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本帖最后由 aliceyang128 于 2014-6-26 08:45 编辑

alice的短期目标:1. 短时间内理清思路 2. 在有限的时间里说清楚关键点

在这里先谢过要帮我批改的小伙伴们了!共勉!
6.26http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0jDZQ4

Task 1 Which of the following activities is more likely to make you happy: gathering with friends, studying alone or travelling?
Task 2 Some schools offer classes early in the morning while others provide classes late at night. Which do you prefer and why?


6.25http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQ5oClc

Task 1 Your friend studies in a business school now, but he likes to play musical instrument. What suggestion would you give to your friend? To keep studying business, or to learn to play music?
Task 2 Some people choose to go to a school which is close to home so that they can keep their old friends. Other people like to study far away from home so that they can make new friends. Which do you prefer and why?


6.24http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTr7nXP

Task 1 Which is the most challenging place to work? Museum, hospital or business office?
Task 2 Which do you prefer: participating in activities alone or with a team or group? Please explain with examples and details.


6.23http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD4AEHj

Task 1 A school is planning to organize its students to visit a workplace. Which place do you recommend the students to visit? A)A science lab; B)A business office; C)A TV studio
Task 2 If you have time, would you choose to learn to play a new musical instrument or learn to play a new sport?


6.21http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTxCOgZ

Task 1 What personal quality do you admire most? Creativity, courage or intelligence? Explain why? Please include details and examples in your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to listen to music while they are studying or working. Others prefer to stay in a quiet place while they are studying or working. Which way do you prefer and why? Include reasons and details in your response.


6.20http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgHT7Lm

Task 1  Describe the differences between two cities that you have visited before. Give details and examples to support your response.  
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should encourage students to start using computers from primary school. Give details and examples to support your response.


6.19http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqvbdUc

因为是之前做过的题目,所以比较熟练了
Task 1  Many schools do not allow students to take their laptop computers into the classroom. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having laptop computers in the classroom? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Task 2  Some people like to move about and live in different places. Others like to stay at one place all their lives. Which do you prefer and why?


6.18http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntFPAS5

Task 1  What kind of food do you recommend to add to the food menu of the campus cafeteria? Use Examples and details to support your response.
Task 2  Some people like to buy new and expensive books while others prefer to buy old and cheap ones. Which would you prefer?


06.17http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGiLHJ4

Task 1. If you were to choose a place to live, what kind of location would you prefer and why?  1. A place close to school 2. A place close to your family 3. A place close to a transportation hub (airport or bus terminal, etc.)
Task 2. Some people think the best way to study is to attend a lecture. Others say that it’s better to read by yourself. Which way do you prefer and why?


06.16http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i33g1mP

Task 1. Nowadays robots are widely used in the society. What are the benefits and risks of this?
Task 2. Should employees be required to wear suits in the workplace, or should they wear casual clothes?


06.13http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnpf2l5

Task 1 Talk about the benefits of talking to older family members (grandparents, uncles, aunts, etc.)
Task 2 When things at home such as furniture or electrical appliances are broken, some people prefer to have them repaired in a shop, while others prefer to fix them at home. Which do you prefer and why?


06.11http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJHhsoj

Task 1 What is your favorite outdoor place to do exercise in a nice day?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is never too late for an old person to receive higher education and to get a university degree. Use specific reasons to support your answer.


06.10http://pan.baidu.com/s/1AgoUE

Task 1 Many schools do not allow students to take their laptop computers into the classroom. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of having laptop computers in the classroom? Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Task 2Some people like to move about and live in different places. Others like to stay at one place all their lives. Which do you prefer and why?


06.09http://pan.baidu.com/s/1o67FM10

Task 1 A high school plans to add an extracurricular activity for students. What kind of activity would you recommend?
Task 2 Can part-time jobs help people prepare for their future career? Please give your opinion with specific reasons and details.

06.07http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c08Ghg8

Task 1 Describe the transportation you like the most. It could be bicycle, automobile, train etc.. Explain why you think this transportation is important to you.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree that people with read fewer books in the future? Pleas give specific reasons to support your idea.


06.06http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bn2C5hP

Task 1 Your friend is concerned about a presentation that he has to give to the class. What advice would you give to help your friend to prepare for the presentation?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree that it is a good idea for university to ask a student to leave school if he was caught cheating in exams? Explain your response in details.


06.05http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWDbxpU

Task 1 Describe a study habit you have that is different from other students. Explain how this habit helped you.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? University education is more important than it was in the past.


