雅思小作文精讲--剑桥图表--流程图 B6T3

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题目
The diagrams below show the life cycle of the silkworm and the stages in the production of silk cloth.
流程图说了两个事情the life cycle和the stages

第一段
The first diagram shows that there are four main stages in the life of the silkworm.
第一句话简单明快，点名了有四个过程，为第一个图的中心句，下面只需要把四个过程说清楚就行了。

First of all, eggs are produced by the moth and it takes ten days for each egg to become a silkworm larva that feeds on mulberry leaves.
说明了第五个过程（从moth到eggs）和第一个过程（从eggs到larva），其实这个流程图的每个过程的只包括三个要素：原料，时间和产物
第五个过程：原料 moths, 时间未说明，产物eggs
第一个过程：
原料：eggs, 注意
时间：take ten days
产物：become a silkworm larva

This stage lasts for up to six weeks until the larva produces a cocoon of silk thread around itself.
说明了第二和第三个过程，其实这只是一个过程，从silk larva到a cocoon of silk thread (原来图上标注的3,4是一码事啊，这个要没有背景知识还真不知道)，三要素
原料：the larva
时间：This stage lasts for up to six weeks (up to表示上限)
产物：a cocoon of silk thread around itself

After a period of about three weeks, the adult moths eventually emerge from these cocoons and the life cycle begins again.
说明了第四个过程，从cocoons到moths，三要素
原料：these cocoons
时间：after a period of about three weeks (图上标注的是16 days)
产物：the adult moths


第二段
The cocoons are the raw material used for the production of silk cloth.
指出了cocoons和the production of silk cloth的关系, 说明了两个图的联系

Once selected they are boiled in water and the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage.
一句话把图中的select, boil和unwind的三个阶段都说到了
select: once selected
boil: they are boiled in water
unwind: the threads can be separated in the unwinding stage.

Each thread is between 300 and 900 meters long, which means they can be twisted together, dyed and then used to produce cloth in the weaving stage.
将twist和weave过程进行了说明
Twist: they can be twisted together
Weave: (they are) used to produce cloth in the weaving stage.

第三段
Overall, the diagrams show that the cocoon stage of the silkworm can be used to produce silk cloth through a very simple process.
Overall点出了第二个图的主题，为第二个图的中心句

词汇句型积累
表示一段时间
It takes ten years for each egg to become…
This stage lasts for up to six weeks until… 注意until其实就是before的近义词
After a period of about three weeks,

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