版上有Robin大神的独立作文吗？

AlanBuptUID：3433124

RT，一直尝试着积累素材，但是实在不知道怎么样把素材套到作文里，很想看看大神们都是怎么样运用起来的。
之前看robin大神回一个帖子里讲了把素材套到作文里，怎么开发，但是还是有点迷糊。
但是想看个实际的例子，怎么用的。
谢谢！

糖甜甜UID：3362181

robin托福秒过，T版没有他的作文习作
你去G版找找看，貌似有他的AW习作

crazyrobinUID：2368627

这是一种最拉风的用法，直接show人名

The term "hero" comes from the ancient Greeks. For them, a hero was a mortal who had done something so far beyond the normal scope of human experience that he left an immortal memory behind him when he died, and thus received worship like that due the gods. Many of these first heroes were great benefactors of humankind: Hercules, the monster killer; Asclepius, the first doctor; Dionysus, the creator of Greek fraternities. But people who had committed unthinkable crimes were also called heroes; Oedipus and Medea, for example, received divine worship after their deaths as well. Originally, heroes were not necessarily good, but they were always extraordinary; to be a hero was to expand people's sense of what was possible for a human being.

另外一种用法可以这样，这是一个例子贯穿始终。

"Lady, I need that seat now," the white bus driver commanded. The place was a public bus in Montgomery, Alabama. The date was December 1, 1955. For a brief moment Rosa Parks looked at the bus driver and remained silent. What would she do? Would she obey the driver and fit in or would she dare to be unique and different? Which would be the most valuable course of action?

During Rosa Park's entire life, white society had demanded that she fit in, that she "know her place." Fitting in thus meant following the all pervasive rules of Jim Crow segregation. Fitting in meant drinking from colored water fountains, eating in colored sections of restaurants and sitting in the colored sets on a public bus. Fitting in thus meant obeying the bus driver and humbly taking another seat.

On that fateful day, Rosa was tired of fitting in. As all the passengers - both black and white - stared at her, Rosa made a momentous decision to be different to be unique. In a firm unwavering voice, Rosa gave a one word reply - "No." The bus driver and the other passengers did not applaud Rosa's act of defiance. Being unique and different can carry a painful price. The bus driver called the police and Rosa spent the next hours in jail.

Rosa's decision to be different, to say no, galvanized the Black community in Montgomery. Led by her young minister, the 26-year-old Dr. Martin Luther King, Jr. the Black community supported Rosa by boycotting the Montgomery buses. The boycott worked. Within 15 months city officials changed the segregation rules on public buses.

Rosa Park's decision to be different helped ignite the Civil Rights Movement. For almost a century following the Civil War, Black Americans had chosen to fit in. Rosa Park's singular and courageous decision to be different demonstrates that it is far more valuable for people to be unique rather than to fit in. Without people willing to be different there can be no change. Someone must be willing to say, "No."

或者这样

"The Gulag Archipelago" was written by Alexander Solzhenitsyn, in it he adresses the monstrocites that occured during the reign of Stalin during the mid-19th century. He exposes the horrors of the labor camps, in which many Russians were forced to labor under detestable conditions, rank with pestiliance. When Solzhenitsyn tried to get it published in Russia, no one would. So, he went to the U.S. to get it published. It was immensely popular and remains an important Cold War artifact. Solzhenitsyn, used "The Gulag Archipelago" to vent his frustrations with the U.S.S.R. and the cruel and unusual methods that were implemented in Stalinist Russia. Thus, his creativty exposed the world, to something that they might not have realized the magnitude of this issue, without the publication of the novel.

Michael Moore, a popular American filmaker, is known to create throught-provoking, expositiory films. One of his most famous films "Bowling for Columbine" exposes America's folly in its gun policy regarding youths and people in general and juxtaposes America's violent culture with other various cultures, such as Japan and Canada. Another main focus of the documentry, is the Columbine shooting. The columbine shooting, involved two students going on a killing spree in their Colorado high school. In the movie, Moore and one of the kids that was paralyzed from the incident are able to get Kmart, the place where the shooters bought the bullets, to stop selling bullets. This is very powerful, and illustrates that maybe hope is not lost, and that America can reform its violent ways. Michael Moore uses film as his creative outlet, in order to inspire, educate and expose people to pertinent issues that affect our daily lives.

