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初来乍到,大家多多指教!:p
5.7
Task 1 Describe one thing you didn't want to do but were asked to do. How was the result? Please explain with details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to solve a challenge all by themselves. Others prefer to depend on other people's help. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO21
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntjtz77



5.6
Task 1 Which of the following period is the most difficult time of a person's life: childhood, teenage years or adulthood?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: students should do part-time jobs before they attend college.
Task 3-6 TPO 22
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTLrjxX



5.5
Task 1 Choose one of the forms of technology in the list and explain how it changes (has great impact on) people's lives in your country. 1)airplane 2)computer 3)television
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the way people dress can express their personality.
Task 3-6 TPO 23
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1GPJyu



5.4
Task 1 Which one of the three occupations do you think is the hardest? Government worker, doctor or policy officer? Please state your reasons with specific details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future. Others prefer to concentrate on present things and don't make any plans at all. Which way do you prefer and why?
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWqEKGW



5.1
Task 1 What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating in a fast-food restaurant?
Task 2 Some schools offer classes early in the morning while others provide classes late at night. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO 27
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTA1EjP



4.28
Task 1  Talk about an activity you enjoyed doing with your family when you were a child. Describe the activity and explain why it was enjoyable to do this activity with your family.
Task 2 Some students prefer to study or work on difficult class assignments early in the morning. Other students prefer to do this type of work in the evening. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO 30
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jG3HYdg



4.27
Task 1  Describe a day that you enjoyed the most or was the most special to you. Include reasons and details to support your response.
Task 2  Some people prefer to make decisions quickly. Others prefer to take their time. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 3-6 TPO 31
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjNg5dF



4.25
Task 1 Describe a piece of news or story you concern recently. Explain why it's getting your attention. Include reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Employees should wear formal clothes. Please give your opinion and explanation using specific examples and details.
Task 3-6 TPO 1
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjCWZ9b



4.24
Task 1 Many students do volunteering in schools or communities. If you are a volunteer, what kind of volunteer work are you interested in? Gardening in a community, doing activities with children, or cleaning a place in a city. Explaining reasons and using examples to support your response.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The government should spend money on projects that can encourage citizens to lead healthier lifestyle. Please give your opinion and explanation.
Task 3-6 TPO 2
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o6Nm3xg



4.22
Task 1 Which following way of education do you support most? Through books, through communication within the community, or travelling around the world. Please give specific reasons and examples.
Task 2 Some people like e-books. Some people prefer paper books. Which one do your prefer and why? Please give specific reasons to support your idea.
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hq3fQgG



4.21
Task 1 Among the following three types of books-mystery, science fiction and biography, which do you like the least? Explain why.
Task 2 Some people like to collect old things, others throw things away after they wear out. What about you?
Task 3-6 TPO 5
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sjyJInN



4.20
Task 1 Describe a piece of news or a story you concern recently. Explain why it gets your attention. Include reasons and details in your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer friends who share similar views. Others prefer those who have different standpoints. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO 6
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i35fFX7



4.19
Task 1. What are the benefits of chatting with older family members? Please include specific reasons and details in your response.
Task 2. You can contact your friends and families by letter, email or telephone. Which method of communicating do you think is better and why? Please state your reasons with specific details.
Task 3-6 TPO 7
http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTiaVcF



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1  感觉楼主录得好“轻柔”,可以更自信或者更有力气一点~
第一句 I suggest the environmental group to plan to ..
since we are now facing greenhouse problem ?
can great help improving our environment ?

2
consider going to gym a priorty in my life
35" in this cases 前后不一致
42“ I think to go to the gym as a priority -> view going to the gym as a priority ?
超时了~
内容不够充实,最后一句只能重复论点了,
而且语速似乎有点偏慢

看起来是”第一次“,再接再励,一起加油哦!
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发表于 2014-4-21 14:30:19 |只看该作者
评4.20作业
T1 我觉得声音太小了,首先就没有气势,到了美国可不能这么跟人交流。建议nora下次换一个地方练习,周围的声音太嘈杂,比如学校咖啡厅。对于故事的描述不够specific,细节不够,美国人喜欢直白清晰的细节,比如你可以多说说你朋友的舅舅以前是什么的环境,什么原因导致放弃banker做painter。词汇量简单都不是问题,而是要用心讲好这个故事。
T2 这个话题最大的问题也是说的不够深入,你可以用发生在你身上的朋友的例子说明share views的好处,现在的论述都浮于表面,不够生动,会影响得分。另外有些表达不好,we are excited/ shopping is exciting 表示人的情感时要用过去分词形式。
加油!希望你也给我多提建议~

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活性氧 发表于 2014-4-19 20:50
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1  感觉楼主录得好“轻柔”,可以更自信或者更有力气一点~
第一句 I suggest the environmental gro ...