06.04http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gd3knsf

Task 1 Which class would you choose to attend if it is free: 1)improve the skill of public presentation 2)how to start a small business 3)improve photographic skill
Task 2 Which shop do you prefer? Large department store or boutique? Please give your answer with specific examples and details.


06.03http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQ7qdP4

Task 1 Describe the most important development of your country in the past 20 years, and explain its significance.
Task 2 Some people prefer to deal with difficulties by themselves, others prefer to ask for help. What do you think?


06.01http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mgI9dLe

Task 1 Which type of movie is not enjoyable for you to watch? Action, romance or science-fiction? Please give your answer with specific examples and details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Cellphones have greatly improved people's lives.


05.31http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qWCvnOC 整套

Task 1 Describe an event in history and explain what you learned from this event.
Task 2 Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future. Others prefer to concentrate on present things and don't make any plans at all. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO 27


05.30http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i30yg2h 整套

Task 1 Describe the most important day of your life. Explain why it is important to you. Please include reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some people prefer to do one job or project at one time. Others prefer to do several jobs at the same time. Which do you prefer and why?
Task 3-6 TPO 28
第一次练整套,感觉强度好大,练到最后实在是无力重录了,会有各种语法错误和口头禅一类吧,只能慢慢改了……


05.29http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3FXgH3

Task 1 What do you think is the most important quality of a working environment: good leaders, good colleagues or flexible working time? Please use specific reasons and examples to support your response.
Task 2 Some people like to take a break or get a job during summer vacation. Others think it is better to take classes. Which do you prefer and why?


05.28http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gdwyoCF

Task 1 Where is your favortie place to exercise outdoors? Please include specific examples and details in your explanation.
Task 2 When on a trip, some people like to keep a journal and take pictures, others just enjoy the journey without recording. Which do your prefer and why?


05.27http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jGJsHOM

Task 1 Describe a person in your family whose personality is very different from yours.
Task 2 Some schools require students to bring their own computers to the classroom. Do you agree or disagree with this policy?


05.22http://pan.baidu.com/s/1mg0rsY8

Task 1 If you are asked by your teacher to do community service, which of the following would you choose? Explain why. 1.helping children with their homework 2. teaching adults to use the computer 3. cleaning city park
Task 2 Do you prefer to live in an area that is noisy but close to shops or public transportation, or an area that is quiet but far away from shops and public transportation?


05.21http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sj2iQc9

Task 1  Describe one way to improve the system of education in your country. Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.
Task 2 Some people like to collect old things such as newspapers. Others throw things away after they have used them. Which do you prefer and why?


05.20http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0zR0Mc

T1是练过的题了,又练习了一遍还是用的之前的答案
Task 1  Describe a performer, an actor or a musician, etc. that you think is great. Please give specific reasons why you think he/she is a great performer.
Task 2  When things at home such as furniture or electrical appliances are broken, some people prefer to have them repaired in a shop, while others prefer to fix them at home. Which do you prefer and why?


05.19http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c08ESdq

Task 1  One of your friends has suddenly received a large amount of money and has asked you for advice on how to handle this money. What advice would you give to your friend? Give reasons for your answer.
Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with this statement? People should dress according to the latest fashion.


05.17http://pan.baidu.com/s/1gdDYvq7

Task 1 Your friend often feels nervous when speaking in front of a large group of people. What suggestions would you give to your friend to overcome this fear?
Task 2 Do you prefer to have fast food in a fast-food restaurant, or do you prefer to have food in other kinds of places?


05.16http://pan.baidu.com/s/1jG5KF7C

T1没有很丰富的内容,T2的例子也不太好……
Task 1: Talk about an activity you enjoyed doing with your family when you were a child. Describe the activity and explain why it was enjoyable to do this activity with your family.
Task 2:  Some people like to watch or listen to news every day while others do that occasionally. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to illustrate your point.



05.15http://pan.baidu.com/s/1eQ9W4fg

这两个都是老话题了,之前练过。T1直接又练习了一遍,T2重新做了一遍因为上次的严重跑题……
Task 1 : Describe one thing you didn’t want to do but you were asked to do. Explain what the result of that thing was. Include reasons and details in your response.
Task 2:Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future. Others prefer to concentrate on present things and don't make any plans at all. Which way do you prefer? Use specific reasons to support your answer.


