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由于先天音量+设备+RP问题……可能需要调到最大音量才能听到……
拜谢各位……
8.7
Task 1 Is it important to have good manners in your interactions with other people? Give details and explanations to support your response.
Task 2 Some people think the best way to study is to attend a lecture. Others think that it’s better to read by yourself. Which way do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO6
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 9&uk=1963659676
第四个因为总是忘记那个车牌子于是总是卡住T-T……

8.6
Task 1 Do you prefer having outdoor activities in winters or in summers? State your choice and explain why. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Some people prefer to live in old and historical house, others prefer to live in modern house. Which one do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Task 3-6 TPO7
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 3&uk=1963659676

8.4~8.5
请假

8.3
Task 1 Your University is planning to allow students to watch TV in theirs dormitories. What is your opinion and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages of watching TV in dormitories? Include reasons and examples to support your response. 
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Cell phones are necessary in order to run a successful business. 
Task 3-6 TPO10
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 8&uk=1963659676

8.2
Task 1 Which period is the most difficult period in a person’s life? Childhood, Teenage or adulthood? State your choice and explain why. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some people think that teachers should assign homework to students during the class, but others say that teachers should assign homework to students after class using email. Which do you think is better and why? 
Task 3-6 TPO11
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8.1
Task 1 Which personal quality you admire the most? (1)intelligent (2) creative (3)courage
Task 2 Do you like to travel alone or with your family members? Explain your answer with details and examples.
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 7&uk=1963659676

7.30~7.31请假

7.29
Task 1 Describe the most important day of your life. Explain why it was important to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
[tsound]2187[/tsound]
Task 2 Some students prefer to choose a career before getting into college. Other students prefer to choose a career after taking some university courses in college. Which one do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
[tsound]2190[/tsound]

7.28
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7.27
Task 1 Describe a special friend in your childhood,why he or she is special to you? Include reasons and details to support your response.
[tsound]2120[/tsound]
……被人称整疯了……
Task 2  Some people prefer to make decisions quickly. Others prefer to take their time making them. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
[tsound]2122[/tsound]

7.26
Task 1 When chosing a friend, which of the following characteristics do you care about most: honesty, loyalty or a sense of humor? Explain why this characteristic is mportant to you.
[tsound]2118[/tsound]
Task 2 Some people prefer to watch entertainment programs on TV, others prefer to watch educational programs. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice.
[tsound]2119[/tsound]
TPO18
Task3
[tsound]2131[/tsound]
Task4
[tsound]2133[/tsound]
Task5
[tsound]2136[/tsound]
Task6
[tsound]2137[/tsound]

7.25
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7.24
Task 1 Some people believe family members have the most important influence on young adults, others think that friends are the most important influence. Which opinion do you agree with? Explain why.
[tsound]2059[/tsound]
其实没说完……正好不知道下来说啥然后时间到了……
Task 2 Will electronic materials eventually replace printed ones? What is your opinion? Explain why.
[tsound]2062[/tsound]

7.23
Task 1 Are the living standards of people today better than the past?
[tsound]2052[/tsound]
Task 2 Some people would borrow money to buy things they need. Others would save up money until they can afford it. Which way would you choose and why?
[tsound]2057[/tsound]

7.22
Task 1 One of your friends is going to study math as his major. What suggestions would you give to this friend?
[tsound]1986[/tsound]
Task 2 Do you like to prepare for something at the beginning or wait just before the due date?
[tsound]1988[/tsound]
……试了一下直接说……好惨……

7.21
Task 1 Describe one way of life in your country has been changed and why it is beneficial.
[tsound]1919[/tsound]
注一个:stem family主干家庭=老中青三代  core family核心家庭=中青
Task 2 Do you prefer to take courses relating to a specific career, or do you prefer to take a variety of courses?
[tsound]1921[/tsound]

====我就吐个槽======
看着那数字跳我就心律不齐……

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发表于 2013-7-22 16:26:04 |显示全部楼层
樓主好
7.21的部分
錄音有點小聲,我已經把音量調到最大了還是有意點不清楚...
task 1
聽得不是很清楚,不過大概能理解,內容上沒什麼問題
task 2
"I can design a building with my major courses as architecture, but if I take other course into consideration"這句
前面那句這樣講有點奇怪,I guess you mean that "I can design a building with the skills I learned from architecture course," right?
but 代表語氣的轉折,乍聽之下會以為你是要講take other courses 的壞處
建議用and或其他連接詞
用假設語氣的時候要特別注意,take 應改成took

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发表于 2013-7-22 20:35:43 |显示全部楼层
ruth4059 发表于 2013-7-22 16:26
樓主好
7.21的部分
錄音有點小聲,我已經把音量調到最大了還是有意點不清楚...

=-=task1忘了调麦~辛苦同学了~感谢~~

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发表于 2013-7-23 21:27:47 |显示全部楼层
task 1
内容很好哎,你和wstfw的内容都是我要学习的
我觉得第二句话的主语换成your friend会更好。可以改成 math would help the engineer ... more exactly...否则会觉得重点有点偏离,尤其是听到help them时候有点晕
最后一句没太听清楚,请问一下是否为:some day he could win the field's medal
task 2
(- -||……为啥噪音这么大……)
蛮好,我也是拖延症患者。。。
内容上说很好,正面反面都介绍到了
有一个用法when i have plenty time to cost==>cost改为spend会更好
逻辑词可以更丰富一些,强调一下but。

总体来说语音语调没问题啊
录音录满45秒会比较好:)
加油!

