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Do you agree or disagree the following statement?The rapid growth cities today’s should have a positive effect of the development of the society.(society)

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first step: make a draft.
Cities' rapid growth has positive influence on the development of society
The increasing number and scale of cities in modern time undoutly is good news to the society because the social welfare will be greatly enhanced by the growth of the cities.
The quality of people's lives: public facilities, transportations, food choices, entertainment activities.
Better education, elementary school, university students, library, resource for self-study.
Culture: more people from different backgrounds, melting pot, creation, innovative.
Complication: side effect, population explosion, too crowded, crime, vicious competition for resources. Newyork,Chicago,Beijing...
Generally speaking, positive, however need to control the pace of development and pay more attention to other aspect rather than only number and scale.

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Step 2: opening paragraph
There are several ways to write an opening paragraph:
1. with a narrative sentence.
2.Observation
3.Controversial Question
4.Thesis statement

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SYNCIA 发表于 2013-1-2 15:55
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Got it, havn't finished yet. Thanks for the heads up