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题目：Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions. Some people think it is fully justified while others think it is unfair.

Discuss both these views and give your own opinions.

Important international sports games like Olympic can always attract world's attention. Audience in the live or in front of TV would yell for the athletes and if the sports men succeeded, they would not only become famous over the world but also earn a decent scholarship.

Some people think this great deal of money is worthy for the hard endeavor of the sports professionals. These people gave up the opportunities of acquiring knowledge in school as well as the time of leisure to become a successful athlete. They sacrificed the majority of their youth on the boring and repeated training on a certain sport. They are suppose to be rewarded. In addition, some of the sports men may even got injured during training or competition, in other words, they took a high risk to win the fame and award. What's more, excellent sports player represent the image of a country, they should be rewarded if the won fame for their nation.

Others, however, hold the opposite opinion, they assert it is quite unfair to give millions of money to a athlete just for a game. Those people who are successful in a match just happened to have some talent for a game and with appropriate training, there is a good chance for them to win. Besides, there are still plenty of people out there who live in poverty and in great need of help. It is better to allocate some of the scholarship to the poor and improve the public infrastructure. Apart from that, there are numerous professionals in other field such as IT, manufacture and service. Those people also contributed to the flourishing of economy and nationality image. Furthermore, they improved the standard of living of citizens and generated a host of job opportunities. They should be rewarded as well.

In conclusion, I personally think it it fully justified for sports professionals to get a large amount of money through competitions in terms of their excellent performance and hard-working. No pains no gains, it cost their youth and risk a high chance of failure to be succeed, there is no reason for them to be disrespected or unrewarded.

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