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196 "Technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life."
196. 科技产生的问题多于所解决的,可能威胁或降低人们的生活质量。
Position disagree with concession
科技给人类解决的问题大于产生的问题,因为科技大大改善了人们的生活,尽管科技的确带来了很多问题
b1科技解决了很多问题,使人们的生活大大改善
b2科技是人类社会发展的手段,人们不能放弃科技
b3科技的确带来了一些负面问题,给人们的生活带来了不变甚至威胁,人们应该发展科技而尽量减少其负面作用
As the development of technology, more problems are solved but new problems appear. Thus, some people as the speaker claim that technology creates more problems than it solves, and may threaten or damage the quality of life. In my point of view, technology solves more problems than it brings for our daily lives are turning better and better owing to technology though it creates some new problems.
First, technology solves a host of problems, which makes people's lives change(become) much better than before. Technology, which affects even in every fields of our society and it also plays a more important role that may be a necessary kind of tool used more frequently, solves a considerable of problems such as diseases curing, traveling and transportation, education, and so on. Nowadays, people cannot live without technology at all, so to speak, technology (like the air) is always everywhere around (like the air). People watch TV, travel among webs, make dialogues by phones or cellphones(mobile phone or cell phone), and cook with a micro-wave oven and so on. By such various sorts of instruments of technology, it is getting more convenient and comfortable for human's life. For example, the new kind of industry, E-business has made its great success to come to(benefit) us. One can select things which they want to buy on the web and input the VISA number to pay for the goods whatever are wanted whether books or a Hummer. And it will be soon to receive things you bought which should be sent to your home with perfect service. Accordingly, technology has done a great deal for human's lives.(论述清晰,例子也很恰当)
Second, in modern times, technology is the main method for people to improve our societies that should not be abandoned. As the further leader, great politician of China, Den Xiaoping once said that technology is(主语时态?) the first productivity.(power of producing) It means that technology has become the engine power of the improving of modern societies and that more and more competitions at many levels-from companies to countries-are based on a technological level at which technology itself is the only key to judge who win and who lose. The technology goes, and then human race goes after it though technology is like a little kid of human. Since it is so weighty, people would never abandon it in that people would never desire slowing our development.
Admittedly, as a coin has two sides, technology cannot avoid being such a two-edged sword, which also may bring in negative problems. Such as environmental pollutions, cyber crimes, and even bigger problem, for example, people are changing lonelier but few words.(Why? You know and I know, but it is also necessary to expatiate it.) These problems are born after their positive sides, which do put lots of people in mires sometimes. But we should not deny technology for such reasons, if we do so, we would deny everything at the same reason that there are negative sides. We people, the lord of the world with high intelligence, should make it a better world with the help of technology and, of course, solve these problems as possible as we can.(911的例子我觉得更好)
To sum up, technology, only an instrument, should be used more properly and sufficiently with right purposes with an eye to decreasing its negative points(I cannot find the evidences to support this statement in your essay) and doing more and more contributions to our world.
写的很好,只是一些minor mistakes, 最后一段不要过于发展,把前面的话重述一下就是了 |
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