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本帖最后由 teenyl 于 2014-3-31 22:31 编辑

加入互改小组，感谢大家的帮忙！不用留情，麻烦大家了~ :loveliness:

8.1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If a student is having difficulty studying a course, it is better for the student to turn to a friend who is good at this course than to turn to his/her teacher for help.

8.1 独立写作.doc (27.5 KB, 下载次数: 10)

8.3 TPO10 综合写作

8.3 TPO 10 综合写作-Teeny.doc (27.5 KB, 下载次数: 6)

8.5 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow are too strict.

8.5 独立写作-Teeny.doc (27.5 KB, 下载次数: 6)

8.10 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should buy things made by their own country, even if they are more expensive than things made in other countries.

8.10-Teeny.doc (14.5 KB, 下载次数: 2)

8.13 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.

8.13 独立写作——Teeny.doc (27.5 KB, 下载次数: 6)

8.20 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To increase economic growth, government can neglect environmental concerns.

8.20-teeny.doc (28 KB, 下载次数: 1)

8.22 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.

8.22—独立写作Teeny.doc (28 KB, 下载次数: 5)

8.27
Is the most important characteristic of a good political or business leader is the ability to take responsibility for mistakes?

8.27 独立写作 Teeny.doc (28.5 KB, 下载次数: 3)

9.3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past.

9.3 独立写作-Teeny.doc (33.5 KB, 下载次数: 10)

12.2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.

Put more money in advertising-Teeny-2013-12-2.doc (41.5 KB, 下载次数: 5)

12.3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching is harder than it was in the past.

Teaching harder than before-Teeny-2013-12-3.doc (44 KB, 下载次数: 3)

12.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for governments to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for the future generations.

protect wild animal and wilderness areas-Teeny-2013-12-4.doc (24 KB, 下载次数: 3)

12.10
Do you agree or disagree: All high school students should take basic economics courses.

12.10-独立写作-basic economic courses.docx (27.24 KB, 下载次数: 2)

12.16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should give school-age children money as a reward for getting a high mark (grade) in school.

give children money as a reward for getting high mark-2013-12-16.doc (42 KB, 下载次数: 12)

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2.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is not necessary for university students to attend classes as long as they can pass their examinations.

2-18 necessary to attend classes-Teeny.doc (41 KB, 下载次数: 3)

2.25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand the past.

2-25 necessary to understand the past.doc (43.5 KB, 下载次数: 5)

2.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries.

2-27 scientist should be responsible for~~~.docx (29 KB, 下载次数: 2)

3.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books any more.
这篇不知道写了多长时间。。。败了。。。

3-10 not use printed books.doc (39.5 KB, 下载次数: 4)

3.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should give school-age children money as a reward for getting a high mark (grade) in school.

3-14 use money as a reward-Teeny.doc (44.5 KB, 下载次数: 3)

3.23
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated

3-23 technology makes life simpler or complicated.doc (46 KB, 下载次数: 5)

3.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success
这篇写的很不满意，时间用了很长又觉得例子写的很不充分。。。麻烦批改同学了。

3-26 To remain happy and optimistic when you fail.docx (15.02 KB, 下载次数: 4)

3.28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose

3-28 job with high pay but easy to lose.docx (14.27 KB, 下载次数: 6)

3.31
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past

3-31 food health.docx (34.85 KB, 下载次数: 3)

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我也是第一次加入~~ 建议以后将文件名加上自己的寄托名字哦~~
这样保存的时候比较方便~

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zhengpw 发表于 2013-8-2 11:01
我也是第一次加入~~ 建议以后将文件名加上自己的寄托名字哦~~
这样保存的时候比较方便~

好的，谢谢。

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发表于 2013-8-2 19:54:02 |显示全部楼层

加油！

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加油加油~~

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亲，求我的8月1号独立作文作文修改文档啊~~~

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zhengpw 发表于 2013-8-3 09:23
亲，求我的8月1号独立作文作文修改文档啊~~~

谢谢批改~~非常有帮助，谢谢！你的批改已回复啦~不好意思晚了点。

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欣儿7777777 发表于 2013-8-2 19:54
加油！

谢谢批改，嗯，我再琢磨琢磨~

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改好了~第一次改综合写作，有错的话谅解一下~！

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wilsonw 发表于 2013-8-4 08:12
改好了~第一次改综合写作，有错的话谅解一下~！

谢谢~！指出了很多小词上的错误，嗯，第三段我再听听~多谢啦！

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亲~改0802来啦~你们今天都好早的哦...
我觉得亲写的很好的！！在规定时间内敲这么多字很牛啊！！我完全超时了~~~~(>_<)~~~~

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一起加油哈！！~

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Veronique0303 发表于 2013-8-4 11:43
亲~改0802来啦~你们今天都好早的哦...
我觉得亲写的很好的！！在规定时间内敲这么多字很牛啊！！我完全超时 ...

..我也超时了。没写上时间的习惯，嗯，下次我也把时间字数都写上。
因为综合写作练的很少，所以写起来还是有困难的。。。一起加油！谢谢啦！

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