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p846077307UID: 3418960

8.15
我觉得lz没有学会连读，一句话每个单词的轻重都是不一样的 让我印象最深的是lz的make it 这两个词一定是it弱读 i 的音要和e 连起来 而不是两个单词都很重的读出来。 都是要出国的人~ 发音还是要注意一下
t1. children are like black paper？？？  white paper 吧   only发音不对  in another way 不对吧应该是using another way
t2 Firstly 发音错了 come说成了 孔目。。   reasons也不对
t3 一开始就说he think 完全没说是谁 还有最后一句and food there lz应该是想说 eat 吧。
t4 he one example 应该是 he use one example吧
t5 money 说成了many   do not 口语直接说 don‘t 就好啦
t6 long time to see ? long time no see 吧
我很奇怪的是lz有些句子也会连读 t6说的就很好啊。。。 可能是太紧张了 加油！！

只有梦想UID: 3459753

p846077307 发表于 2013-8-16 13:29
8.15
我觉得lz没有学会连读，一句话每个单词的轻重都是不一样的 让我印象最深的是lz的make it 这两个词一 ...

多谢你的评价，确实很多人说我没有连读。
那个black读错了，本来想的是空白 blank
正在听你的。

lhm77499UID: 3420601

8.16评价咯
主要挑不足的地方说了
task1  cheerful的发音ee和ful需要注意一下。quanty examination？没有听请清楚。
内容上，cheerfulness你从energetic来展开，但我觉得前面的描述是不是有一些太多了，比如I like exercise, so I have a strong body，这个其实完全可以省略的，建议强调一下后面的tell jokes和make friends easy。个人建议哈。
task2 内容很不错，从responsibility和other ways来展开。但是超时了，而且比较多。建议还是按照时间限制来。
语法上，have to pay而不是had to pay,后面好几个had好像也是同样的问题。然后confident growth environment是什么意思？然后，satisfaction没有复数。。。play kids听起来有一点吓人哈！哈哈
语音上，断句和间隔上有一点问题，给人不是太easy的感觉，建议pay some attention。

Good luck on the coming test!

Irene1084UID: 3420779

【8.15】
Task 3
1. everytime he "past away?" 听起来很像passed away(去世)...表达“经过”用pass by/walk by都可以。  此外，"a waste of room" better be: a waste of space
2. he/she的问题，有几次用了he，需注意一下
3. currently, the food there is not only tasty, but also healthy.听力中“add some healthy food to the menu”这个细节漏了，可能会扣分

Task 4
1. 概念的全称是flagship species，不光是flagship
2. very likely by people? likely表示“有可能的”，不能表达“喜爱”。此处可说：they are favored by people
3. 从book之后的过程语言有点乱，几处听不清楚。建议再对照笔记整理一下语言，计时练几遍
4. “trees number grow...and other species grow together”最后的意思对了，但这样表达没做过题的人估计不懂啥意思。

Task 5
1. "no access to her new house?" internet access
2. 还是he/she的问题
3. suggestion的部分还是感觉表达的不太清楚。你是想说在学校容易集中精力，不会分心干别的？这个理由不太convincing。并且，这个solution的弊端——she has to go to school only to use the computers even if she doesn't have any classes并没有通过你的建议得到解决。

Task 6
"include say,do and what they thought" 这句实在是像在念笔记，不是一个英文表达。
这题要点是没问题的

感觉表达是个大问题。建议剩下的时间好好抠一抠语言。口语虽然比较随意，不像写作一样苛求语言的简洁完整，但一定要准确表达意思。楼主不妨练完之后把录音拿给你没做过题的同学听一下，以他们能否听懂作为考量标准来练习。

加油~！！

只有梦想UID: 3459753

Irene1084 发表于 2013-8-17 22:41
【8.15】
Task 3
1. everytime he "past away?" 听起来很像passed away(去世)...表达“经过”用pass by/w ...

多谢版大！建议很准确，很到位。真是学习了！而且给我评的那么仔细，likely这样的口语都能听出问题来，还是内容上面要注意了。

能再请教一个问题吗？我口语有时候是一个一个字蹦的，比如说15号的1.2题，但是有时候又好一些，19日1.2题，那么哪一种比较好呢?是打了鸡血速度快但是一个一个字蹦好？还是语速慢些但是连贯更好一些呢？多谢版大！

Irene1084UID: 3420779

只有梦想 发表于 2013-8-19 10:38
多谢版大！建议很准确，很到位。真是学习了！而且给我评的那么仔细，likely这样的口语都能听出问题来，还 ...

