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发表于 2014-3-21 19:21:00 |显示全部楼层

各位好，有几个问题请教大家
1.今天写了一下issue123,题目如下：

The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

我的态度是competition and cooperation都需要，instruction要求写能够challenge的观点，应该如何入手，我感觉我的态度是中立的。

2. issue里面有两个特别相似的instruction
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

二者只有ways与circumstances的细微差异，在写法上有什么不同？

谢谢大家，欢迎讨论！
ps: 前辈们很少讲解issue的instruction

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发表于 2014-3-22 01:34:31 |显示全部楼层

根据李建林说的，Issue的6种Instruction都可以通过两个以上body paragraph有正有反的方式达标。所以同一个题目，针对不同的Instruction的写法可以区别不大。

就你提出的这两个具体的题目。
“compelling” 的Instruction只要有正反论点，而且都说明了他们的合理性，就达标了。

“ways”的Instruction允许一边倒，其他没什么别的要求

"circumstances"要求要用例证法，而且对例子要有分析。不能一句话列出来就完事。