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发表于 2013-8-14 10:56:47 |显示全部楼层
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8.13题目
Task 1 Your university is planning to prevent students from bring their own computers into classroom. What is your opinion and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this program? Include reasons and details to support your response.[tsound]3052[/tsound]
Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The first year students should live with students of higher grades. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.[tsound]3056[/tsound]
task3 [tsound]3067[/tsound]
task4 [tsound]3073[/tsound]
task5[tsound]3077[/tsound]
8.15
Task 1  How to improve the quality of education in your country? Include reasons and details to support your response.[tsound]3217[/tsound]
Task 2 Some people prefer to live in a place most of their life. Other people prefer to move to different places. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response. [tsound]3220[/tsound]
8.16
Task 1 Which one of the following characteristics does your friends like you most: cheerfulness, kindness or intelligent? Explain why. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. [tsound]3270[/tsound]
Task 2 What kind of job will you choose? To find a job through which you can get a lot of money or to find a job through which you can get great personal satisfaction? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. [tsound]3272[/tsound]
Task 3 [tsound]3276[/tsound]
task 4[tsound]3279[/tsound]
task5[tsound]3282[/tsound]
task6[tsound]3285[/tsound]

8.17
Task 1 If a high school is planning to organize an after-school activity for its students, what kind of activity would you recommend and why?[tsound]3334[/tsound]
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is not necessary for students to memorize historical data such as names and dates because students can easily find them on the Internet. [tsound]3336[/tsound]
Task 3

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发表于 2013-8-14 19:40:36 |显示全部楼层
哇,楼主重新开了新贴呢,先写着,等楼主好了再继续写
8.13
发音语调语速都很好呢
T1 听了楼主的答案才知道要说自己的opinion呢
surf->surfing, like take down notes->like taking notes
T2 例子可以再具体一些,像help me a lot, advice for successful life就有些抽象了
T3 reading passage的复述很赞,但是反对理由内容不太够,比如第二个理由,宁愿不要说结尾
T4 挺好的,介绍concept的时候最好把这个植物不从别的植物获取nutrient这一特性加上,live in rainforest就不需要说了
T5

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发表于 2013-8-16 22:43:05 |显示全部楼层
hi! 8.15 谢谢lz的批改
task1 发音because,注意不要发成be course。例子好好,其他没发现神马问题
task2 这个说的很好,就是最后learn the new environment可以换个表达,get familiar with the new environment

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发表于 2013-8-17 23:18:17 |显示全部楼层
楼主,我8.16的作业还没有写完,才开始学习TASK 3-6的表达,我做完了,来改你的作业啊!

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发表于 2013-8-18 11:09:13 |显示全部楼层
为什么我没看到8.17的作业QAQ

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发表于 2013-8-18 22:27:22 |显示全部楼层
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T1     楼主发音很流畅很标准,展开也不错。注意一下时态,break up是不是要用过去时,还有一些说错的地方出现了口头禅“啊,不”是中文的发音吗?可能和楼主说得快有关系。

T2  展开很好,没有什么问题。

T3  说得很好,信息点都说到了。

T4  楼主信息点都说到了,但是需要把reference group 和听力中的例子结合起来。

T5  说得不错。最后貌似不需要让步,直接说优点多好

T6  听力我没大听明白,生词好多啊!大概听了一下楼主说的,很流畅。

  

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发表于 2013-8-19 20:58:32 |显示全部楼层
【8.17】抱歉不知道卤煮看了新帖QAQ
T1
[You only talk to that u can feel relax and communicate with others],the reason is not specific enough. U know?Why can you feel relax? Why can you communicate with others? The others like study group, study club can also provide the chance for u to communicate with others.
So, [I could feel my body was recovered due to the perspiration and the strong shakes, which make my body feel refreshed. ][basketball is a team sport, our movements based on our communication balabalabala ]etc., may be a better choice.
THERE'S NOT MANY GRAMMATICAL FAULTS.

T2
【data[s CANCEL]】data is a pl n
【Take[Taking] myself as an example】
THERE’S SEVERAL FAULTS ON TENSE IN UR EXAMPLE
因为之前评论用英语写例子的时候发现很多东西都尝试用英语了,理解就好=、=语法错误不敢保证QAQ

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