语速慢些好，绝大多数人语速加快了都容易让别人听不清。
只是别一个一个蹦，该连读的地方还是要连读的~

joycedevernoUID: 3313960

T1 T2 我觉得楼主内容没问题 注意稍微打磨一下语音语调估计会增色很多~~~
T3 内容木有问题 比较全~但temperature重音注意下哈 还有主谓一致我说的时候也是总容易忘
T4 concept这个也注意一下发音 因为基本这道题都得用介词~ so many free choices
然后后面结尾那边感觉缺点东西呢？就是 是不该往优点回扣一下呢？ 我也不大确定哈 因为这题我一直给跪的说。。。楼主自己感受一下吧还是
T5 我觉得这题结构可以优化一下 我不知道别人有木有推荐你robin那个帖子 你可以看一下
T6 哈哈 这题其实没问题 就个别一个两个语法错误 不过后面太有爱了~~~！！楼主不小心还爆了个“那个”出来~~！！！我瞬间知音了~~ 可惜 rater感受不到我们同样的笑点     

思路上觉得除了5可以优化 其他没什么太大问题
就是有些词我觉得楼主可以注意一下发音 比如professor 呀 concept这些必出现的词~
思想不跑偏~发音慢慢练！
一起加油~！

Irene1084UID: 3420779

【8.19】
Task 1
这题应该让Robin来给你听，哈哈;P
suits的例子OK，后面解释的也不错
感觉开头有点问题，make money by their own hands...knowledge, 兽医和餐馆老板也很需要勤奋和知识啊，这个理由不太成立……其实你不用比较这三个职业。只讲你选的那个就好了，其他两个不用提。

Task 2 OK

Task 3
"got a problem of the heat price"？...proposal讲的不准。是通过lowering the temperture in classrooms on weekday evenings and on weekends，来达到reduce heating cost的目的

Task 4
前面讲的挺好的，结尾有点怪，“from this example...such a few choices”这样说感觉原题是有褒贬色彩的，但实际上人家只是客观介绍。结合概念的时候，你可以就简单说：so from this example, you can see how franchising works in the real business world.

Task 5
"another professor is very professional..."so what? 时间在压缩一下，把这个理由解释完：
so although he does not major in the woman's field, as an experienced biologist, he can still offer all the help the woman needs

Task 6
整体OK。还是有he/she傻傻分不清楚的问题。你可以在笔记旁边写个大大的SHE提醒自己

考前口语还是每天都要练。一二题要开始脱稿了，尽量让自己看到题目稍微想一下就能直接开口说。
3-6掌握好自己的答题节奏，多看几遍Robin破解口语高分那个帖子。
考前不再给你听啦，加油考试吧！Good luck!

只有梦想UID: 3459753

Irene1084 发表于 2013-8-20 17:55
【8.19】
Task 1
这题应该让Robin来给你听，哈哈

多谢前辈了，你已经帮助我很多了！很多建议都非常的受用！很多细节都听出来了，前辈太用心了！
我现在也放轻松了，顺其自然了。
再次感谢前辈！

只有梦想UID: 3459753

joycedeverno 发表于 2013-8-20 00:37
T1 T2 我觉得楼主内容没问题 注意稍微打磨一下语音语调估计会增色很多~~~
T3 内容木有问题 比较全~但tempe ...

哈哈， 我也发现那个 “那个”真的是太突兀了。。。囧
正在听你的录音，抱歉有点迟了，马上就好！

未央1992UID: 3361794

821
1,just用得过多且不恰当，最后那个例子其实不太好
2,prefer A to B,开始说summer的那句，短句好乱，有些没听清

lhm77499UID: 3420601

10.7
t1very good at pronunciation!  oral english practice. With your second reason support your main idea, I suggest that you say that you could talk to them and make friends with them.  this is enough.
t2your response is eminent in that you avail statistics to support your idea, which is good...and open your wise is not a good expression, you could say that this stimulates you to come up with ideas
t3you could try to slow down when you begin this section so that you could organize your response in a nicer way, although you have done a good job
t4it is impressive that you response in a rather detailed way and this proves your listening abilities.
t5I think your first reason which is about the weather could be turned to follow the second reason....I mean change the order.
t6good. you have included all main points in your response.

lhm77499UID: 3420601

10.7
t1very good at pronunciation!  oral english practice. With your second reason support your main idea, I suggest that you say that you could talk to them and make friends with them.  this is enough.
t2your response is eminent in that you avail statistics to support your idea, which is good...and open your wise is not a good expression, you could say that this stimulates you to come up with ideas
t3you could try to slow down when you begin this section so that you could organize your response in a nicer way, although you have done a good job
t4it is impressive that you response in a rather detailed way and this proves your listening abilities.
t5I think your first reason which is about the weather could be turned to follow the second reason....I mean change the order.
t6good. you have included all main points in your response.

xueyicathyUID: 3472093

HW 10.9
Q1. only 45 secs. You don't need to focus much on changing phrases. Just be clear.
Q2. Avoid saying 'couples of reasons' in the beginning.  You are not sure how many reasons you will provide. One specific reason is good enough.
Q3-Q6: only 1 min. your answers are much longer than 1 min.

A little bit hard for me to understand your pronunciation.

Suggest you read Crazyrobin's suggestions CAREFULLY and follow the rules.

lhm77499UID: 3420601

10.8
非常抱歉来晚了。
You have done a good work both in time management and pronunciaion. Still, I have several suggestions particular to your each response.
t1As  for this one, strictly speaking, the significance of your enrollment has not been focused for your miss of an important festival or the care of your families does not directly relate to this.  I think you could focus on how this university important to you.
t2this one is good.  But i think you could still make improvement, as you could describe your feeling after appreciation the painting or listening the music and how these help you relax.
t3This one is good.
t4you have grasped details even about the the name of place and people, this is very impressive.  The word jeans should be pronounced as  [dʒɪːnz].
t5 the coherence has been interrupted when you proposed your choice, however, it is good that you reoriented in no time.BTW....what is the voice at the end of your response...:)
t6 again, your response is impressive in that you have grasped many details in your response.