10.23来啦。
楼主的语感好棒,赞一个!
T1:in the same age of mine出现了两回,这个可以直接用peers,同龄人神马的,更加简洁哟!小细节,时态还是有一些问题,比如开头那一句,还有I can make many friends for?别的用词神马的都很棒!
T2:book,Internet的发音貌似不到位了哟。more convenience(convenient)。例子很好。
T3:relaxed(relaxing) atmosphere。灰常流利!转述也很到位!
T4:will be suprised to predator??最后总结句的意识很好,要是能再强化下会更好!
T5:很好!
T6:The professor was talk(talking) about. image发音不是很准~higher qualityrequires to a high price略诡异。compete for(against)competitors。小细节啦。总体很好!