caoietls 发表于 2013-10-13 15:22
Many thanks for your hard work.
It seems you made a mistake here "but unfortunately you do not d ...
From my perspective, 5.5 is not about your vocabulary and structure. It is all about the way you express your idea and there are confusions when i read your essay.
Not clear enough and evidence enough.
Sorry about saying " unfortinately you do not did it". I am too strict sometimes and the words i said is harsh.
But if you give me a 5 or 5.5, i would be happy to accept coz I konw I still have a lot to improve. I don't want to please somebody and 5.5 is a sincere mark that I can give you.