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本帖最后由 Brittany89 于 2012-10-5 20:37 编辑

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The advice you take from the friends who are older than you is valuable than that taken from the friends at your age?

In my opinion, I support of the view that the advice that I take from the friends who are older than me is valuable than that taken from the friends at the same age.

Apparently, the older friends have more life experience than me. Usually, they can offer valuable advice for me depending on their experience. For instance, after I graduated from high school, I didn't know which college I should go and which major should I choose. It's so difficult for me and I have no acquaintance of the university. I felt upset and hesitate. Then, I asked help from my sister, who is one of my older friend and, more importantly, she was in college. She advised me that choosing college and major should depend on interests. Finally, I came to my favorite college and major in photography. What I did made me feel happy and I had a plan for my future career.

In addition, the older friends read more books than me, so they have lots of knowledge and perspective of life. Like our parents or our grandparents, they often tell us something about the life value and many interesting stories, which happened in their lives. My parents often tell me that I need to earn money by my own and I should be nice to others. These qualities are important for me and help me seize many opportunities. Besides, I build a good social relationship owing to these personal qualities.

In conclusion, I often get benefits from the older friends' advices. So I think the advice, which is offered by the old friends, is more valuable than the peer friends' advice