05.14http://pan.baidu.com/s/1qW2k412

T1这个话题和之前的有一篇相似,就把之前说的改了改,录下来了,算是一个回顾吧……
Task 1  Describe a time when you tried to do something that you have never done. Explain what you did and why you did it.
Task 2  Do you agree or disagree with the statement: artists and musicians are important to our society.


05.13http://pan.baidu.com/s/1zVfNC 这两个话题感觉没有太多能说的,举的例子也不够好

Task 1 Some schools require students to take part in community service activities after school. Which of the following do you think is the best activity for students? 1. planting flowers in the community 2.doing clean-ups in the garden 3. recycling waste
Task 2 Some people prefer to make decisions quickly. Others prefer to take their time. Which do you prefer and why? Use specific reasons and examples to support your response.


05.12http://pan.baidu.com/s/1c0u1uPa

Task 1 If a foreign friend comes to your country, what kind of food would you recommend and why? Please use past personal experience to explain your answer.
Task 2 Do you like to travel alone or with your family members? Explain your answer with details and examples.


05.10http://pan.baidu.com/s/1kTgFNRT

Task 1 Describe your favourite place to shop for clothes. Explain why you like to go there.
Task 2 Some students prefer test questions that ask for opinions while others prefer objective ones that have a correct answer. What do you think?


05.09http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntpzho9
好像又上火发炎了,嗓子和耳朵都在疼……录了好几遍才清晰一些

Task 1 Describe an event in history and explain what you learned from that event. Please explain with details.
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should learn to draw or paint.


05.08http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnkZMVX

Task 1 Describe the most important day of your life. Explain why it is important to you.
Task 2 Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in small towns, others prefer big cities. Which do you prefer and why?


05.07http://pan.baidu.com/s/1ntBdNCH

Task 1 Describe one thing you didn't want to do but were asked to do. How was the result? Please explain with details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to solve a challenge all by themselves. Others prefer to depend on other people's help. Which do you prefer and why?


05.06http://pan.baidu.com/s/1pJBF86Z

Task 1 Which of the following period is the most difficult time of a person's life: childhood, teenage years or adulthood?
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: students should do part-time jobs before they attend college.


05.05http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bn3W20R

Task 1 Choose one of the forms of technology in the list and explain how it changes (has great impact on) people's lives in your country. 1)airplane 2)computer 3)television
Task 2 Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: the way people dress can express their personality.


05.04http://pan.baidu.com/s/1bnaQmxp

Task 1 Which one of the three occupations do you think is the hardest? Government worker, doctor or policy officer? Please state your reasons with specific details.
Task 2 Some people prefer to make detailed plans for the future. Others prefer to concentrate on present things and don't make any plans at all. Which way do you prefer and why?

05.03http://pan.baidu.com/s/1sj4PLYP

Task 1 Describe a celebration or a public event you attended recently, and explain why it was memorable to you.
Task 2 Some people prefer to do one job or one project at a time. Others prefer to do several jobs or projects at the same time. Which do you prefer and why?


05.02http://pan.baidu.com/s/1hqHZv7I

Task 1 What do you think is the most important quality of a working environment? Good leaders, good colleagues or flexible working time?
Task 2 Some people like to take a break or get a job during summer vacation. Others think it is better to take classes. Which do you prefer and why?


05.01http://pan.baidu.com/s/1i3KFf61

*HAPPY LABOUR HOLIDAY*
Task 1 What are the advantages and disadvantages of eating in a fast-food restaurant?
Task 2 Some schools offer classes early in the morning while others provide classes late at night. Which do you prefer and why?


04.30http://pan.baidu.com/s/1dD5oh1J

Task 1 Describe a performer, an actor or a musician, etc. that you think is great. Please give specific reasons why you think he/she is a great performer.
Task 2  Some people would borrow money to buy things they need. Others would save up money until they can afford it. Which would you do and why?



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T1:
1.时间方面,注意一下
2.语音,语调很赞。很流利
3.20’ song was a brilliant re...不知道什么意思。
4.内容方面,reasons 很到位。
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1.发音饱满。
2.中间有点卡。
3.内容上,我觉可以更精彩点。可以将troubles 和distrust展开点。估计是时间不够吧。

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havrl 发表于 2014-5-1 14:02
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T1:
1.时间方面,注意一下

嗯嗯,我在时间把握上比较弱,要学习一下你的时间把握能力,每次都正好呢

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aliceyang128 发表于 2014-5-2 10:10
嗯嗯,我在时间把握上比较弱,要学习一下你的时间把握能力,每次都正好呢