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发表于 2013-7-24 20:37:57 |显示全部楼层
KickBessie 发表于 2013-7-23 21:27
task 1
内容很好哎,你和wstfw的内容都是我要学习的
我觉得第二句话的主语换成your friend会更好。可以改 ...

多谢点评~
task1最后是fields metal没错啦~
感觉一到口语除了because 和but 就说不出别的连接词了=_=|||

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发表于 2013-7-25 00:21:54 |显示全部楼层
7.24
1.语速合适
2.有些地方没有听清。brothers and sisters keep you ??? 。But what you do is ??? cultivated from families
3.内容方面
task 1,前面说了parents, brothers and sisters的影响,但是像build your world view之类的有点空,最好再具体一些。而后面说到friends are different,但是为什么different了你就会change your mind,different就一定影响小吗?你需要进一步解释才能是我信服
task 2,从fewer waste paper就直接到了reduction of carbon dioxide,感觉有点突兀,说protect the environment之类的可能更贴切

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发表于 2013-7-25 10:01:38 |显示全部楼层
楼主好:
T1里边有几个字的发音important, compared
healthy 前面好像用了an
最后一句听了几遍还是没有听清楚,有点杂音,前面作者讲的是现代生活的标准下降了,最后一句好像说现代生活方便等有点,似乎有些矛盾,难道是反问句吗?
T2里头只有一个发音,imagine
整体来看作者的语速均匀,十分流利,尤其是第二篇,内容也没有什么问题

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糖甜甜 发表于 2013-7-25 00:21
7.24
1.语速合适
2.有些地方没有听清。brothers and sisters keep you ??? 。But what you do is ??? cul ...

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Winnie千山明月 发表于 2013-7-25 10:01
楼主好:
T1里边有几个字的发音important, compared
healthy 前面好像用了an

恩了解了~多谢~

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发表于 2013-7-26 19:19:50 |显示全部楼层
7.24
录音杂音重,楼主的声音又小,听的不清楚。
我觉得楼主的语调和语速都很不错了。注意下内容就可以了。
T1
前半段说的听得还比较清楚,父母把你从小孩培养成成人,兄弟姐妹朝夕相处。后面部分谈到friends就听得不清楚了。
T2
第一个点是节约钱,第二个点是节约纸?

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zen赵天泽 发表于 2013-7-26 19:19
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录音杂音重,楼主的声音又小,听的不清楚。
我觉得楼主的语调和语速都很不错了。注意下内容就可以了 ...

en~

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本帖最后由 copyzero2 于 2013-7-29 17:53 编辑

7.26 不好意思,无颜面对你,这么晚才帮你评~~

T1:
内容:keep friend in a good mood,这说法有点奇怪~~例子比较详尽,挺好的~~

T2:
流利度:当中有一个较长的停顿,其他蛮好的~~
内容:OK,挺好的,很具体~~

T3:
发音:develop的发音注意一下~~choir的发音~~
流利度:后面稍微有点卡,停顿多了些
内容:一开始木有听清,make competitions in once way in other school吗,如果是的话句式ms有点问题~~点都有了
语法:attract sb to do sth~~
              
T4:
内容:概念:个人觉得少了一部分,它是由于环境变化了,才会有meaningless behavior,感觉可以点一下~~然后你解释概念的时候从句木有谓语了;run fast不是对它生存没意义啊,只是木有predactor追得上而已
发音:lion的音注意一下~~ quite的发音注意一下~~ extinct的发音~~
语法:开头的概念那句句子前面提过了,最后 relict behavior,这不是句子啊,用because of 好了

T5:
这题可以调整一下结构:按照Robin说的,一开始只说两个理由不说优缺点,优缺点放到后面去,比如选择方案二:理由一:方案一的缺点;理由二:方案二的缺点+自己的解决方案;然后可以加强一下概述~~

T6:
发音:toy 的发音注意一下~~children的发音~~geographically的发音~~
内容:时间分配的问题:一般两点各30s;第二点稍显单薄
建议调整一个结构:综述句+第一个特点+例子一;第二个特点+例子二,这样更清晰一些~~

杂音是有一点,建议不用论坛的录音,方便更好的互评啦,我也不能用论坛录音设备,so就用手机再导的
特别不好意思,so后面帮你评的比较细,第一次做算不错啦,T3&T4整个框架结构是可以的,T5&T6我有提出自己的看法,可以改一下~~加油~~

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发表于 2013-7-28 16:31:05 |显示全部楼层
内容上都没有问题,楼主说的很好哦。
T1 说到的很具体了,语音也不错,只是觉得整体比较平,可以在重点单词上发重一些,或者做适当的放慢,效果会更好哦
T2 在最后的时候有点卡壳,其余的挺好的
楼主加油!

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欣儿7777777 发表于 2013-7-28 16:31
内容上都没有问题,楼主说的很好哦。
T1 说到的很具体了,语音也不错,只是觉得整体比较平,可以在重点单词 ...

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copyzero2 发表于 2013-7-28 10:25
7.26 不好意思,无颜面对你,这么晚才帮你评~~

T1:

太详细了~内牛满面T-T

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