这几天出去了,实在抱歉。
5/6:
Task1:
9s: in my opinion重复的次数有点多,建议出现一次就够
16s-20s:they have to earn money buy themselves to make后面听得不太清楚
34s: kids的发音需要注意下
37s: relatively
41s:these are the reasons,因为前面说了三个理由
感觉有点泛,最好结合自身经历
Task2:
12s: favorable的发音需要注意
41s: with great 后面不是很清晰
最后一句的时态需要注意下
5/7:
Task1:
14s: shy的发音注意下
42s: had
例子不错,不过可以加些具体描述,比如什么样的演讲,这样会充实些
Task2:
9s: I can to someone?
25s: couldn't deal with
36s: solved
44s: next感觉n念的有点像l
例子挺好的,楼主的时态需要注意