issue11 Global University----40分钟，680多字------来拍吧

poohUID: 146994

. All nations should help support the development of a global university
designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.【11】
所有的国家都应该支持发展一所全球性的大学，它的主要目的是要让学生们致力于解决世界上最难缠的社会问题。

全球化问题之全球解难大学



The speaker suggests a global university established to enable students worldwide involve in the resolving the most pressing and during social problems. While there may be some practical difficulties, I admit that such a university can surely benefit all nations as a whole not only because students are the most creative and the future master of the society, but in that the university can focus on problems that transcend the boundary of a nation or cannot be figured out merely by one nation and dispel problems.

First of all, a global university is a place to educate our future world master and provide them a free room to communicate. Since the future is in the hand of young student, our global university should be the best place to prepare them with the modern knowledge and guide them to have an access to the pressing and during social problems. Unlike contemporary common university whose students' ken is confined within a country or have little chance to know about social problems, global university has some advantages. Only let students know what is the world today like and what they are facing could they realize what they can do to help to solve the social problems. For instance, a boy student of a common university majored in economics in America, may only notice the economic tendency nationwide, paying no attention to the situation of the countries and problems outside America. However, as a student of global university, he may be guided to set his sight worldwide and try to propose constructive opinions towards the developing countries and how to balance between developed and developing countries. In this sense, we need global university in that it draws the attention of our young to the world.

Moreover, global university enable students coming from different corners of the world to communicate in one place and have a better understanding of the problems and from each other. Social problems by nature share a lot in common even in different countries and areas, thus, student could discuss the problems together; On the other hand, local problems also have their own characteristics, that is to say, when seeking for solutions we should also take into area difference into account, which shows another advantage of global university--to allow voices from different areas heard here and all taken into consideration.

In addition, when it comes to some social problems that cannot be figured out within the energy of one nation, the importance and prominence of the global university emerge.  Though some countries do desire to protect the natural resources, say, the tropic forest, they are confined  by money and energy. Yet such natural resources are the great treasury of the whole world, we shouldn't be on-lookers. In this sense, global university, which never subscribed by boundaries, takes the responsibility of protecting the world resources and thinking up plans to change them for better. For instance, student from global university could research on the altering climates and environment of the country, which is losing tropic forest, and propound a feasible plan to help resort the ecosystem. When it comes to problems worldwide, for instance, the ozone hole , the resolution can hardly solely rely on one nation, because it is a problem that calls for the participation of every country. Global university not only attract students to the matters but also provide them a chance to realize the importance for all nations to work together to change our home, the earth, for better.

In sum, global university is called to deliver by time in which pressing and enduring problems can hardly worked out only within one nation. In addition, young people who destined to lead the world tomorrow should realize what the problems they are facing and how serious are them in global university in order to fix their eyes and energy on the matters; at the same time, it is in global university that they communicate with peers from other areas to learn from each other and take in different ideas for the better solution of world problems.

poohUID: 146994

开头写得不好，本来打算在body3来个however引出一些问题的，但是最后没有时间写了，也忘了改，:(

coolwitsUID: 149150

先抢个位置赞一下,好多字啊

coolwitsUID: 149150

The speaker suggests a global university established to enable students worldwide involve in the resolving the most pressing and during social problems. While there may be some practical difficulties, I admit that such a university can surely benefit all nations as a whole not only because students are the most creative and the future[这里有问题] master of the society, but in that the university can focus on problems that transcend the boundary of a nation or cannot be figured out merely by one nation and dispel problems.

First of all, a global university is a place to educate our future world master and provide them a free room to communicate. Since the future is in the hand of young student, our global university should be the best place to prepare them with the modern knowledge and guide them to have an access to the pressing and during social problems. Unlike contemporary common university whose students' ken is confined within a country or have little chance to know about social problems, global university has some advantages. Only let students know what is the world today like and what they are facing could they realize what they can do to help to solve the social problems. For instance, a boy student of a common university majored in economics in America, may only notice the economic tendency nationwide, paying no attention to the situation of the countries and problems outside America. However, as a student of global university, he may be guided to set his sight worldwide and try to propose constructive opinions towards the developing countries and how to balance between developed and developing countries. In this sense, we need global university in that it draws the attention of our young to the world.
[这一段没怎么提到and provide them a free room to communicate.]
[这段ts是什么阿？找不到。是不是最后一句阿
哪前面说的to prepare them with the modern knowledge and guide them to have an access to the pressing and during social problems. 写它们干什么
火力不集中]

