【7.23】
Task 1,2
1. 第一题里,"people have to pick up..." what does this mean?
2. I would know what should be "bought" (录音里buy的过去式用错了),另外这句后面说的是 in the water? 啥意思?
3. 你的发音里确实带些口音,但是美国人对口音的容忍度应该很高,印度人口语都能拿高分对吧~ 看了一下你那个分数的解释,“grammer and vocabulary are somewhat limited and include some errors...the limitation prevent you from elaborating fully on your ideas”。你23号这两题里语法错误倒不多,但是1,2点里都有提到不知道你想表达什么的地方。
Task 3,5
1. even though the cafeteria has the access to the email box? 题里可不是这么说的吧。题里woman是开玩笑说如果email里有cafeteria每日的菜单,那么他们更加肯定会每天check email。另外这题第一点落了个细节:students would know if some events are cancelled so that they won't waste time showing up there.
2. T5里首先role这个词读错了,你读的很像rule。你一直在讲the role怎样怎样,最好直接用the man/ the guy,关于这个role是个minor role你没有提到。另外,最好用个让步句讲一下你选的那个solution的缺点,这题就可以说:although the woman has to sacrifice her time for other preparations, it is worth it because she can...blah blah
加油!破格上次作文如何?我是口语作文短板。
内容很好。我就挑不太好的地方说了。
Task 1
1.foreigner university. ==>foreign university.
2. I have never study abroad. abroad后面没有“s”. 应该和上面的foreign university那句话有个停顿。
3. I have make up my minds. make完成式是made
4. My family members 后面用are
Task 2
other members, other发音稍微注意下,r音有点重
in the basketball field 后面没太听清楚
we are not only play sports together. 是sports还是balls?没听清楚
especially, 发音注意下,第二个E发ә,不是i