【口语小组】mcl2012作业贴【10.12】

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9.27题目
Task 1 Describe a special friend in your childhood，why he or she is special to you? Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them？
Task 3-6 TPO7

http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ssTby

KickBessieUID: 3320808

mcl2012 发表于 2013-9-27 19:50
谢谢。。

干嘛还俩省略号……………………

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KickBessie 发表于 2013-9-28 14:07
干嘛还俩省略号……………………

额，当时顺手就打了俩省略号，没啥意思:lol

mcl2012UID: 3401280

9.28题目           
Task 1 Describe your favorite area in your city. Explain why you like that area. Include specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Do you prefer to be a leading or supporting member in a group project?
Task 3-6 TPO6

http://pan.baidu.com/s/15Qjw2

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mcl2012 发表于 2013-9-28 19:24
额，当时顺手就打了俩省略号，没啥意思

还以为你欲言又止~~~~~~加油！！！

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KickBessie 发表于 2013-9-28 23:15
还以为你欲言又止~~~~~~加油！！！

嗯，一起加油！！

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9-29
Task 1 Describe a good learning habit you have that is different from other students. Explain why this habit helped you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Parents should get involved when their children are choosing their universities.

http://pan.baidu.com/s/11g5ky

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mcl2012 发表于 2013-9-29 21:54
9-29
Task 1 Describe a good learning habit you have that is different from other students. Explain  ...

Task I
1.        内容上没有什么挑剔的，细节足够充实
2.        若干发音问题主要集中在词的尾音，不知道楼主是不是受到湾湾普通话的影响
例如 favorite is what lot
集中在一些轻辅音上

Task II
Good

Task III
第二点reason可能是因为时间不够出现了missing

Task IV
跟你讨论一下关于实验的论述结构：
我偏向两个部分： 想不起有一个P开头的汽车广告，但是如果说一个P开头的动物却不会习惯性地说pig而是PXX
换而言之，没有可以关注汽车广告却记住了一个P的玩意儿，所以会误以为P是动物

Task V
Good

Task VI
Active: tedious content  efforts  short time of concentration
Passive: interesting content no effort required longer time of concentration
想了一下，不知道是不是缺了这个effort的部分

上面的两个问题期待你的回复

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9.30
Task 1 Describe a skill you are good at, such as painting or a kind of sports, and explain why it is important to you. Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 When you have a question, do you prefer to ask your teacher about it or looking for the answer yourself? Such as searching for answers on the internet or check reference books?
Task 3-6 TPO4
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1zKDXq

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Djocovic 发表于 2013-9-29 23:03
Task I
1.        内容上没有什么挑剔的，细节足够充实
2.        若干发音问题主要集中在词的尾音，不知道楼主是不 ...

我9-29就做了task 1和2...后面的没有做啊

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mcl2012 发表于 2013-9-30 22:44
我9-29就做了task 1和2...后面的没有做啊

囧 是28的吗？

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29~

楼主内容上很充实，发音方面有机会多跟读一下会有不错的进展。例如 example等词汇希望能咬字清楚些就更好啦~

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10.2题目
Task 1 What do you do to keep yourself healthy? Explains why it is important for you. Please include reasons and details in you explanation.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Playing computer games or video games is a waste of teenagers' time. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Task 3-6 TPO2

http://pan.baidu.com/s/11gCbM

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mcl2012 发表于 2013-9-27 20:43
9.27题目
Task 1 Describe a special friend in your childhood，why he or she is special to you? Inclu ...

LZ，不好意思，我前几天出差了，今天才坐下来修改你的作业，望理解！

Task1 LZ这题说的很好，细节很丰富，有几个地方要注意下：When others were playing basketball，I ...... around， 中间这几个词发的不是很清楚，我没听明白； a lot of 而不是 a lots of
Task2 have gived me  而不是 have give me ；
Task3 The passage里的内容LZ说的太多了，建议控制在15 seconds以内即可，主要说听力里的内容；听力的内容LZ说的很好
Task4 这题LZ说的很好，物种的名字都说出来了，厉害，只不过第二个例子有些超时了，建议LZ多多联系，控制时间。
Task5 LZ说了听力中的两条solutions，但是没有说出women为什么认为两条solutions是不可行的啊？这个应该是必要的（参照robbin的“破解托福口语高分”）
Task6 LZ这题说的很好！

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mcl2012 发表于 2013-10-2 20:56
10.2题目
Task 1 What do you do to keep yourself healthy? Explains why it is important for you. Plea ...

1.第一个挺好的，不过我其实对题目很有疑问，他的重点到底是keep healthy 的东西是important还是keep healthy 本身，求讨论。。。小白一枚。。
2.第二个说the trouble thing I ”mich“？是什么我没听出来，不过也讲得挺好的，举些更具体
的例子会更好
3.好像说了improve the parking？好像不大适当。
还有最后你强调你观点的时候说什么the idea听不是太清楚。
4.可能我自己看错了题目吧。。我记得reading写的是social interaction然后听力
是audience effect。。。迷魂了。答得挺好的，听完对我反而有帮助哈哈。目测你听力
比我好多了
5.我感觉choose the later one 的原因可以更深刻一点，例如break someone promise这样
和你make professor unhappy是一致的
6.呃，你一直说service（ser fi死） 说成了ser vise（ser 外死）对么
还是我听错了


都挺好的。。。受益匪浅。。。我比你差远了，加油
录音软件好像不怎么好，不会影响不大