榨干tpo阅读的美词美句

喵呜~UID: 3339380

这个帖子，是我自己心血来潮想弄的，纯粹是为了提高自己的写作水平，并且激励自己能够长时间持续学习英语写作而开的。如果有人发现这边的词句确实不错，也欢迎一起学习啊（咱们可以组成小组来学习），我也会很高兴。

我将怎么利用这些美词每句：
1，参加托福写作小组，写作
2，先修改自己的作文，同时努力把当天自己学到的句型和单词用到作文中。
3，一天至少学三个句子和单词，妈妈再也不用担心我的英语写作了

小小介绍一下
文章来自tpi阅读
Word 粘贴我所做的就是把我自己认为的好词用绿色标记出来，多变的句型用蓝色标志标出，并用标号标记如[a1]，并在一段下面写出我自己的评论。

喵呜~UID: 3339380

忘了这篇是tpo几了

Word 粘贴Architecture is the art and science of designing structures thatorganize and enclose space for practical and symbolic purposes. Because architecture grows out ofhuman needs and aspirations, it clearly communicates cultural values.Of all the visual arts[a1],architecture affects our lives most directly for it determines the character of the human environment in major ways.

[a1]状语从句前置，增加句型的变化性，还是蛮好的，可以偷走

Word 粘贴Architecture is a three-dimensional form. It utilizes space, mass,texture, line, light, and color.[a1]To be architecture, a building must achieve aworking harmony with a variety of elements. Humans instinctively[a2] seek structures that will shelter[a3] and enhance their way of life. It is the work ofarchitects to create buildings that are not simply[a4] constructions but also offer inspiration and delight. Buildings contribute to human lifewhen they provide shelter, enrich space, complement their site, suit theclimate, and are economically feasible.[a5]The client[a6] who pays for the building and defines its functionis an important member of the architectural team. The mediocre design of many contemporary[a7]buildings can be traced to both clients and architects.

[a1]小排比，可以借鉴的结构

[a2]adv形容v，这个要学会用，尽量在动词前面加个adv，这样可以描述得更vivid

[a3]这个词让我想起了一个可以用在写电视电影的坏作用的词  shelter from sth

[a4]有时候也可以吧not only 换成only simply

[a5]Again 再次排比，如果能用上这种方法，还怕字数不够多吗，不过同时想出这么多个词有点难度就是了

[a6]顾客不仅仅是consummer，customer

[a7]这个词在托福写作小组的频率也越来越高了呢

Word 粘贴In order for the structure to achieve the size and strength necessary to meet itspurpose, architecture employsmethods of support that, because they are based on physical laws, have changedlittle since people first discovered them-even while building materials havechanged dramatically.The world’s architectural structures have also been devised in relation to the objectivelimitations ofmaterials. Structures can be analyzed in terms of how they deal with downward forces created[a1] by gravity. They aredesigned to withstand the forces of compression (pushing together), tension (pulling apart), bending, or acombination of these[a2] in different parts ofthe structure.

[a1]Ved做后置定语，可以再合适的时候把定语从句变成Ved做后置定语

[a2]Again，有一个小排比

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Word 粘贴Even development in architecture has been theresult of major technological changes. Materials and methods of construction are integral parts of the design ofarchitecture structures. In earlier times it was necessary to design structuralsystems suitable[a1] for the materials that wereavailable, such as wood, stone, brick. Today technology has progressed to the point where[a2][a3]itis possible to invent new building materials to suit the type of structuredesired. Enormouschanges in materials and techniques of construction within the last fewgenerations have made it possible[a5]to enclose space with much greater ease and speed and with a minimum ofmaterial. Progress in this area can be measured by the difference in weightbetween buildings built now and those[a6]of comparable size built one hundred years ago.

[a1]不仅只有后置定语从句可以放在n后面修饰n哦，还有adj

[a2]状语从句，这个句型大家用的比较少

[a3]这句可以整成个万能句

[a5]Made sth 。。。。。

[a6]其实有些时候我们代词用的不够好，会是句子一直重复，然后就变啰嗦了。这边代词 those。

Word 粘贴Modern architectural forms generally have three separate components comparable to elements of the humanbody：a supporting skeleton or frame, an outerskin enclosing the interior spaces, equipment, similar to the body’s vitalorgans and systems. The equipment includes plumbing, electrical wiring, hotwater, and air-conditioning. Of course in early architecture—suchas igloos and adobe structures—[a1]there was no such equipment, and theskeleton and skin were often one.

[a1]--号插入的方式

Word 粘贴 Much ofthe world’s great architecture has been constructed of stone because of itsbeauty, permanence,and availability. In the past, whole cities grew from the arduous task ofcutting and piling stone upon. Some of the world’s finest stone architecturecan be seen in the ruins of the ancient Inca city of Machu Picchu high in theeastern Andes Mountains of Peru. The doorways and windows are made possible byplacing over the open spaces thick stone beams that support the weight fromabove. A structural invention had to be made before the physical limitations of stone couldbe overcome and new architectural forms could be created. That invention wasthe arch, a curved structureoriginally made of separate stone or brick segments. [a1]The arch was used bythe early cultures of the Mediterranean area chiefly for underground drains,but it was the Romans who first developed and used the arch extensively inaboveground structures. Roman builders perfected the semicircular arch made[a2] of separate blocks ofstone. As[a3] a method of spanningspace, the arch can support greater weight than a horizontal beam. It works incompression to divert the weight above it out to the sides, where[a4] the weight is borneby the vertical elements on either side of the arch. The arch is among the many important structuralbreakthroughs[a5]that have characterized architecturethroughout the centuries.

[a1]同位语，也是用的比较少的一种句型。可以同来增加句式的多样性。

[a2]Ved修饰n

[a3]As状语从句

[a4]状语从句，解释说明

[a5]可以模仿的among 用法

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4楼再次占

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多占几楼，反正闲着没事

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再占

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向lz学习，不光为做tpo而做tpo!

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