Moreover, global university enable students coming from different corners of the world to communicate in one place and have a better understanding of the problems and from each other. Social problems by nature share a lot in common even in different countries and areas, thus, student could discuss the problems together[这里因果关系不明显,最好再说以下]; On the other hand, local problems also have their own characteristics, that is to say, when seeking for solutions we should also take into area difference into account, which shows another advantage of global university--to allow voices from different areas heard here and all taken into consideration.
[你这里是说: 各自的问题有相同点,所以能够讨论
又有各自特征, 然后能够各抒己见,因地制宜(那这里没说清楚国际大学的优势,最好加一句，能够弥补一个人观点的不足)]

In addition, when it comes to some social problems that cannot be figured out within the energy of one nation, the importance and prominence of the global university emerge. Though some countries do desire to protect the natural resources, say, the tropic forest, they are confined by money and energy. Yet such natural resources are the great treasury of the whole world, we shouldn't be on-lookers. In this sense, global university, which never subscribed by boundaries, takes the responsibility of protecting the world resources and thinking up plans to change them for better. For instance, student from global university could research on the altering climates and environment of the country, which is losing tropic forest, and propound a feasible plan to help resort the ecosystem. [仅仅reserch的话，每个大学都可以做阿。你前面不是说they are confined by money and energy， 你要说国际大学能够在这方面帮忙]When it comes to problems worldwide, for instance, the ozone hole , the resolution can hardly solely rely on one nation, because it is a problem that calls for the participation of every country.
[这里等于没说不是? A 不能被一个国家单独解决,因为它需要多个国家参与才能解决. ]Global university not only attract students to the matters but also provide them a chance to realize the importance for all nations to work together to change our home, the earth, for better. [只是认识重要性的话，每个大学都可以啊，没优势可言]

In sum, global university is called to deliver by time in which pressing and enduring problems can hardly worked out only within one nation. In addition, young people who destined to lead the world tomorrow should realize what the problems they are facing and how serious are them in global university in order to fix their eyes and energy on the matters; at the same time, it is in global university that they communicate with peers from other areas to learn from each other and take in different ideas for the better solution of world problems.

[pooh姐姐没必要写这么多的，不要为了速度牺牲你深邃的思想
不过这道题很变态的，如果不先写提纲临时想的话我肯定死定了
这种题还是早作准备的好]

poohUID: 146994

研究中，说实话，的确有点混乱，我body1的tc也包括了body2的内容，其实本来想写作一段，结果发现太多了就分开了，回去改。。。
老弟，谢了，btw, 我也没什么深邃的思想，这篇就是真实水平的说。。

so猫UID: 148633

偶时间紧 就不能逐字逐句改了
看完一遍 的确和cool的感觉一样
3段说来说去好象就是绕了一圈 说的东西差不多啊~~差别不大的~~~
JJ本来的意思是准备分成三个方面说的吧 我猜
应该再考虑一下怎么写吧
这样的3个方面的逻辑分析过程可以说一模一样 好累赘啊
唉 好多字 我有JJ的水平就够了~~

不行了 我再不去写实验报告就不要睡觉了~~有空再仔细研究研究的说~~~~

sydUID: 151948

我受刺激了
你打字速度太￥#%—……%—*
上课去先，回来再看看。
感觉你的提纲不是太有力，我把我的帖出来你参考一下。
国际类
1. All nations should help support the development of a global university
designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.【11】
所有的国家都应该支持发展一所全球性的大学，它的主要目的是要让学生们致力于解决世界上最难缠的社会问题。
+，--
1，许多的社会问题都需要国际化的合作，全球性的大学有利于国际合作的进行的智力支持。
2，这样的 全球性的大学，在解决国际问题时候的能力也是有限的，因为国际问题在最后必然需要各个国家独立解决，这些大学的解决办法不一定会被采用。
3，但是，发展这样的大学的 精力和时间的成本都是很高的，只有有能力的国家才应该发展这样的致力于解决国际问题的大学。
我主要是在唱反调，因为这个题目的ALL NATION 个人感觉是破题点，太绝对话了。 :cool:

coolwitsUID: 149150

syd， 你的提纲第三点有点偏
All nations should help support the development of a global university
只建一所的话，每个国家都可以出力阿
没钱可以鼓励学生去上这所大学嘛
这和国家的能力没甚么关系

湘北GGUID: 156613

我也是新手，请多指教！

poohUID: 146994

参考了大家的意见，自己改了一下，这样是不是好些了？

The speaker suggests a global university established to enable students worldwide involve in the resolving the most pressing and during social problems. While there may be some practical difficulties, I admit that such a university can surely benefit all nations as a whole not only because students are the most creative and the future master of the society, but in that the university can focus on problems that transcend the boundary of a nation or cannot be figured out merely by one nation and dispel problems.

The speaker suggests a global university established to enable students worldwide involve in the resolving the most pressing and during social problems.I strongly agree that such a university can surely benefit all nations as a whole not only because students are the most creative and the future master of the society, but in that the university can focus on problems that transcend the boundaries of nations or dipel problems that cannot be figured out merely by one nation.


