[口语小组]baby_grape作业贴（12月杀T党，最后一战）

只有梦想UID: 3459753

T4 your voice is still an advantage, but you need more practice to be more fluent. The relationship between the example and the topic is pretty good.

T5
his/her
the context is complete, you have cover every points. And your recommondation, still, need more practice and DO BE AT EASE.

T6
This queation is a little difficult I think cause I don't have enough thing to say. My recommendation is that you need to speed up since other queations will bring more points.

Still, practice makes perfect. Make the best of your excellent voice!

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

只有梦想 发表于 2013-10-12 22:00
T4 your voice is still an advantage, but you need more practice to be more fluent. The relationship  ...

谢谢亲的点评，刚自己又听了下T6，不忍直视，真想掐死自己。。

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.14
Task 1 What kind of clothing do you usually wear and why. Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with this statement: Young people today know more about world events than their parents did before.
Task 3-6 TPO17

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T6当时论坛瘫痪了，所以只能用奇怪的方式保留下来了。不好意思。
吓死了，当时以为所有的都木有了。。

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.13 补上 （10.14的作业在前面）
Task 1 Which do you think is the biggest challenge that new university students face: being away from family, having no time to relax or making new friends? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.
Task 2 Some people prefer to write diaries or take photos to records things they've experienced. Other's don't. What is your opinion and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO18

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mimimomo666UID: 3476142

10/14
t1: 楼主的内容很好 ，有细节，且很明白，有说服力。而且很流利啊。
t2：虽然没有说完，不过我觉得细节依旧不错，例子也很好，我也说的这个例子，可是当时就是不知道该怎么展开细节，所以我觉得这方面楼主做的不错，而且很具体。
t3：还是感觉很好，因为reading说得很全，很明白，而且listening 的部分也蛮全面的，尤其是用自己的话转述。虽然最后那一两句没有前面的句子漂亮， 可是已经很不错了，在限时的情况下。
t4：说的蛮全的，语言组织很好啊，而且最后还讲明了example和reading里definition的关系
t5：前面的总结的很精炼，这是我真的要学习的。后面自己的建议及理由也很充分，挺有说服力的。然后一个小错误是应该为 deadline extension，not expension。
t6：这一道题可能前面第一点说多了点，在第二点时时间有点紧喔，还有一些简单的语法错误，如take sth as an example, not for example.但是语言组织还是很好的，每一个例子前都有解释。

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

mimimomo666 发表于 2013-10-15 01:47
10/14
t1: 楼主的内容很好 ，有细节，且很明白，有说服力。而且很流利啊。
t2：虽然没有说完，不过我觉得 ...

谢谢亲~你的作业我已经点评好了哦~
p.s. 其实我在录之前都要练到自己想吐为止。。

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.15
Task 1 Describe a special event or occasion that you have participated with your family or friends. State why this occasion/event is important to you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Do you prefer to travel to complete new places or to places you have been before? Why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Task 3-6 TPO16

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duaifeiliUID: 3460134

baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-14 14:43
10.13 补上 （10.14的作业在前面）
Task 1 Which do you think is the biggest challenge that new univer ...

【10.13】
T1&T2：内容上都没有问题，就是语调不够自然，升调太多
T3：最好不要分开说in the reading material 和in the listening material ，reading的部分一句话带过就好，重点是students的看法
T4：没什么问题
T5：最后自己的建议可以再说多一点
T6：没什么问题

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.16
Task 1 Many people have pets, like dogs and cats. Do you think that raising pets is good or not? Please include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to live in places where climate doesn't change very much. While others prefer to live in places where climate changes with seasons. Which one do you prefer? Include reasons and details in your explanation.
Task 3-6 TPO15

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不好意思，室友坐在我背后跟男友吵架，所以今天说得比较无语，背景音可能也有点乱。。T T

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baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-15 19:47
10.15
Task 1 Describe a special event or occasion that you have participated with your family or fr ...

T1:说得很好啊，很多值得学习的地方。很多细节“ sunny day, ups and downs ”，而且很流利。
T2：仍然很棒的段子，不过最后有一点”it helps“要稍微注意一下。

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.17
Task 1 Which important skill do you think a student should learn? Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: In order to stay happy, you must have a job that you love doing.
Task 3-6 TPO14

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baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.18
Task 1 Describe an incident in which a friend of yours surprised you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with this statement: Students should be given one-year-long holiday before entering universities.
Task 3-6 TPO13

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.MaggieUID: 3456903

baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-17 10:43
10.17
Task 1 Which important skill do you think a student should learn? Please include specific exa ...

10.17
两题都很好的~发音清晰~例子也很不错~~~只有语调控制地不太好~比如第二题：when we r doing it(这里的it不应该是升调, 很怪的) ; from my personal exp(这个exp也是); 还有很多很多~~几乎每一句都是升调~这个注意一下就没问题啦~

我的作业贴
https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mo ... amp;fromuid=3456903

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

.Maggie 发表于 2013-10-18 17:25
10.17
两题都很好的~发音清晰~例子也很不错~~~只有语调控制地不太好~比如第二题：when we r doing it( ...

啊，谢谢指出！
说的时候也没啥注意，求教不知在什么情况下升调，什么情况下降调呢？

只有梦想UID: 3459753

T1
虽然是生活中的小事，但是lz描述的还是很详细的。形容词也换用了很多。
on the way to school 可以咬字再清楚一点，我的办法是想象自己在咬一个气球，不敢用力咬但是每咬一口都要保证清楚和音量。

T2
例子特别棒！我再重复一遍，这个例子选的很赞！角度新颖，描述准确，最后心里描述更是加彩，建议以后多用类似的例子。

T3
语调上面稍微有点都是升调的感觉了，注意下。内容上包括了得分点没得说。

T4
perfect！ 和crazyrobin的内容上面有的一拼了。

T5
流利性很好。点也都说到了。我个人认为如果后30s说个人例子的话会更加有说服力，personal view.

T6
个人感觉第一个例子的描述有点过于详细了，第二个例子的话稍微有点单薄。（不过貌似我也是这样）
我的能力局限没办法提出更好的建议了。感觉lz能力已经在我之上了。