[口语小组]Vivien作业帖（9.28）

vivienhaoUID: 3464615

想请各位给我点评的同学们都给我打个分，也有个直观的感觉出现在自己到底进展到什么程度，谢谢！

0923 全套
Task 1 Describe a celebration or public event you attended recently. Explain why it was memorable to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some people like to purchase books from a book store while others like to borrow books from the library. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO11
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0922 全套
Task 1 What are the advantages of further education abroad?
Task 2 Do you make plans for your free time or do things spontaneously in your free time? Explain why.
Task 3-6 TPO12
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1h3yo9


0919 全套
Task 1 Talk about a time when someone (your friends, family or teachers) gave you advice to solve a problem.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is important to remember the past and learn things from the past. Use specific reasons to support your answer.
Task 3-6 TPO15
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 6&uk=1023717176

0917 全套
Task 1 A friend of yours wants to work for one year before he enters the university. What's your opinion? Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to attend sports. Other people prefer to watch others play sports. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO17
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 7&uk=1023717176

0913 全套 （今儿基本一条过，自己听了也好多毛病，麻烦给打个分）
Task 1 Your university is planning to ask each student to do 40 hours of community service per year. What is your opinion and why? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this program? Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should encourage students to use computers from primary school age on. Give details and examples to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO21
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 5&uk=1023717176

0908 T1&2
Task 1 It is generally agreed that society benefits from the work of its members. In your opinion, which type of contribution do you think is valued most by your society: primary school teachers, artists or nurses? Give specific reasons to support your answer.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: 18-year-old adults are not mature enough to vote. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
今天这两题好难
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 3&uk=1023717176

0906
Task 1 Describe an interesting experience in a restaurant or a café. Explain why it was memorable to you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to listen to or watch news everyday, while others prefer to listen to or watch news occasionally. Which way do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 3&uk=1023717176
加班到半夜在录音，声音有点迷离，大家见谅啊

0905 T1&T2
Task 1 Describe an tool or object that you rely on often in your daily life. Explain why it is important to you. Include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 What kind of job will you choose? A job through which you can get a lot of money or a job through which you can get great personal satisfaction? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 2&uk=1023717176

0904全套
Task 1 Parents need to make sure their children lead healthy lives, what can parents do to help their children have healthy lifestyles? Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Some people believe that it is better for children to grow up in a small town. Others, however, believe that it is better for children to grow up in a big city. Which do you think is better?
Task 3-6 TPO4

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0903 全套
Task 1 Which type of skill do you admire most? Sports skill，language skill or art skill? Include specific reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Some people prefer to have friends who share the similar ideas of the world. Others prefer to have friends who hold different ideas of the world. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Task 3-6 TPO5
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 6&uk=1023717176

0902 T1&T2
http://pan.baidu.com/share/link? ... 2&uk=1023717176

成成儿UID: 3243018

0902
T1:从发音和用词听得出听得出LZ的口语很好呢～
说理部分比例子多，建议把最后例子里的robot能做的事情说的详细一点点～
T2:???一开始几个词都不懂呀，应该是洗衣机的功能，求教啊～
原因说的很好，尤其是第二个用了反面的例子，很全面～

vivienhaoUID: 3464615

成成儿 发表于 2013-9-3 15:30
0902
T1:从发音和用词听得出听得出LZ的口语很好呢～
说理部分比例子多，建议把最后例子里的robot能做的事 ...

同意，第一题说理太多了，后来就没什么时间展开了，其实感觉貌似举一个例子展开说就可以了，是不？
第二题就是想到了一些杀菌功能，比如紫外线臭氧之类的，呵呵~

谢谢提建议！

.MaggieUID: 3456903

9.3
T1.as ..(没听懂）.student两个skills都没听懂,所以内容也没听懂...不过我发现楼主的语音很好～
T2. lack of specific details, too abstract. this kind of answer is not recommedable.
T3.很好～
T4.只是把阅读和讲座顺序换了下～这样能算不缺例子和主题的联系吗～好纠结~
T5.第二个：she ask(es);      自己的advice感觉都没说什么实质的东西
T6.OK

发音好又fluency.

vivienhaoUID: 3464615

.Maggie 发表于 2013-9-4 20:08
9.3
T1.as ..(没听懂）.student两个skills都没听懂,所以内容也没听懂...不过我发现楼主的语音很好～
T2.  ...