两段直接两个人物/事件，之后写1-2句的评论，然后直接扣题，扣到你要写的主题上。

最后请参考这个帖子的附件和作文经验介绍

https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1612845-1-1.html

dula55UID：3454251

第三个例子最有用，比较适合大家的情况。
按照之前论坛里面分享的文章，总结25个例子，然后用种种方式把例子套到话题上面。

这个方法，SAT可以用，TOEFL可以用，GRE也可以用，但是效果显然没有前面的好。我个人的理解是GRE更注重逻辑的严密性。

现在写T的作文，还是习惯于一边倒，然后把话题反过来继续扯

AlanBuptUID：3433124

糖甜甜 发表于 2013-9-26 23:27
robin托福秒过，T版没有他的作文习作
你去G版找找看，貌似有他的AW习作

嗯嗯...G版也得利用起来

AlanBuptUID：3433124

crazyrobin 发表于 2013-9-27 00:05
这是一种最拉风的用法，直接show人名

大神回帖了，一天的动力就有了，有木有！！谢谢了！！

AlanBuptUID：3433124

dula55 发表于 2013-9-27 03:43
第三个例子最有用，比较适合大家的情况。
按照之前论坛里面分享的文章，总结25个例子，然后用种种方式把例 ...

感觉光是扯的话，有时候时间到了我扯不了多少东西出来，而且有时候感觉重复过去重复过来了，所以寻求用例子的方法。
PS：例子准备感觉也挺麻烦，有时候用小姜老师的《拯救GREissue》，但上面的素材基本是偏重于分析的。

crazyrobinUID：2368627

dula55 发表于 2013-9-27 03:43
第三个例子最有用，比较适合大家的情况。
按照之前论坛里面分享的文章，总结25个例子，然后用种种方式把例 ...

不是这样的。
这个方法所有考试都可以，GRE是需要对例子进行深度辩证的分析。
托福可以摆出个例子，然后说一句话扣上题就可以了，而GRE必须分析例子，说怎么可以支持我的观点。
SAT，托福，GRE的一个特点就是言之有物，必须要有例子。每个考试对例子分析程度不同。
用SAT写法考GRE一般可以拿4.5，再深度分析下就可以5-6了

dula55UID：3454251

crazyrobin 发表于 2013-9-27 12:40
不是这样的。
这个方法所有考试都可以，GRE是需要对例子进行深度辩证的分析。
托福可以摆出个例子，然后 ...

同意你的意见。
例子是一个方面，逻辑也是一个方面。
但是最根本的对大部分同学，包括我在内还是语言关。
怎么样把一个句子写得漂亮准确，没有长时间积累，希望用几个月时间突击基本上很难。
词汇最基本，用词的准确其次。在这样的基础上才能够追求逻辑、句法变化。至于写作的Style，属于从具体到抽象的范畴，如果能够形成自己的Style，这样英语的学习才算到了一定境界。

tingtangUID：3183535

为了看robin的贴，刷中级，拼了！！

茗天见UID：3009168

dula55 发表于 2013-9-27 03:43
第三个例子最有用，比较适合大家的情况。
按照之前论坛里面分享的文章，总结25个例子，然后用种种方式把例 ...

版主，能不能给我们这些小白科普科普总结哪25个例子啊？跪谢！！！

miranda包UID：3402373

一個例子貫穿始終也可以？

常寫的三段論是時候改改了

Joseph3UID：3512285

crazyrobin 发表于 2013-9-27 12:40
不是这样的。
这个方法所有考试都可以，GRE是需要对例子进行深度辩证的分析。
托福可以摆出个例子，然后 ...

robin大神。你知道网上有没有针对TOEFL的类似你的guide to 340的帖子。。。备考GRE时读了你的GUIDE to 340瞬间找到方向啊！

♀FlounderUID：3568918

路过，大神的头像好销魂。。。

长河落日圆UID：3554992

同求Robin大神的独立写作，例子指导