[口语小组]baby_grape作业贴（12月杀T党，最后一战）

永远的乌托邦UID: 3412995

baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-8 15:02
10.8
Task 1 Describe the most important day of your life. Explain why it was important to you. Incl ...

妹子实力很强大，一些词语用得很活，放在作文也是极好的~
T1：真心说不出什么问题，例子很详细，一些表述我都没听说过（DS飘过~）。特别是最后能点题，赞一个！
T2：一开始的表述是不是要加个词：agree(with) that。对于例子，感觉没有具体展开，个人觉得还是一般在讲一般的意义。
要好好向妹子学习！

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

永远的乌托邦 发表于 2013-10-9 22:46
妹子实力很强大，一些词语用得很活，放在作文也是极好的~
T1：真心说不出什么问题，例子很详细，一些表述 ...

谢谢啦~其实我是练了很久才录的。。掩面。。
I agree 是可以直接加从句that的啦。或者是I agree with the opinion that...
T2的例子其实就举了Picasso和Monet的画，一句带过啦，我再思索思索~

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.10
Task 1 Which area of your city do you like the best? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Task 2 Some people think in the future students will have classes on the internet instead of in buildings, but others think students will still have class in buildings. What do you think?
Task 3-6 TPO21

katherine_lyxUID: 3417935

baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-9 11:27
10.9

Task 1 Describe a person who always makes you laugh. Explain why he/she is funny. Include de ...

整体感觉：清晰、自然，语音语调都很赞！词汇句式各种膜拜……
T1：during elementary school, 感觉这个介词用的有小小奇怪，可能是我语法太戳了……感觉用In貌似顺点……还望亲指点~ 例子细节有出来！个性化
开篇的laugh 发音不太准，要张大嘴巴，发出a音，不然听上去就会变成love了……
T2：态度亮出来后紧跟理由，说服力强！理由有前后衔接，好~
preserve the ? in the idea
亲的词汇量，原谅我没能听出来……T T

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

katherine_lyx 发表于 2013-10-10 22:06
整体感觉：清晰、自然，语音语调都很赞！词汇句式各种膜拜……
T1：during elementary school, 感觉这个 ...

in elementary school确实比较靠谱！我错啦~例子是编的你信不？不过这是我小时候经常做的噩梦。。
确实laugh像love了，改正！
preserve the sparks of ideas.类似思维的火花啦。
谢谢亲！像你学习语音语调！

只有梦想UID: 3459753

T1

I like your voice, I am in Hangzhou, too. But I can not describe it so well like you. It seems like the prononciation of 'sun' should be careful, but it is just a small mistake. Sorry my spoken level can not provide high recommondation. It is a great masterplate for me.

T2
later part is better, seems like you have a great talent of descripe the detail of the issue. and some word I don't understand because of  my word limited.  I don' t know what else can I say.

You perform much better than me!

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

只有梦想 发表于 2013-10-11 00:13
T1

I like your voice, I am in Hangzhou, too. But I can not describe it so well like you. It seems ...

I agree that the pronunciation of 'sun' should be more careful! And I am glad to see people from hometown, I believe you love the city too!
In the T2, I cited the example of Khan Academy, a online class.
And to be frank, I had practiced for several times before uploading the recording, so it is not as great as you thought.
I should also explain that there are some problems with the TPO in my computer, so I didn't do the T3 to T6. I hope that I can make them up later today, (since I wouldn't be back until evening from an internship), and then I would give you another notice, thanks!

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

只有梦想 发表于 2013-10-11 00:13
T1

I like your voice, I am in Hangzhou, too. But I can not describe it so well like you. It seems ...

I agree that the pronunciation of 'sun' should be more careful! And I am glad to see people from hometown, I believe you love the city too!
In the T2, I cited the example of Khan Academy, a online class.
And to be frank, I had practiced for several times before uploading the recording, so it is not as great as you thought.
I should also explain that there are some problems with the TPO in my computer, so I didn't do the T3 to T6. I hope that I can make them up later today, (since I wouldn't be back until evening from an internship), and then I would give you another notice, thanks!

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.11
Task 1Why do you think it is hard for university student to manage time?
Task 2 Some people believe that students should attend field trips such as visiting a zoo, museum or park to learn knowledge. Other people believe that students should study in classrooms to learn knowledge. What is your opinion and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

DjocovicUID: 3414314

Task 1
细节足够了，我觉得描写的挺好的——波光粼粼的感觉。我提一个个人建议，可能是因为我觉得这种纯描写的东西很容易出现脑子空白，所以我建议你可以考虑跟个人的东西结合更多一点，感觉东西熟悉之后内容驾驭起来会容易一些。

Task 2
我习惯在准备时间写item 比如你的：
Flexible study arrangement   liberate teacher from the stressful preparation for classes (虽然我觉得在哪儿上课都要准备)
这样which means 这样的补充会少一些。结构会清楚一些


Task 3-6木有看到，如果是待会儿上传我稍晚再过来看

只有梦想UID: 3459753

baby_grape 发表于 2013-10-11 08:39
I agree that the pronunciation of 'sun' should be more careful! And I am glad to see people from h ...

no problem, waiting for your response.

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

10.12
Task 1 Which would you choose to be your future career: a university professor, an environmental expert, or a businessman?
Task 2 Some students prefer to study or work on difficult class assignments early in the morning. Other students prefer to do this type of work in the evening. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO19

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

只有梦想 发表于 2013-10-11 21:44
no problem, waiting for your response.

不好意思，终于补好了10.10的作业，就在那天的文档里。
第一次录全套，求狠拍！
谢谢！

baby_grapeUID: 3301992

Djocovic 发表于 2013-10-11 17:34
Task 1
细节足够了，我觉得描写的挺好的——波光粼粼的感觉。我提一个个人建议，可能是因为我觉得这种纯描 ...

亲说的有道理！这个描写的段子练多了所以还好啦。要不然肯定编不出来。。
另外，虽然我10.10的作业补好啦，但是亲貌似应该评的是“只有梦想”同学的作业哦。我们三个人一组的呢~
灰常开心这样结识了一个小伙伴！

DjocovicUID: 3414314

我现在一般都是晚上点评，有的小伙伴可能点评我的作业完了就我就回头点评过去。。。
谢谢你的提醒，晚上先去完成既定任务再去看一下你的task 3-6

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