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发表于 2013-8-26 21:28:16 |只看该作者
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1.说这个经历还是用过去时态比较好吧,其他没什么问题
2.opposite example用的不太合适,lost courses应该为fail in some courses 更流畅一些就更好了~

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本帖最后由 丽莎 于 2013-9-1 18:30 编辑

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The University decides to set a cooking class for students to let them have better understanding of the nutrients and health. Do you think it is a reasonable decision or not?

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Modern people have better life style than people who lived in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.



8.29
Describe the disadvantages of shopping online. Include reasons and examples to support your response.

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Some people play games for enjoyment, others play games for winning. Which one do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.




8.28
The University decides to set a cooking class for students to let them have better understanding of the nutrients and health. Do you think it is a reasonable decision or not?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Spending time with family is more important than working.



8.26
Your friend wants to build up a restaurant. Please give some suggestions or recommendations. Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.

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Do you prefer to buy an electronic product as soon as it becomes available in the market or do you prefer to wait and buy it until it has been in the market for a while?





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Describe a celebration or public event you attended recently. Explain why it was memorable to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.

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Some people think that students should do part time jobs. Other people think that students should focus on their study without doing part time jobs. What is your opinion and why?

8.24
Describe an activity you enjoy doing in your school recently. Why do you enjoy it? Include specific reasons and details to support your response.

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Do you prefer to travel by car or by public transportation such as bus when you are traveling in a strange city?

8.23
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What advice would you like to give a friend who got a new job? Explain why this suggestion is important. Include reasons and details to support your response.


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Do you make plans for your free time or you do things spontaneously in your free time? Explain why.



这是今天的作业哟8.21
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Talk about a positive experience you recently had working with another person. Explain why this experience was important to you.

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Some people prefer to live in places where climate doesn\'t change very much. While others prefer to live in places where climate changes with seasons. Which one do you prefer? Include reasons and details in your explanation.


这是昨天的作业哟8.20
不知道为什么论坛不能录音><
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 757253&third=15

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Which job do you prefer? A lawyer, an animal doctor or a restaurant owner? Include reasons and examples in your answer.

Some schools offer classes early in the morning while others provide classes late at night. Which one do you prefer and why?

8.18
Your university is planning to allow students to park their cars on the university parking lot. What\'s your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Some students prefer a grade that is based on many short assignments,while others prefer a grade based one or two long assignments. Which one do you prefer and why?

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丽莎 发表于 2013-8-26 19:46
不是呢,因为一般会录两遍,刚开始准备一两个礼拜,所以对自己要求没那么严格><
而且不好意思把绊绊磕磕 ...

那也很好啦!加油!

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丽莎 发表于 2013-8-26 19:46
不是呢,因为一般会录两遍,刚开始准备一两个礼拜,所以对自己要求没那么严格><
而且不好意思把绊绊磕磕 ...

那也很好啦!加油!

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发表于 2013-8-28 07:08:01 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 大大的泥鳅 于 2013-8-28 07:09 编辑

8.26
T1:楼主的发音比较正哈,however,有点不准,建议把例子都换为过去时态 the coffee was terrible

T2:比较流利,例子也很清楚,many problems,复数问题……其他的挺好了,是take my explore as an example吗?求解答

楼主的语速稍稍可以加快一些,就好了~

另外,我的作业https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... age=1#pid1777484920求批改~

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发表于 2013-8-29 20:57:53 |只看该作者
妹纸的声音也很好听,只是录音的效果有点电流声,有些单词听不太清楚。

task1 的"XXX noodles“没听清楚,整体结构挺好的,发音也挺准的,只是如果起头的时候用过去的时间,那后面的句子都要注意改成过去式

task2 中间的那一段例子,整体没有听太清楚,貌似是说你有什么工作,需要做额外的时间,然后又订了票,去欧洲陪亲人,然后就结束了,所以不太了解,不好点评哈

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发表于 2013-8-30 22:01:37 |只看该作者
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楼主的语音语调很不错啊。整篇都蛮流畅的,可以适当再增加点内容,多增加点细节。但是整体还是很不错的
TASK2
第一句话着实没有听懂啊~~然后后面的例子也很好的,最好还是多加点内容,因为我感觉楼主最后一句话:not only ...but also ...有点空的感觉。可以说一些具体的内容:例如可以说 after a long day work , I was already frustrated. I just wanna have some relax by playing such game and searching for strategies online will just make me more tired. (纯属建议哈)

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发表于 2013-8-31 14:27:17 |只看该作者
妹纸,我又来了。。。

0830的作业第一题版主改题目了,之前的题目与0828的T1重复
T1的内容比较充实,但是由于营养不良而造成的cancer,听起来好可怕。。。不知道考官会怎么想啊。。

T2的内容就少一些了,语速比较慢,而且内容稍少,别的神马的都挺好的

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发表于 2013-9-3 11:58:11 |只看该作者
9.1  妹纸声音好温楼~
T1 第一句,应该是prefer to do sth或者是prefer doing sth吧,掉了个to
T2 没什么问题了
两个题目内容都很充实,有detail和example,总的来说不错!

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本帖最后由 Bruceee 于 2013-9-8 18:26 编辑

LZ的口音应该是很好的,但是the bad recording effects takes me great efforts to follow- -
T1 可以,但如果再加一点细节就更好了。

T2 例子应该用过去式,有些地方LZ用的是现在式。

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https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1624788-1-1.html

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发表于 2013-9-8 20:17:31 |只看该作者
楼主语音语调很不错呢
T1 没有啥问题 一遍就听明白了~
T2 也挺详细 就是楼主想下一句的时候不要有口水音撒~~

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发表于 2013-9-9 12:47:54 |只看该作者
9.8作业 录了叫我哈~~~

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发表于 2013-9-10 21:10:36 |只看该作者
语音语调nice,灰常淡定
T1
1. 啊的略多
2. 主题就可以直接说art,内容很好没什么问题

T2
perfect 类比student union,学习了
内容很好,students' union很好的类比,学习了。
有点卡顿

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发表于 2013-9-11 23:33:58 |只看该作者
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两道题都用了take my own experience for example ,我觉得是不是就 take myself for example 或者直接for example 比较好,个人建议
task1 内容没有问题,有些不流畅,不过如果是只录一两遍就相当不错了
task2 I cannot distinguish 应该是过去时 could not ,first chance to go to the zoo was your classmates这句话明显语义不通

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