
From what has been discussed above, we could finally draw the conclusion that it is hard for several people to always tell the truth for the friends, but it is possible for some one to keep honest in the friendship.

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已改，见附件

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bluegrass09 发表于 2012-10-2 19:18
改的不是很仔细，

谢谢啦。。我也是刚来作文小组，都没搞清规则，谢谢你帮我改了前天的，我以为没有人改了呢。。呵呵。。还有就是不好意思啦，应该传word的。。

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cici2012_0405 发表于 2012-10-3 09:17
已改，见附件

谢谢啦。。应该传word的，没搞清楚状况。。我作文很差的，请多多指教啊~~

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10.3 作文

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Flaviapq 发表于 2012-10-4 01:35
10.3 作文

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写的很棒！！！有点小缺点，但是还好~~
我的想你学习！！

求你的批改，狠批~谢谢啦~

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10.3已改

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10.4

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Flaviapq 发表于 2012-10-5 07:05
10.4

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改好啦！
加油！！！

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这个一定要报名吗，可以自己发帖吗？

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zhh358 发表于 2012-10-5 13:46
改好啦！
加油！！！

谢谢哈。。你好快~~

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dwt800 发表于 2012-10-5 18:14
这个一定要报名吗，可以自己发帖吗？

要去总贴报道，然后版主会分组，自己的作文自己开贴。。