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发表于 2014-2-13 10:00:08 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

本帖最后由 woodpecker017 于 2014-3-19 09:48 编辑

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附上考试时间：没抢到好位置，报了3.23，看看感觉先···想一次过
tpo 22

tpo 22 integral writing.docx (19.39 KB, 下载次数: 10)

2.13 独立写作 problems nowadays

problems today solve.docx (27.39 KB, 下载次数: 2)

2.14 parents today parents 50 years ago

parents do not understand.docx (27.72 KB, 下载次数: 31)

2.15 movies reward good punish bad

movies good reward bad punish.docx (26.85 KB, 下载次数: 1)

2.16 tpo21 integral

tpo 21 integral.docx (20.06 KB, 下载次数: 4)

2.17 advice from old friends

advice from older friends.docx (28.7 KB, 下载次数: 2)

2.18 attend class pass exam

not necessary fo students to attend classes.docx (26.23 KB, 下载次数: 3)

2.19 ads honest

advertise less honest.docx (26.6 KB, 下载次数: 3)

2.20

business succeed money advertising.docx (25.47 KB, 下载次数: 1)

2.21 environmental issue

the environmental issue complex.docx (27.14 KB, 下载次数: 3)

2.24 tpo20

tpo 20.docx (18.56 KB, 下载次数: 7)

2.25 problems today understand past

2.26 nice to others

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2.27

scientists responsible for discoveries.docx (26.81 KB, 下载次数: 3)

2.28 tpo19

tpo19.docx (18.97 KB, 下载次数: 2)

3.2

young children education universities.docx (27.09 KB, 下载次数: 1)

3.3 nice

nice about others changed.docx (25.14 KB, 下载次数: 10)

麻烦大神修改一下这篇life easier

life easier.docx (26.17 KB, 下载次数: 1) 谢谢！

3.4 tpo18

tpo18.docx (20.08 KB, 下载次数: 4)

3.5 leisurely life

twenty years leisure life.docx (27.23 KB, 下载次数: 3)

3.6 teacher homework

teacher assing work.docx (25.54 KB, 下载次数: 2)

3.7 long last short-term

long time short term pleasure.docx (30.05 KB, 下载次数: 3)

3.9 TV entertain education

TV educate entertain.docx (26.38 KB, 下载次数: 5)

3.10 e-books kill printed books

20 years not paper book.docx (29.09 KB, 下载次数: 3)

3.11 teacher salary student performance

paid teacher well study.docx (25.46 KB, 下载次数: 4)

3.12 tpo17

tpo17.docx (18.94 KB, 下载次数: 3)

3.13 museum

museum.docx (27.65 KB, 下载次数: 3)

3.15 plan

plan.docx (24.04 KB, 下载次数: 3)

3.17 internet transorprtation

internet transportation.docx (27.61 KB, 下载次数: 2)

3.18 business money

business desire.docx (26.73 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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发表于 2014-2-13 12:32:00 |只看该作者

先吃个午饭，马上修改。大神文章得仔细读啊。吃饱了好发挥。哈哈

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The speaker thinks that ethanol is a good choice for fuel that can take place of gasoline, and offer three points rebut the passage.
Firstly, admitted that burning ethanol will not help reduce the emission of CO2, but in order to gain ethanol, people will grow more plants, which consume CO2 and hence remove green-house gas from air, thus contribute to the relief of global warming, which refute the first point of the reading passage.

本身文章没有问题，这部分对听力原文的理解可能有出入。lecture里面是说plant成长的过程中需要吸收二氧化碳，这部分吸收的二氧化碳和ethanol 燃烧产生的二氧化碳抵消掉了，counteract 这个点是很重要的。因为一进一出，所以没有好处也没有坏处。

Secondly, the production of ethanol will not cause decrease in food supply for eating and feeding animals as stated in passage, because ethanol can be made from the parts of plant that are not eaten.

这部分写的有些少，就一句话，because ethanol can be made from the parts of plant that are not eaten如果时间够用的话可以展开了写。It is true that we have to produce ethanol from plant, but only a specific part called cellulose, which is just from cell wall. Moreover, this specific part is not eaten by animals. So conclusion can be drawn that the number of animals' food will not be influenced by ethanol production.

Thirdly, the expenditure of ethanol will be competitive in the future compared with gasoline, not just resulted from subsidies as claimed in the passage. In the future, when more people use ethanol, the production will increase and it's price will fall. It's estimated that when the sales are three times bigger, the price of ethanol will drop 40%.

productivity triples, price will drop 40 percent,这个数据的例证加进去很不错。
总体评价应该算是 good了吧。😄

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