谢谢点评~我会再接再厉!~

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Shadow.xie 发表于 2014-4-21 14:30
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T1 我觉得声音太小了,首先就没有气势,到了美国可不能这么跟人交流。建议nora下次换一个地方练 ...

恩恩~~昨天是特殊情况,来不及只能在楼道里录了,下次会注意~你的建议很好,我下次会注意用细节充实!~

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发表于 2014-4-21 23:30:01 |只看该作者
hi你好,我来评价4.19:

t1:
停顿较多了;
理由上略乏力,可以说他后来花很久转到喜欢的专业 或 更多细节关于feel bad;
语音等其他没问题。

t2:
进入主题那会时间长了点,没必要完整叙述的,不建议花13s来重复;
理由等都没问题。

t3:
建议一般先说下plan+2理由;
schedule['skɛul];
确切说的是if the money is problem...。

t4
没说bad effects,主要就是based on the what they learned about the consequences
内容上细节有点不足,主要是:disturb the teacher--punish--learn it; raise hands..--reward--act like it,第二点你说的略少,毕竟只有8s了;
最后建议总结一下it is the behavior modification that made them would act...。

t5
没啥问题。

t6
project? 用product吧;
超时了;
结尾那里有点问题,change decision-making 主要还是always reliable,不要偏到features。

lz在宿舍吧,有各种背景声音;lz声音有点小,不过可以理解,但是考试时还是建议放开说,稍微带快点。
语音语调没问题,内容、结构上lz可以多练习练习,熟练熟悉就很好了。加油~

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Task1:
4s: biography读音注意下,中间是a的音
15s: a wide range
20-22s: such as 不能直接加句子
科幻小说的描述可以详细下,其与人体并没有直接关系。
Task2:
5s: 建议直接用定语从句,seem的单三去掉,seem后面不要直接加名词,some of which seem lacking in
25s: many times I spend? 应为much time I spend
36s:听得不太清楚,是说private?

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rainbow0206 发表于 2014-4-21 23:30
hi你好,我来评价4.19:

t1:

谢谢点评!!你的建议很好,我下次会在内容结构上多多改进~也尽量提高录音质量吧~

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martinmx87 发表于 2014-4-22 22:45
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Task1:
4s: biography读音注意下,中间是a的音

task 1没看清题,理解成biology了。。:L
task 2那个是present, 发音没发清~~
谢谢你的点评啦~~我会多多加油滴~

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t1
11" all of a suddent  这里感觉用的不太合适,比如你走在路上突然有个花瓶砸你头上,比较合适用这个词吧。
其他没发现什么问题,声音可以再大声一点~~
t2
第二个理由时间不够了应该可以不用说,
it can inspire the efficiency of a team和你举得例子似乎没有关系。。 还有 inspire the efficiency 我不确定这个搭配有没有问题。

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task 1,LZ可能是上过培训班吧,所以在做t1时用了hedge,就是引子,用引子可以,但不要太长。20' which is out of your imagination,LZ在这里缺少谓语。25' attended用过去式,需要注意时态。貌似LZ在一边说一边组织语言或是一边说一边翻译吧?停顿和“嗯”较多,这时就应该体现笔记的重要性。
task 2,30‘ 应该是people rely more吧?仍需注意停顿。

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kaleidoscopio 发表于 2014-4-26 21:51
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task 1,LZ可能是上过培训班吧,所以在做t1时用了hedge,就是引子,用引子可以,但不要太长。20' whic ...

谢谢你的点评,其实我没上过培训班,引子指什么啊?还有不是只有15秒准备么?来得及记笔记么?

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4/27:
Task1:
时态都要注意下
26s:go on a trip
Task2:
9s: I will take more risk或者to... is more risky
19s: without的读音需要注意下,另外without any hesitation后面and没必要
40s:before investigation?感觉有点奇怪,是不是after
decision的读音注意下
时态需要注意

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LZ,1,注意disadvantages的发音。you can get food (what) you want
       2, 内容不错,语速方面偏慢,我的语速也很慢,一起加油,另外注意there are 连读

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martinmx87 发表于 2014-4-30 22:26
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Task1:

谢谢点评~下次会注意时态,口语的时候时态和单复数什么的总是很乱啊~

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