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6.14 题目
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is easier for more people now than in the past to get an education.

Knowledge is power. With the rapid development of our modern society, we have paid more and more attentions on the public’s education. Chairman Hu has provided the strategy developing our country through science and education in 2005. However, many children cannot even afford to go to the primary school in the past years.
With the great efforts provided by our nation, getting a nine-year education has become a compulsory thing. All people have to finish their primary education and highschool study at a prompt age without paying any tuition for the learning. However, 30 years ago, child workers at the age from 8 to 18 at the oil factories or texture stores who had dropped off school are no longer an eccentric phenomenon. Having an access to get education is really an extraordinary affair for them.
Numerous scientists have greatly contributed to the rapid development of the science. Now there are various kinds of subjects, such as phychology, chemistry, physiology, metreography and so on. These days, we have so many sources of news and information that we can even hardly tell which one is reliable or who is telling the truth. It is so available for us to get the knowledge we needed.
Besides, the internet has bridged a mount of information from all over the world. Computers have changed people’s life style, in a way that we can concentrate on our scientific research rather than depressed by the unknown information. We can get the parameters we need to decide the precise specifications when we are doing a special expertisement. However, we just have to be puzzled by the problem doing nothing in the past years. So, it is easier for us now than in the past to get an experimental education.
After all, children nowadays all have the access to get an primary-leval and secondary-leval education, and it is very common to go to university. The scale of  the elite class has been expanded. People are more exposed on the massive information and can easily get the words. Compared with the people in the old days, human beings are more easier to get an education.

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Knowledge is power. With the rapid development of our modern society, we have paid more and more attentions on the public’s (可以不加`s)education. Chairman Hu has provided the strategy(of) developing our country through science and education in 2005. However, many children cannot even afford to go to the primary school in the past years.With the great efforts provided by our nation, getting a nine-year education has become a compulsory thing. All people have to finish their primary education and highschool study at a prompt age(没看明白 机敏年龄？） without paying any tuition for the learning. However, 30 years ago, child workers at the age from 8 to 18 at the oil factories or texture stores （spinnery）who had dropped off school are no longer an eccentric phenomenon. Having an access to get education is really an extraordinary affair for them.Numerous scientists have greatly contributed to the rapid development of the science. （第一句还是紧扣主题吧）Now there are various kinds of subjects, such as phychology, chemistry, physiology, metreography and so on. These days, we have so many sources of news and informations that we can even hardly tell which one is reliable or who is telling the truth. It is so available for us to get the knowledge we needed.（论点没看懂，是因为科学家丰富了可以学习的学科，使教育变得容易吗？例子没有展开）Besides, the internet has bridged a mount of informations from all over the world. Computers have changed people’s life style, in a way that we can concentrate on our scientific research rather than depressed by the unknown information. We can get the parameters we need to decide the precise specifications when we are doing a special expertisement(experiment). However, we just have to be puzzled by the problem (and )doing nothing in the past years. So, it is easier for us now than in the past to get an experimental education.After all, children nowadays all have the access (rights)to get an primary-level and secondary-leval education, and it is very common to go to(the) university. The scale of  the elite class has been expanded. People are more exposed on the massive information and can easily get the words. Compared with the people in the old days, human beings are more easier to get an education.