2、词汇:
“…, I just think of the French.” 应为“…, I just think of French.” 或者“…, I just think of the French language.” 因为the French的意思是The people of France,跟the British是一样的构成方式。
通常我们说学一门语言是learn a language,而不是know a language,而且题目也用的learn呢。
"a big task I should learn”应为“a big task I will face”任务是不需要去学的,而是去完成的或者面对的。
3、语法:
"There are a lot of information in the Internet, so I will listening to the French news or watching some French TV set in the computer.”应为"There is a lot of information on the Internet, so I will listen to the French news or watch some French TV series on the computer.”首先information是不可数名词,谓语动词肯定要第三人称单数;其次在网络上用on the Internet,不用in;再次will是情态动词,后面的动词要用原形;还有电视剧是TV series,而电视机才是TV set;最后,在电脑上看电视剧用on,不用in,in的意思是储存在电脑里的。
3、语法:
"Beijing Olympic Games"和"Olympic Games"应为"the Beijing Olympic Games"和"the Olympic Games"。
I still remember many years ago I turn on the TV..."应为I still remember many years ago I turned on the TV..."
1、流畅度:
依旧不错。但是我想说,something you do to keep healthy和something that is good for your healthy是两个概念,前者是你为保健康而主动做的事,后者是客观对你健康有益的东西,开篇paraphrase的时候不要偷换概念。
2、词汇:
"use this opportunity"建议改为"take this opportunity",习惯搭配。
"I have more friends by this activity."建议改为"I make more friends through playing basketball."activity重复得有点多。
"deal with the daily job"建议改为"deal with the daily work",job一般指职业,work可以指每天干的活。
3、语法:
"This kind of activity is good for my health in terms of physical as well as psychological."建议改为"This kind of activity is good for my health both physically and psychologically."
1、流畅度:
亲,题目要去说的是somewhere near water,所以一开始不应该直接说自己想去的capital,而应该复述引出题目再进一步诠释这个地方是什么地方。
2、词汇:
一些形容词用得挺好的。
"You can easily recognize the bottom of the pool."应为"You can easily see the bottom of the pool."形容水清澈还可以用crystal。
3、语法:
"You can go to this place while bus or cable car."应为"You can go to this place by bus or cable car."
"..., but we come here by walk."应为"..., but we went there by walk."
"If you in Xinjiang Province, ..."应为"If you are in Xinjiang Province, ..."
4、语音:
capital的i没发出来,听起来变成了captal。
mountain发得不够准确,moun不发/mʌn/,发/maʊn/,元音要饱满。
cable的a发字母本身的音/eɪ/。
recommend发/ˌrɛkəˈmɛnd/,重音在mend,不在com。
picturesque发/ˌpɪktʃəˈrɛsk/,重音resque,"e" as in egg.