榨干Economist中的写作好词好句8月28日

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汇总贴  https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1630971-1-1.html


本来在练习听写的时候发现，economist的文章真心好精美，于是萌发了榨干（好吧，就我这能力，我应该榨不干）economist中好词好句的想法，然后就实施起来了
希望对大家的写作也有点帮助，希望大家能从中得到比较地道的表达方法和好词好句。不知道为什么，复制粘贴后，有些单词会连在一起，如an exaggeration 变成anexaggeration，我在发表之前会检查一下，但是如果还有的话请在下面跟帖。


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一楼是附有音频和word文档）
二楼是翻译练习
三楼是解析

三楼以下随便大家想干什么干什么，不过我觉得既然看都看了，就随便做一下翻译，增加记忆力呗。

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第一步便是找份工作，迈出这一步很难。十六至二十四岁的年轻人中有百分之十六的人未就业。伊万范伯格，世代机会（一个受到青年拥护的组织）的负责人，抱怨道：“年轻人没有实现美国梦的机会。”

这言辞着实夸张，然而年轻人应当明智地塑造他们在互联网上的行为。与其进行大规模的面试，一些公司增加了通过屏幕确定学生身份和他们接触最后确定哪些学生可用的招聘机制，克利夫达恩克，招聘机构Elm Talent的负责人，这么说。他认为那些未就业的学生可以将他们所掌握的技能和资格证书罗列出来通过社交网络发布出来。着重点出用人单位关注的一些字眼，如“领导力”，这些也许能有一点帮助。

如果某些啃老族要在鞭策下才行动，你可以经常问他要房租。经最近的调查有百分之八十八的老人认为孩子在他们那里居住应当付房租。你也可以要求他们做更多的家务，哪怕这可能导致肉被烧焦了，或者衬衫被烫得缩了尺寸。尽管如此，许多家长让成年的后代以分期付款的法子和他们一起住。在某种情况下，这种法子有一定财政意义。抵押贷款很难申请。如果不用交房租，收入微薄的年轻人可以节衣缩食为新家筹备好足够的押金。

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Getting a job would be the obvious first step, but this is hard. Some 16% of 16- to-24-year-olds are unemployed. Evan Feinberg, the head of Generation Opportunity,a youth advocacy organization, complains that"young people don't have the chance to achieve the American dream."

That is an exaggeration[k1] , but youngsters would be wise to polish the way they appear online， rather than interviewing lots of candidates. Companies increasingly screen students to identify and then contact the ones who seem most employable, says Cliff Dank, the head of Elm Talent, a recruitment agency.Those who cannot find work should consider listing their skills and qualifications on social media sites, he says, sprinkling in a few keywords that employers like, such as "leadership", may also help.

If a boomerang child needs an extra nudge to budge, you can always charge him rent. In a recent survey 88% ofoldies thought kids should pay up. You can also demand that he does more household chores, though that may be a recipe for burnt meat loaf and shrunken shirts[k2] .However, many parents let their adult offspring[k3] lodge withthem on easy terms. In a way, this makes financial sense. Mortgages are harder toobtain than they were before the crash. Ill-paid youngsters can save enough for a deposit on a new home more quickly if they are not paying rent today.

[k1]可以努力用在口语上，比如说：电子邮件是否会取代手写邮件，可以回答，some body say that。。。。but I thinkthat is an exaggeration。

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[k3]youngsters同义替换