【独立写作】 Teeny 作业贴

teenylUID: 3459749

加入互改小组，感谢大家的帮忙！不用留情，麻烦大家了~ :loveliness:

8.1 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If a student is having difficulty studying a course, it is better for the student to turn to a friend who is good at this course than to turn to his/her teacher for help.


8.3 TPO10 综合写作


8.5 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The rules that the whole society today expect young people to follow are too strict.


8.10 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should buy things made by their own country, even if they are more expensive than things made in other countries.


8.13 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to succeed, you should be more like others than be different from everyone else.


8.20 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To increase economic growth, government can neglect environmental concerns.


8.22 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Younger school children (aged five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, language, science and history.


8.27
Is the most important characteristic of a good political or business leader is the ability to take responsibility for mistakes?


9.3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Nowadays, neighbors depend on each other less than people in the past.


12.2
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order for a business to succeed, it must put more money in advertising.


12.3
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teaching is harder than it was in the past.


12.4
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important for governments to protect wild animals and wilderness areas for the future generations.


12.10
Do you agree or disagree: All high school students should take basic economics courses.


12.16
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should give school-age children money as a reward for getting a high mark (grade) in school.


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2.18
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is not necessary for university students to attend classes as long as they can pass their examinations.


2.25
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In order to solve the problems in the present and future, it is necessary to understand the past.


2.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Scientists should be responsible for the negative impacts of their discoveries.


3.10
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? In 20 years from now on, students will not use printed books any more.
这篇不知道写了多长时间。。。败了。。。


3.14
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents should give school-age children money as a reward for getting a high mark (grade) in school.


3.23
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology designed to make our life simpler actually makes our life more complicated


3.26
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? To remain happy and optimistic when you fail is more important than achieving success
这篇写的很不满意，时间用了很长又觉得例子写的很不充分。。。麻烦批改同学了。


3.28
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to take a secure job with a low pay than to take a job with a high pay but is easy to lose


3.31
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The food we eat today is much healthier than in the past

zhengpwUID: 3434922

我也是第一次加入~~ 建议以后将文件名加上自己的寄托名字哦~~
这样保存的时候比较方便~

teenylUID: 3459749

zhengpw 发表于 2013-8-2 11:01
我也是第一次加入~~ 建议以后将文件名加上自己的寄托名字哦~~
这样保存的时候比较方便~

好的，谢谢。

欣儿7777777UID: 3424144

加油！

zhengpwUID: 3434922

加油加油~~

zhengpwUID: 3434922

亲，求我的8月1号独立作文作文修改文档啊~~~

teenylUID: 3459749

zhengpw 发表于 2013-8-3 09:23
亲，求我的8月1号独立作文作文修改文档啊~~~

谢谢批改~~非常有帮助，谢谢！你的批改已回复啦~不好意思晚了点。

teenylUID: 3459749

欣儿7777777 发表于 2013-8-2 19:54
加油！

谢谢批改，嗯，我再琢磨琢磨~

wilsonwUID: 3457994

改好了~第一次改综合写作，有错的话谅解一下~！

teenylUID: 3459749

wilsonw 发表于 2013-8-4 08:12
改好了~第一次改综合写作，有错的话谅解一下~！

谢谢~！指出了很多小词上的错误，嗯，第三段我再听听~多谢啦！

Veronique0303UID: 3454401

亲~改0802来啦~你们今天都好早的哦...
我觉得亲写的很好的！！在规定时间内敲这么多字很牛啊！！我完全超时了~~~~(>_<)~~~~

一起加油哈！！~

teenylUID: 3459749

Veronique0303 发表于 2013-8-4 11:43
亲~改0802来啦~你们今天都好早的哦...
我觉得亲写的很好的！！在规定时间内敲这么多字很牛啊！！我完全超时 ...

..我也超时了。没写上时间的习惯，嗯，下次我也把时间字数都写上。
因为综合写作练的很少，所以写起来还是有困难的。。。一起加油！谢谢啦！

teenylUID: 3459749

49502291 发表于 2013-8-6 13:50
改好了。。

谢谢修改，看到很多问题。
但有一点可能不太认同，第一段的hold the opposite  view 是反对的前面some people提出的年轻人应该遵守这些严格的rules的。并不是opposite题目中的statement.

还是感谢！提出了很多很有价值的修改意见。

伊莉莎黑UID: 3458183

迟到了，不好意思。。。。。谁能治治我的拖延症。。。。。。