谢谢点评！T1&T2经常是拿到题大脑一片空白只能找到论点没论据，所以只能干说道理，可能还是要再多看看黄金80题之类的积累下吧，有没有什么好建议。
T1说的是as a project manager, the most admirable skills for me are multi-tasking skills and time management skills, 后面说得有点乱
T4， 我也是说得比较急，其实后来给你点评时也是觉得要么在开头或者结尾还是最好说一句类似the professor use 2 examples to further explain the thoery之类的话，显得organized一点

vivienhaoUID: 3464615

大家给点意见，对于T1&T2怎么迅速找到例子并展开？经常是拿到题目大脑一片空白，所以只能讲大道理，特别空....

.MaggieUID: 3456903

vivienhao 发表于 2013-9-5 00:29
大家给点意见，对于T1&T2怎么迅速找到例子并展开？经常是拿到题目大脑一片空白，所以只能讲大道理，特别空. ...

TI & T2 你看 破解口语高分 就了解了～

两题都是opinion+1个reason足以+例子/detail~(一句话+一句话+主要内容）

mary小丸子UID: 3277066

1.中间有段卡住了，make不要拖音，我猜楼主那个期间在想下面的内容，但也不要拖着单词来想事情，可以用点插入语来缓解。
2.第二点我觉得开头太长了，没必要说small town的空气好，因为45‘本来论述时间就不长，去掉开头和结尾，LZ的有效论据其实很少，况且还分为first,also,所以每个都没展开， 楼主下次注意一下即可。
3.ok
4.我觉得第四点LZ和我一样都理解错了，其实阅读文中是说如果nonverbal 和verbal表达的意思一致，就是strengthen vebal的，如果表示不一致了，就是表达了
defferent的message,然后问题是两者的relationship,所以我觉得楼主有点偏了。
5.check 语调有点怪。  ok   one time的time注意发音，有点像 town
6. 还可以的

楼主发音清晰，流利度很棒！继续加油吧·

vivienhaoUID: 3464615

mary小丸子 发表于 2013-9-5 11:58
1.中间有段卡住了，make不要拖音，我猜楼主那个期间在想下面的内容，但也不要拖着单词来想事情，可以用点插 ...

嗯，每道题自己重新听了遍是觉得好几多话都多余，也没有仔细展开，谢谢你这么仔细的点评。大家都加油~

joycedevernoUID: 3313960

哈哈 一大早就看到亲善良的评价 好开森 ~~~
T1 内容上例子可以再细化一点 一个例子展开讲一下会更perfect 注意下visual的发音 语音语调语速都很好哦
T2 音语调语速依旧很好 内容上还是感觉例子稍微稍微空了一点
一起加油

KickBessieUID: 3320808

9.6
乍一听以为是我自己的声音……
但是语音语调都比我好~~~
我看了下之前的留言，这两题内容展开的都不错啊
Task 1
时态要注意下，应该都是过去式。all the waiters stopped, and started to dance.
Task 2
没什么问题。

欢迎狠批https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1609279-1-1.html

KickBessieUID: 3320808

9.8
Task 1
第一题真的和我说的点一样，向你学习
Task 2
我觉得你用词很好，是直接说的吗？太佩服了
有几个小问题，the的发音要注意下，舌头放齿间。Impact，t的发音要清。其他没问题！

如果打分的话，应该都是GOOD!!!

whostheoneUID: 3379777

t1理由好多，我不知道这样是好还是不好，我听大家都是说1~2个理由就开始说细节例子
t2 good
t3 perfect！
t4 最后几句连续性感觉降低了。其他挺好的
t5 afraid to hurt???她不是害怕。。。其他没问题
t6 你一上来也明说了变化是啥才说例子啊呀。。。。good

估计23以上了。
向你学习！

糖甜甜UID: 3362181

9.13
1.语速合适
2.内容条理清晰，比如task 1你说你支持community service，然后说了more experience和advantage for seeking job两点理由。task 2你说你不支持using computer，也说了spelling problem和distraction两点理由。
但是总体感觉是你的理由不够具体，用的词有点大而笼统，比如task 1中你说的more experience，可以换成具体什么experience，是clean up the street还是water the flowers in the community parks；task 2中你说的critical problem，建议你具体说说是什么样的problem，如they are used to abbreviations so that they couldn't produce decent formal writing；后面你先说they can't concentrate，后面又说makes it hard for them to focus，这样就有点重复了。建议你具体描述一下using computer如何distract the students，比如they spend too much time playing computer games, surfing the Internet, chatting with friends online so that they hardly have time for their school work。

vivienhaoUID: 3464615

糖甜甜 发表于 2013-9-18 00:14
9.13
1.语速合适
2.内容条理清晰，比如task 1你说你支持community service，然后说了more experience和ad ...

谢谢斑竹点评，很受益！~
我也觉得经常是15S时间想不到那么具体，然后说的时候就没了头绪，斑竹有什么好的建议么？