2013年10月学习小组"雅思写作互改小组"打卡帖

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miranda包 发表于 2013-10-13 13:50
怎麼辦~T_T

那你今晚能帮我改好不？
毕竟分组都是这样，也不好让别人再给我改啊，，，，

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viso33 发表于 2013-10-12 00:10
半夜打卡欢乐多~ 祝Eva童鞋屠鸭顺利 作业已上传~这次写前查了一些旅游业的相关表达 还有点超时 ...

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改好了：）不好意思有点晚了，今儿参加两场婚礼。。。重阳节快乐！

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caoietls 发表于 2013-10-13 16:25
MANY THANKS.
ANYBODY ELSE WOULD LIKE TO HELP ME WITH THE PROBLEM EVAEVAWU POINTED OUT？

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evaevawu 发表于 2013-10-13 15:59
From my perspective, 5.5 is not about your vocabulary and structure. It is all about the way you ...

MANY THANKS.
ANYBODY ELSE WOULD LIKE TO HELP ME WITH THE PROBLEM EVAEVAWU POINTED OUT？

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viso33 发表于 2013-10-13 16:04
是改错了 我昨天就想问你是怎么一回事...

打错 今早看到的 下次最好看好分组和顺序...

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miranda包 发表于 2013-10-13 13:47
我改了viso的！！！！又改錯人了？

是改错了 我昨天就想问你是怎么一回事...

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caoietls 发表于 2013-10-13 15:22
Many thanks for your hard work.
It seems you made a mistake here "but unfortunately you do not d ...

From my perspective, 5.5 is not about your vocabulary and structure. It is all about the way you express your idea and there are confusions when i read your essay.

Not clear enough and evidence enough.

Sorry about saying " unfortinately you do not did it". I am too strict sometimes and the words i said is harsh.

But if you give me a 5 or 5.5, i would be happy to accept coz I konw I still have a lot to improve. I don't want to please somebody and 5.5 is a sincere mark that I can give you.
  

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evaevawu 发表于 2013-10-13 15:09
Done. Like your tone

Many thanks for your hard work.
It seems you made a mistake here "but unfortunately you do not did that".

In addition, I use correct conj. in the essay, why should you say they are Chinglish?

it should be ticket prices, not tickets' prices, which is awkward.

Is there anybody want to give the essay a further revision/comment? I do not think 5.5 is acceptable, but it is good to know any comments.

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caoietls 发表于 2013-10-11 00:03
hi, aloha, how are you?

done.

Done. Like your tone

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evaevawu 发表于 2013-10-13 13:14
谢谢，如果我没帮你改跟我说一声哦~终于考完雅思了...那个吐血呀...19要再战雅思！

yes, you did not. then pls do it.

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doris_0213 发表于 2013-10-13 13:29
亲，你是不是没有改我11号的作文啊~~~~~~

怎麼辦~T_T

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doris_0213 发表于 2013-10-13 13:29
亲，你是不是没有改我11号的作文啊~~~~~~

我改了viso的！！！！又改錯人了？

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miranda包 发表于 2013-10-13 01:47
又是新的一天。。

亲，你是不是没有改我11号的作文啊~~~~~~