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发表于 2013-9-4 19:58:35 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 annie1991713 于 2013-10-10 10:55 编辑

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Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does.docx (12.3 KB, 下载次数: 9)

0905 9.5 independent annie1991713 .docx (12.33 KB, 下载次数: 7)

0906 9.6 annie1991713 .docx (10.97 KB, 下载次数: 8)

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0910 9.10 TPO1.docx (11.38 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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0914 9.14 TPO30.docx (10.88 KB, 下载次数: 0)

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0918 9.18 TPO 29.doc (26.5 KB, 下载次数: 4)

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0922   TPO 28 annie.doc (26.5 KB, 下载次数: 5)

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1009 10.9 TPO 24 annie.docx (11.02 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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发表于 2013-9-5 20:20:05 |显示全部楼层
改好了哦~

9.4 作文annie1991713 revised by hshmy.docx

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发表于 2013-9-5 21:26:12 |显示全部楼层
hshmy 发表于 2013-9-5 20:20
改好了哦~

谢谢~~很有帮助哦^-^

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发表于 2013-9-6 00:11:41 |显示全部楼层
改好了,水平有限选择的看吧
Your job has more effect on your happiness than your social life does revised by.docx (18.25 KB, 下载次数: 1)
be yourself

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发表于 2013-9-6 11:36:12 |显示全部楼层
谢谢~emphasize 写错了应该是empathize with each other。。。

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发表于 2013-9-6 16:40:45 |显示全部楼层
改好了,第一次改,水平有限,一起加油。。。 9.5 independent annie1991713 .docx (19.46 KB, 下载次数: 2)

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发表于 2013-9-6 21:11:17 |显示全部楼层
我独立写作补好了,改一下吧~https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... xtra=#pid1777501021

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发表于 2013-9-6 21:56:44 |显示全部楼层
mary小丸子 发表于 2013-9-6 21:11
我独立写作补好了,改一下吧~https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&tid=1632055&page=1&extra=#pi ...

已经改好了哦^-^

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发表于 2013-9-6 22:34:43 |显示全部楼层
9.5 revised by mary .docx (10.81 KB, 下载次数: 5)
楼主改好了~不想拖到明天了~干脆改完睡觉好了~嘿嘿。

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发表于 2013-9-7 10:32:21 |显示全部楼层
mary小丸子 发表于 2013-9-6 22:34
楼主改好了~不想拖到明天了~干脆改完睡觉好了~嘿嘿。

亲,修改好认真哦,确实发现有这样那样的问题耶。
这一点这样改还可以咩?
In addition, perhaps there are things which have no impact on our lives, but if we are in trouble, we obviously wish someone else can lend us a hand, even though to us, some of them are strangers.

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发表于 2013-9-7 10:38:09 |显示全部楼层
annie1991713 发表于 2013-9-7 10:32
亲,修改好认真哦,确实发现有这样那样的问题耶。
这一点这样改还可以咩?
In addition, perhaps there ...

perfect!

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发表于 2013-9-7 10:38:50 |显示全部楼层
VanyC 发表于 2013-9-6 16:40
改好了,第一次改,水平有限,一起加油。。。

嗯,谢谢~~

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发表于 2013-9-7 11:15:18 |显示全部楼层
楼猪9月6号的综合能不能直接贴给我,WORD版本太低打不开你那个哎

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发表于 2013-9-7 11:25:26 |显示全部楼层
男孩 发表于 2013-9-7 11:15
楼猪9月6号的综合能不能直接贴给我,WORD版本太低打不开你那个哎

么有问题
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In the reading passage, the author indicates that having a team of people attack a project offers several advantages. However, the professor gives an example of one company whose project is assigned by a team. It turns out to be quite different as the reading says.

First of all, the most obvious issue is the “free-rider” problem. Not everyone really participates in the project as the passage offers. If the project works well, the praise belongs to the team, no name is considered. It’s not fair to those who contribute a lot. The reality is quite opposite against the reading.

Second of all, it is not quick for the team to achieve consensus. It takes so long for various meetings. Furthermore, one or two influential people will decide how to conduct the project, even though sometimes other members offer some creative ideas or intend to remind the risks. This is definitely different from the claim in the reading that team members have a much better chance to “shine”.

Last but not least, as the professor presents, if the project fails at last, the company will blame all team members, even if some of them used to consider the risks might be taken, but they are just ignored by those influential people. So it’s hard to say that the group tends to make more risky decision like the reading indicates.

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发表于 2013-9-7 11:48:31 |显示全部楼层
annie.doc (21 KB, 下载次数: 8) 楼猪已改,欢迎讨论

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