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T1
1.发音: 我能听清楚楼讲的,语速也很好
2.内容上 例子很形象很具体,赞
3语法上:secondly school 是二年级吗,例子中是不是应该都用过去时态
I always use those questions to bothering (bother) my physics teacher
T2
1.发音: 我能听清楚楼讲的,语速也很好
2.内容上 逻辑很强,虽说高分版建议用例子,但我觉得有时候这样也可以啊
3语法上:
That can save me a lot of times改成That can save me a lot of time
12.26 抱歉来晚了啊
T1
1.now the pollution has became...->become(变化是become-became-become)
2.U know those pollution can be very...->pollutions
3.they could cause disease and even cause cancer->可以简化为they could cause disease even cancer
4.if we donate money to...->题目问的是you,建议楼主换成I
T2
1.those difficult work->work是不可数的,建议换个词
2.there are two reasons,the first reason is...and the second reason is...尽量避免这种模板化的句子噢
3.and you need to worry about...you need to attend...at evening you...后面的部分都是用的you,LZ要注意下题目的提问哦“Which do you prefer and why?”