Issue130 children vs destiny vs how to raise 还有7天了

taftUID: 157217

130."How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."

In the era of rapid and technological change leading to complex society, we are always asking how the future of the world would be? To answer the question it usually leads to the discussion of that how children socialized today determines the destiny of society. As far as I am concerned, I agree with this assertion and believe that in the process of raising children, they need to know two things: responsibility and cooperation.

To begin with, children should prepare them for the future with full awareness of responsibility to both themselves and societies. As children growing up, they become conscious of who they are and what they are going to do for themselves and the others. Responsibility, in this case, is a direct guidance for their actions. With responsibility, they know why they have to go to school; with responsibility, they know why they must work hard. On one hand, responsibility entitles them essential impulse to deal with issues around -- education, self-improvement, their future objective and etc; on the other hand, through constant concentrating on one's own responsibility, they are able to conquer whatever hardship they would meet in the long but limit paths of life. Moreover, responsibility teaches children to be a useful person in societies. In order to keep consistent social development, working force of tomorrow--our children of today-- ought to understand important roles as social member they are going to play. To enrich human knowledge, to maintain cultural identity, to build more advanced society, all they need to do is to form a sense of responsibility deeply in their heart, a flame that only they can kindle. So, responsibility secures both our children's health development and a better future of tomorrow.

Next, children must have to be aware of cooperation with others for problem solving and social advancements. There is no escaping fact that children when they touch our complex society by their first steps they have to keep firm connection with a variety of individuals-- not only their contemporaries but also old generations, not only people from their own societies but also from others with completely different culture and value systems. Along with the development of science and technology, our world are becoming a global village, but there are new things coming out through this procedure, posed to human beings. Global pollution, for example, requires not only a single nation to handle this serious problem but asks all nations in the world to work effectively together. Our children, the future leaders of the world, should have the essential sense of cooperation to cope with every problem-- no matter it has exist for a long time and unknown issues in the future. Besides solving problems through cooperation, they are also supposed to keep our society advancing by means of cooperation. Every one nowadays deeply believe that we are to usher in a new and more stirring episode of science and technology drama in no more than one hundred years. To carry out more challenge tasks children must realize that they first need to learn from others and then cooperate with others rather than acting for their own interest. Consequently, our children will inevitably grasp the powerful tools of development during the process of socialization.

In sum, We admit and believe that how children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. In addition, we have learned how to raise children in the background of complex society. That is, by instilling them senses of responsibility and cooperation, they will guide our society to a more intriguing future.

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maniacUID: 155886

对responsibility和cooperation的分析着实精彩，另外，对合作还可以反着说：不合作会自闭，甚至最后anti-social
整体上，可适当让步，如加一段：论断过于绝对，socialization只是决定社会命运诸多因素中的一个，还有许多其它原因。
最后，题目中说我们没能学会怎样教孩子建设一个更好的社会，这方面你好像没怎么提，可谈谈现在教育中确实存在一些不足

tiraUID: 139377

Both themes are concerning about human relationships. maybe your idears can be braodened by including something about external world or personalities ( like one should adapt to changes and pragmatic)

taftUID: 157217

To maniac

整体上，可适当让步，如加一段：论断过于绝对，socialization只是决定社会命运诸多因素中的一个，还有许多其它原因。

是啊，可以在最后以段说说

最后，题目中说我们没能学会怎样教孩子建设一个更好的社会，这方面你好像没怎么提，可谈谈现在教育中确实存在一些不足

这个题目给了两个问题，但我觉得火力集中点，就选了一个方向，都涉及到感觉散了

To tira
adapt to changes 可以 但 pragmatic和这个关系不是很大吧，你有例子嘛？

谢谢大家