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交作业，5.19

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Masterpiece00 发表于 2014-5-18 21:54
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sorry,传晚了～

1、流畅度：
依旧很好，不过离2分钟还有16秒，可以说多些。

2、词汇：
词语的不同词性运用得当，不错。
"..., to transmit some Chinese culture to foreigners."其实老外们都不喜欢自己被叫foreigners。。。建议改为"to people around the world."

3、语法：
"It sells shadow plays, as well as perform them."皮影戏不能卖吧。。。能卖的应该是皮影公仔shadow puppets，另外前后两句的主谓没一致，建议改为"It sells shadow puppets, and performs shadow plays as well."
"My father and I visit this company last year."应为"My father and I visited this company last year."描述过去的情况应用过去时。
"They stuck together."应为"They stick together."描述现在的情况应用现在时。

4、语音：
总体来说挺好的，但有个别字发音不够准确。
这次很多单词尾音拖音了，要注意一下。
uncle发得有些像ankle了。。。un的发音靠后，建议楼主听一下字典发音http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/uncle?s=t。
culture的l没发出来，听起来像cut-ture，，建议楼主听一下字典发音http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/culture?s=t。

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235vanburen 发表于 2014-5-16 00:31
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親麻煩改一下477楼 Masterpiece00 5-16的作業喔~

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Masterpiece00 发表于 2014-5-18 21:54
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sorry,传晚了～

親，下次交作業記得寫作業日期喔~已經是第二次忘記了呢。。。

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铁心奔北欧 发表于 2014-5-19 08:56
今天话题和510是一样的啊

謝謝指出，我馬上換~

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今天话题和510是一样的啊

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这两天忙论文去了,周一开始继续搞起

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忙了一天，还是要坚持下去，交作业来了
安排给我的修改任务明天上班时候完成

killrabbit_05_18.mp3

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sorry,传晚了～

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killrabbit 发表于 2014-5-17 11:29
家里完全没有什么值得讲的东西啊，所以即兴瞎编了一个
毫无准备

說得挺好的，鋪陳自然，然後結局有驚喜。遇到不會的題目只能隨機應變了～

1、流畅度：
还行。

2、词汇：
"He brought out a box.”建议改为”He took out a box.”因为“拿出来”一般用take out，而bring out是揭露、揭示的意思。
“This painting was inheritaged from his grandfather.”应为“This painting was inherited from his grandfather.”
赝品的话还可以说a counterfeit/counterfeits.

3、语法：
“…, which was covered by clothes.”clothes是衣服，你是想说被布还是被衣服包着？如果是布的话是cloth，不可数名词，发/klɔθ/。“…, which was covered by cloth.”
“So I think this is the moment…”应为“So I thought that was the moment…"描述当时的想法应该用过去时。
“They believe this was from one of the Chinese great artists from Ming Dynasty.”如果想说是谁画的，应改为“They believed this was a work by one of the Chinese great artists from Ming Dynasty.”

4、语音：
disappointed的a吃音了，录音里发成disppointed了。每一个有元音的音节都要发的。
n/l的发音仍需努力～

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235vanburen 发表于 2014-5-16 00:31
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1、流畅度：
很流畅。

2、词汇：
不错

3、语法：
When it comes to my favourite season, I have to say summer应为When it comes to my favourite season, I have to say it's summer.

4、语音：
balcony/ˈb&aelig;lkəni/
挺好的，还可以再说点内容，时间还有~

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家里完全没有什么值得讲的东西啊，所以即兴瞎编了一个
毫无准备

killrabbit_05_17.mp3

大家无情批判吧

刚才我儿子问，你们小组总共有几个人，我说5-6个人吧，我儿子问：有没有讲得比你差的“？我回答”老爸是最差的“，我儿子：”啊......"

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kaywoo 发表于 2014-5-16 16:17
1、流畅度：
不错。

版本批评的是，只是在说的时候不知不觉就说错了

谢谢指正

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235vanburen 发表于 2014-5-16 00:31
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总体来说非常不错。

1、流畅度：
很好。

2、词汇：
  "The temperature is around 70 to 80."建议这里加上单位，是Celsius还是Fahrenheit。70-80 degrees的话估计你想说的应该是Fahrenheit了，但是Fahrenheit70-80度相当于Celsius21-27度，也不是特别凉快的赶脚。。。
  usually用得有点多。。。可以用for most of the time, often, normally, do sth a lot等等

3、语法：
  "When it comes to my favourite season, I have to say summer."建议改为"When it comes to my favourite season, I have to say it's summer."
  "My city is pretty north."应为"My city is located up in the north."因为north作形容词的时候一般只做名词的定语，如the north bank。

4、语音：
balcony的发音是/ˈbælkəni/，bal-不发ball，那个a as in apple。

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killrabbit 发表于 2014-5-15 09:36
killrabbit_05_15.mp3

感觉最近题目好难说啊

1、流畅度：
不错。

2、词汇：
  "She had to break with me."应为"She had to break up with me."分手的动词短语是break up。
  "propose some ideas for me"没见过这样的词语搭配呢，建议改为"offer me some suggestions"

3、语法：
  "Speaking of a interesting conversation..."应为"Speaking of an interesting conversation..."元音前面的不定冠词应该用an。而且这个是题目，不应该错吧。。。
  "..., because her parents thought we are not suitable for each other."应为"..., because her parents thought we were not suitable for each other."从句的时态要和主句一致。
  "I called a taxi, the driver is quite talkative." 叫出租车的英文是call for a taxi/book a taxi，这是每上车之前做的。但按上下文来看你应该是上了车，才能知道司机很健谈。而且两个句子的时态要一致，之间要有连词。因此整句话建议改为"I took a taxi, and I found the driver quite talkative."
  "Finally, his girlfriends gave up and accept him."应为"Finally, his girlfriends gave in and accepted him."第一是give up是放弃的意思，就是不再搭理某人了，而give in就是同意了、妥协了。第二时态一定要一致。

4、语音：
  interesting的重音在in不在tere。这个之前也说过，但录音里还是发错了。
  immediately的重音在me/ɪˈmiːdɪətli/，而且发的时候一共4个音节，不要吃音。
  idea的重音在dea/aɪˈdiə/，不在i。这个之前也说过，但录音里还是发错了。