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题目：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is easier for people to become well-educated now than in the past.

Education is advancing so rapidly present day that various learning means have been emerging. Many of them to aid people's study do not exist in the past. Although not all of them are the best tools, they actually can help us study easily. So, I agree on the point that people is easier to become well-educated now than in the past.

Firstly, nowadays people are living better than those in the past due to the improved living condition. We have more opportunity to get what we want. For example, we are easier going to university at present day. The chance to learn from the professor can refine ours taste of art and improve the understanding of culture, technology, which has important effect to one's career life in the future.

Secondly, today, it's convenient to gain information for study through internet. For example, you can google or baidu anything and obtain the search results immediataly. There is a lot of software and training institution which can provide the professional of education services to help us grow. Therefore, we can go to great lengths to absorb more acknowledge.

At last, there are still a small percentage of people can not afford to go to school, although the development of education made a great progress in the past decades. Simultaneously, these who are too poor to go to school can obtain more aid due to the quickly development of information technology. According to the 21st Century newspaper, ninety eight percent of the indigent people can get educated freely from primary school to high school.

In a word, people in the past usually had the experience of starvation, poorly living condition. When facing subsistence problem, the first thing for people need to consider is how to sort it out, not to get educated. However, these problems for most of people do not appear any longer. We can live better with the improvement of living condition. Thus, we have the ability to get educated and have the information technology to make our education convenient. Consequently, it is easier for people to get well-educated now than in the past.