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发表于 2012-10-4 21:05:18 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 wly95134 于 2012-10-6 09:28 编辑

加油~10月13考
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发表于 2012-10-4 21:42:36 |显示全部楼层
不好意思了,暂时还不能上传文件

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发表于 2012-10-4 22:12:43 |显示全部楼层
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: People can learn more from watching television than by reading books. (Leisure)

In this day and age, individuals have great access to television including to dramas, movies, talk shows and even news, which undoubtedly provide a large amount of information and knowledge. While comparing with books, in most cases, the later reveals a superiority like much more systematic, offering a deeper horizon towards the topic and time saving.
In the first case, a book makes the knowledge in a field presented in a frame that is systematically and logically developed with the catalogue. For example, I'm major in food science and usually occupied with the information about the chemical elements of the food materials, though sometimes I will watch a section of science TV drama to learn a little about my research, it doesn't work a lot and if fortunately enough, I could only pick up some but who knows whether it will be forgot after turning off the TV. In such aspects. however, a book aimed at my subject will help me absolutely, since carefully reading the articles arranged as the learning order will keep in mind significantly.
Apart from learning in a book in order, reading a book naturally offer a deeper information than from TV shows, substantially due to the limitation of which, to name just a few, not only a talk show has to cater to everyone's recognition but a drama must cut down part of indispensable mental activities as well as, what's more, the millions of advertising has nothing on our literacy advancement but will mislead us like taking pills to lose weight and so on.
Last but not least, it takes less time to read a book then watching TV. As to me, the TV dramas is the best case in point, several days ago, I was gravitated by a romantic novel, then I spent only 2 hours to finish it sharply. Luckily enough, the novel is filmed as a TV drama which surprisingly covered 40 sections, maybe even 20 hours I could not watch the ending of it. What a pity! They are telling the same story but only the format differs from each other, the time people spend differs amazingly.
However, watching TV brings about more satisfaction and leisure during the enjoyable process, which may comfort people, like children and the old have less desire for information compared with the young. All in all, if one is eager for learning more, it's a intelligent selection to read books instead watching TV.

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发表于 2012-10-4 22:14:27 |显示全部楼层
In this day and age, individuals have great access to television including to dramas, movies, talk shows and even news, which undoubtedly provide a large amount of information and knowledge. While comparing with books, in most cases, the later reveals a superiority like much more systematic, offering a deeper horizon towards the topic and time saving.

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发表于 2012-10-5 09:02:20 |显示全部楼层
亲 跟版主勾兑一下呢?让她给你涨涨积分 我也是昨天才加的

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发表于 2012-10-5 18:08:16 |显示全部楼层
这里,改好了。

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发表于 2012-10-5 18:35:28 |显示全部楼层
娜加 发表于 2012-10-5 18:08
这里,改好了。

XIEXIE!我不能上传文件,要不你加我Q:651919427

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发表于 2012-10-5 20:09:07 |显示全部楼层
改好了哈~可能有些主观的地方 谅解~

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发表于 2012-10-6 12:21:12 |显示全部楼层
已改,请多指教 1005wly1 revised by Yvesxh.doc (27 KB, 下载次数: 6)

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发表于 2012-10-6 13:05:24 |显示全部楼层
1004反思:用时控制!
句式词汇要丰富,快背啊!!
写个漂亮的开头和结尾!!!!!!抓紧时间

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发表于 2012-10-6 21:18:57 |显示全部楼层
1005wly1 revised by zhh358.doc (22.5 KB, 下载次数: 5)
改的有点迟,不好意思~~
加油!!!!

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发表于 2012-10-6 23:27:35 |显示全部楼层
zhh358 发表于 2012-10-6 21:18
改的有点迟,不好意思~~
加油!!!!

谢谢,还在研究中,说的挺中肯的,我自己看也把自己绕了

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发表于 2012-10-7 00:03:26 |显示全部楼层
wly95134 发表于 2012-10-6 23:27
谢谢,还在研究中,说的挺中肯的,我自己看也把自己绕了

写复杂的句子挺好,就别把自己绕糊涂了就行。我有时候太缺少长句了。。。

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