求助：关于issue的instruction, 欢迎讨论~

liaodanni123UID: 3500897

各位好，有几个问题请教大家
1.今天写了一下issue123,题目如下：

The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.


Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/or examples that could be used to challenge your position.

我的态度是competition and cooperation都需要，instruction要求写能够challenge的观点，应该如何入手，我感觉我的态度是中立的。

2. issue里面有两个特别相似的instruction
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.

Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.

二者只有ways与circumstances的细微差异，在写法上有什么不同？

谢谢大家，欢迎讨论！
ps: 前辈们很少讲解issue的instruction

creativeUID: 2193617

根据李建林说的，Issue的6种Instruction都可以通过两个以上body paragraph有正有反的方式达标。所以同一个题目，针对不同的Instruction的写法 可以 区别不大。

就你提出的这两个具体的题目。
“compelling” 的Instruction只要有正反论点，而且都说明了他们的合理性，就达标了。

“ways”的Instruction允许一边倒，其他没什么别的要求

"circumstances"要求要用例证法，而且对例子要有分析。不能一句话列出来就完事。

liaodanni123UID: 3500897

creative 发表于 2014-3-22 01:34
根据李建林说的，Issue的6种Instruction都可以通过两个以上body paragraph有正有反的方式达标。所以同一个题 ...

楼上给力！~
那我的第一个题目，态度是competition 和 cooperation都可以，那么我该如何提出自己的对立观点呢？

foamflyUID: 3337580

liaodanni123 发表于 2014-3-22 09:19
楼上给力！~
那我的第一个题目，态度是competition 和 cooperation都可以，那么我该如何提出自 ...

题目中的观点是 BEST是comp，而不是co。
你等于说是反对题干的。因为你觉得缺一不可，并不是中立的态度。
你可以阐述，为什么comp并不是best的，单单只有comp的危害，co带来的好处等等。