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1103一战 148+170+3 这个分数够了吗？本人大三，学校非211非985，专业药物制剂，打算申请14年入学

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Enolate 发表于 2012-11-20 23:00
争取再考吧，最好320+ 加油楼主~

我的那个3分的作文是不是应用了如下的模板所致的？我个人感觉我的内容，逻辑什么的都写的不错
issue开头“The author asserts that…………At the first glance, this opinion seems somewhat reasonable and convincing, but further reflection tells me that I cannot agree with it for the following reasons" 结尾”In sum, due to the analysis and reasons mentioned above, we may finally draw that conclusion that…………"
argument开头"The *** asserts that 结论,At the first glance, this advice seems somewhat convincing, but further reflections reveal that it omits some substantial concerns that should be addressed to substantiate***. In my point of view, this argument suffers from a great number of logical flaws" 结尾“In sum, due to the analysis mentioned above,反驳原结论,然后提出需要改进的地方, If the argument had included the given factors discussed above, it would have been more thorough and logically acceptable."
不过我考试的时候argument最后结尾的时候没时间写需要改进的地方了

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