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[求助] 独立作文求指点,第一次写,感觉理由不太好想,郁闷。 [复制链接]

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agree or diagree business people are motivated by desire of money only

It is reasonable to think that business people are motivated by desire of money only. There is no doubt that many people put the label of money on the businessmen.
  People think that money is always most important ingredient of life, especially for those business people. Their main points of their career are getting money. On the other hand, money is the most efficient way to help people get whatever they want. Most of the ambitious people think that business can make their dreams come true.
  However, these opinions are not always the truth. There are actually more humanity inside our heart. Money is not everything we are looking for in our entire life. We can have health, have family members, have lovely friends who are sticking with us all the time. So do these for the business people. Moreover, I think that money is not the only way to help people to achieve their goals. There are lots of things that can not be reached without patience, assistance from others, teamwork, hardworking and etc. So it's definitely real that money is not the only motivation of business people.
   As far as I am concerned, business people are one of kinds of people who want to have freedom, who want to take adventure in their life, and who have the courage to face all the challenges during their career. There are many examples of famous successful businessmen. For instance, Mayun is one of the most famous businessmen in our modern city. He does great contribution to our international life such as Taobao which is the most popular website for people to shop online. He built this website not only because of his dream of career but also some kind of passion of risky and creativity. Those are all very significant elements of becoming a great businessman.
    Of course, there is something like family business which is started by the father, or father's father. Many businessmen open their career because of the family reasons. As we all know that, Rome can not be built on just one day. Many successful business people take an advantage of their family sources to let their family career go further. I have to say that it is very popular in the business circle all over the world. Many big family are unwilling to let their family career go down, so many descendents of the family go their way to businessmen.
    The reason that business people are motivated only by desire of money is really not convincing. Life can be various from person to person, so do the careers. We don't know what we are going to do after we graduate. Maybe, I can be a businesswoman someday, just because of the timing, the environment and so on.
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