不是,软件可以设置的吧。

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havrl 发表于 2014-5-2 14:41
不是,软件可以设置的吧。

我直接用手机录的,看着时间的,但是每次时间结束都说不完想说的话……

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aliceyang128 发表于 2014-5-2 16:37
我直接用手机录的,看着时间的,但是每次时间结束都说不完想说的话……

关键你什么时候考了,如果时间比较长,可以说一分钟练习两个月。如果不长,就限时吧。

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havrl 发表于 2014-5-2 16:52
关键你什么时候考了,如果时间比较长,可以说一分钟练习两个月。如果不长,就限时吧。

嗯,多谢建议!~~

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本帖最后由 SYSU-Mindy 于 2014-5-3 01:56 编辑

我来批改5.2
总体来说发音和语调都很好呀,赞耶!
task1:
1 题目问的是 “the ”most important ,楼主用得是“ a” most important,难道我听错啦?
2 建议给点比较detail的论据,我觉得形容“good colleagues很重要“给一两句话就好了,剩下的时间可以详细的说一个例子。比如”我曾经加入过一个小组,组员如何,结果怎样“。我是比较习惯这样的表述啦,可以出多点details。

task2:
1第一个vocations的发音
2楼主好腻害,我是不敢选两个点的,我是handle一个就好了==
3that i can't just acquire them from classed,这是修饰personalities的么?"them"多余了吧

我是小弱,楼楼选择性听取哈。:lol
我的作业:https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1718480-1-1.html
我这次用手机录的,是amr格式的哈。

ps:楼楼我想问下,你说的”1. 短时间内理清思路 2. 在有限的时间里说清楚关键点“ 你是每次都限制自己看到题目15s内想出论点,45秒内说完么。我还没限制过自己的思考时间呢==

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SYSU-Mindy 发表于 2014-5-3 01:53
我来批改5.2
总体来说发音和语调都很好呀,赞耶!
task1:

谢谢批改哈!我等下去听听你的~

嗯,我一说的快就会有吞音和吐字不清的情况了……那个them是应该去掉的……

我目前还达不到那个理想状态,基本上理清思路需要一分钟,说也要重复三四次才能流利……所以我还在朝自己那个目标努力……之前考过一次T,T1T2部分那15秒都是晕过去的,后面的45秒一塌糊涂什么也没说清楚,所以我觉得时间管理很重要

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T1:
1. 12' pressure ...opportunities?
2. invite to..吧。
3. the symbol of the program was locked on it ?还是什么意思啊?program 怎么lock。
T2:
1.很清晰
2.5‘-10’ 有点在读了。
3.内容很好。
4.但是整个过程中没有说你的reason。why? 你的例子要支撑你的什么理由。不能支撑你的结果(我喜欢做一件事)。

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我来评5.1的哈,抱歉来晚了,前两天跟同学出去玩去了:p
task1: 嗯嗯,楼主的思路比较清晰,就是一句话说下来要有重点,比如,especially要重读,而the的发音有点重,应该轻读的啦
task2: 这题的思路也很清晰,求教楼主怎么可以说的这么顺利,我老是断断续续说不好:O

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若雨挂念太多 发表于 2014-5-5 10:27
我来评5.1的哈,抱歉来晚了,前两天跟同学出去玩去了
task1: 嗯嗯,楼主的思路比较清晰,就是一句话说下 ...

可能是我本来嘴皮子就比较利吧……不过我也是录了好几遍才熟练的
谢谢你的建议哈~~

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T1 楼主发音清晰饱满,值得学习
最后还差5秒左右,又说了一遍观点有些重复
中间能再流利一点就锦上添花了
T2
个人觉得你的例子不是特别恰当,好像只是在说要把完成事情的先后顺序安排清楚,和future可能稍微有点偏
但是楼主的词汇运用都挺值的学习。
相比于T1 这个有点太流利了,给人感觉排练了很多遍的感觉。

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活性氧 发表于 2014-5-5 13:20
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T1 楼主发音清晰饱满,值得学习
最后还差5秒左右,又说了一遍观点有些重复

哈哈 被你发现了……因为个人觉得T2和前一天练的第二题很像就直接拿来用了,所以非常流利……

不过你这么一说我也注意到了,是有点偏题了……

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havrl 发表于 2014-5-4 23:59
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1. 12' pressure ...opportunities?
2. invite to..吧。

harvl你是不是评错地方了?感觉这些不是我说的啊……:L

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