【GRE作文互改组】Enolate的I&A习作贴

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额~~~~~~~~~~加油………………………………………………

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11.7  issue 4

Scandals are useful because they focus our attention on problems in ways that no speaker or reformer ever could.丑闻是有裨益的，因为它们让人们注意到一些问题，任何演说家和改革家都无法做到的。


太久没有写作文了……写了一个半小时……

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感觉写的能完爆我八条街，本人斗胆发表一些拙见，很多只是感觉。

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_Snail 发表于 2012-11-8 16:03
感觉写的能完爆我八条街，本人斗胆发表一些拙见，很多只是感觉。

谢谢点评~  我以前考过的啦，写过一些。可是太久没写了还是写不出来了……太久没背单词很多词也不记得，mores写成more, 你说的murder也忘了= =
嗯嗯，很多用词我得再改改   干巴爹！

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:kiss:

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啊 今天有空来瞧瞧你们滴~

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就提了个小意见

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11.10 Argument 69

The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of a large, highly diversified company.
"Ten years ago our company had two new office buildings constructed as regional headquarters for two regions. The buildings were erected by different construction companies—Alpha and Zeta. Although the two buildings had identical floor plans, the building constructed by Zeta cost 30 percent more to build. However, that building's expenses for maintenance last year were only half those of Alpha's. In addition, the energy consumption of the Zeta building has been lower than that of the Alpha building every year since its construction. Given these data, plus the fact that Zeta has a stable workforce with little employee turnover, we recommend using Zeta rather than Alpha for our new building project, even though Alpha's bid promises lower construction costs."

Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.

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parrotking 发表于 2012-11-11 15:40
就提了个小意见

谢了同学~

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parrotking 发表于 2012-11-11 15:40
就提了个小意见

嗯嗯，你的意见很有帮助~  一时想不出来那么多例子T T  我要好好写提纲了…… 加油~

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感觉写的非常好了，错误也比较少，小辈只是看看，感觉逻辑也比较合理清晰。如果能够在规定时间只能完成，那尚属一片佳作。
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_Snail 发表于 2012-11-14 16:29
感觉写的非常好了，错误也比较少，小辈只是看看，感觉逻辑也比较合理清晰。如果能够在规定时间只能完成，那 ...

谢谢你的鼓励啊 T T.... 自认为是个不容易让人理解我想说什么的人……话说刚刚转考到13年了，有时间把作文练上去了
共勉！！！！

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2.9
Issue 3, 137
Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursuing fields of study in which they are unlikely to succeed.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

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Enolate 发表于 2013-2-8 23:48
2.9
Issue 3, 137
Educational institutions have a responsibility to dissuade students from pursu ...

烯醇君下次记得附提纲哦，这样就可以知道你是表达不出来还是思考不够深

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kekele007 发表于 2013-2-11 18:19
烯醇君下次记得附提纲哦，这样就可以知道你是表达不出来还是思考不够深

好的，下次补一个，其实我没有提纲- -所以我觉得是思考不够深占大头
烯醇君哈哈