First of all, a global university is a place to educate our future world master and provide them a free room to communicate. Since the future is in the hand of young student, our global university should be the best place to prepare them with the modern knowledge and guide them to have an access to the pressing and during social problems. Unlike contemporary common university whose students' ken is confined within a country or have little chance to know about social problems, global university has some advantages. Only let students know what is the world today like and what they are facing could they realize what they can do to help to solve the social problems. For instance, a boy student of a common university majored in economics in America, may only notice the economic tendency nationwide, paying no attention to the situation of the countries and problems outside America. However, as a student of global university, he may be guided to set his sight worldwide and try to propose constructive opinions towards the developing countries and how to balance between developed and developing countries. In this sense, we need global university in that it draws the attention of our young to the world.
First of all, a global university is a place to prepare our students to solve widewide problems. Unlike contemporary common university whose students' ken is confined within a country or have little chance to know about social problems, global university has some advantages. Only let students know what is the world today like and what they are facing could they realize what they can do to help to solve the social problems. For instance, a boy student of a common university majored in economics in America, may only notice the economic tendency nationwide, paying no attention to the situation of the countries and problems outside America. However, as a student of global university, he may be guided to set his sight worldwide and try to propose constructive opinions towards the developing countries and how to balance between developed and developing countries. In this sense, we need global university in that it draws the attention of our young to the world.

Moreover, global university enable students coming from different corners of the world to communicate in one place and have a better understanding of the problems and from each other. Social problems by nature share a lot in common even in different countries and areas, thus, student could discuss the problems together; On the other hand, local problems also have their own characteristics, that is to say, when seeking for solutions we should also take into area difference into account, which shows another advantage of global university--to allow voices from different areas heard here and all taken into consideration.

Moreover, global university enable students coming from different corners of the world to communicate in one place and have a better understanding of the problems and from each other. Social problems by nature share a lot in common even in different countries and areas, thus, student could discuss the problems together towards the same matters, say, high criminal rate ;On the other hand, local problems also have their own characteristics, that is to say, when seeking for solutions we should also take into area difference into account, which shows another advantage of global university--to allow voices from different areas heard here and all taken into consideration.


In addition, when it comes to some social problems that cannot be figured out within the energy of one nation, the importance and prominence of the global university emerge. Though some countries do desire to protect the natural resources, say, the tropic forest, they are confined by money and energy. Yet such natural resources are the great treasury of the whole world, we shouldn't be on-lookers. In this sense, global university, which never subscribed by boundaries, takes the responsibility of protecting the world resources and thinking up plans to change them for better. For instance, student from global university could research on the altering climates and environment of the country, which is losing tropic forest, and propound a feasible plan to help resort the ecosystem. When it comes to problems worldwide, for instance, the ozone hole , the resolution can hardly solely rely on one nation, because it is a problem that calls for the participation of every country. Global university not only attract students to the matters but also provide them a chance to realize the importance for all nations to work together to change our home, the earth, for better.
In addition, when it comes to some social problems that cannot be figured out within the energy of one nation, the importance and prominence of the global university emerge. Though some countries do desire to protect the natural resources, say, the tropic forest, they are confined by money and energy. Yet such natural resources are the great treasury of the whole world, we shouldn't be on-lookers. In this sense, global university, which never subscribed by boundaries, takes the responsibility of protecting the world resources and thinking up plans to change them for better, because global univeristy could receive founds from all nations, or most nations, not to mention that it has the world's excellent students--human and intelligence resources. For instance, student from global university could research on the altering climates and environment of the country, which is losing tropic forest, and propound a feasible plan to help resort the ecosystem. When it comes to problems worldwide, for instance, the ozone hole , the resolution can hardly solely rely on one nation, because it is a problem that calls for the participation of every country. Global university not only attract students to the matters but also provide them a chance to realize the importance for all nations to work together to change our home, the earth, for better.


In sum, global university is called to deliver by time in which pressing and enduring problems can hardly worked out only within one nation. In addition, young people who destined to lead the world tomorrow should realize what the problems they are facing and how serious are them in global university in order to fix their eyes and energy on the matters; at the same time, it is in global university that they communicate with peers from other areas to learn from each other and take in different ideas for the better solution of world problems

poohUID: 146994

谢谢coolwits, so猫，我按照你们说的该了一下，感觉现在清晰些了
1。世界大学让学生了解世界问题，将学生的眼界引向世界问题。
2。世界大学让学生更好的解决世界问题，因为可以分析问题的共性和个性
3。世界大学能够解决个别国家无能力解决的问题或者全球性的问题。

猫猫，这个提纲你觉得怎样？还很混乱吗？

to syd: 你的也不错，咱们的侧重点不同罢了，btw,头像很酷，呵呵
湘北GG：your icon is cute, lol