issue159 一个收集砖头的地方！

simonhuiUID: 128708

159.The human mind will always be superior to machines because machines are only tools of human minds.

The speaker claims that machines will always be inferior to the human mind.I strongly agree with this point.As the machines possess a good many features,they become widely used in nearly all fields of the society.However, it is the human who creates the machines to help solving some certain problems.Although machines surpass the human in some areas, they will alwsys remain the tools of human minds.

The first reason why i agree with the statement is that machines,lacking the ability to reason, must follow the human's instructions.This is especially true when it comes to the field of computer.Even the most up-to-date  computers must be given orders by the operators and follow the orders line by line.Without these orders,they cannot start the work automatically and are no more than some metal. What's more, if new situations which operators neglect to take into account in the orders show up in the process of running of programs,the computer cannot cope with them and have to stop or fall into the infinite loops .In other words,these new situations are beyond the computer's ability because of the lackness of reasoning.Therefor, machines are merely  excellent tools  of humans and cannot simulate the thinking process of human minds.

A second reason why the human mind is superior to machines is that the former possesses the power to create and invent .Human accomplished so many inventions to improve the quality of their lives For example, after critical thinking and thorough planning ,human invented automobiles, which have a profound impact on the modern society. With them human could reach further places than before quickly and conveniently. Moreover ,the automobiles are improved continuously to meet various needs of the humans. Obviously, it is hard to require machines to "invent" or "create".

Admittedly, during certain areas ,machines have surpassed the humans. For examples, before computers were invented, numerical computations took humans great effort and much time and results of these computations may have mistakes. This situation would not be repeated because computers could finish these computations ,such as the artillery equations and differential equations, in short times and high level of accuracy. In some scientific researches, robots could finish some dangerous tasks which are beyond the human' ability. To examine the situation of the top of volcanoes, where many kinds of dreadful gases exist, robots are used as a result of their resistance of these terrible gases. However, we should be aware of that all the features of machines come from the human minds.

All in all ,the human mind was and will always be superior to the machines. With some features machines act as good assistants of the human. Nevertheless, they have little chance to learn the reasoning and ability to invent. Human should be optimistic about the future of the machines and continue to improve them to help us better.

imongUID: 140258

关于用词和行文就像其他人好好学学吧，我现在实在没有精力去推敲了。

组织的还可以。问题在于第二body最后的obviously部分本来是应该详细叙述，把contrast做足了来证明superior的，第三body的admittely花了那么大的笔墨然后最后只有一句However而且还不给原因明显是中国某些流行的胡扯论证作风：把对方的东西讲了个十足十然后只要用一个however就证明自己了，简直是搞笑之极。不要这样子，把admittedly放到第二段，然后着重分析为什么这部分的contrast不能成为整体性的结论，把需要界定的不同领域和概念，彼此的级别，都给分析清楚，等等。

应该是可以拿到4分了。继续加油。

杀青UID: 140733

imong版主评的很到位，偶无话可说。。。。。。

初看了下，不过语言属于那种比较plain的，没有什么文采，感觉平淡了
lack既是名词，也是动词，没有lackness